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"Chapter 3





Kaplan took the wolf’s advice and headed in that direction, hoping that he would avoid the hunters. So he ran as fast as he absolutely could and found himself at the edge of a hill. He looks to the left…then to the right…and decides to go left. He trails up the hill to try and get back to the rest of the pack. And while he’s doing that, he’s spotted another wolf. He questions himself, “Why is he or she just standing there on that rock all by them self?”

So he walks up to the deserted wolf and asks, “Hello! My name is Kaplan. Why are you here all alone?”

The wolf answers, “Hello young one. I am Tundra. Please, leave me in peace.”

Kaplan is baffled, and says, “But…why?”

Tundra replies, “I need to be alone…”

Kaplan is still baffled, but he continues to ponder, “I wonder if everything is okay with him?”

“Okay, but are you sure you’re okay?” Kaplan asks.

“Yes…I will be fine. But you won’t if you don’t get back to your pack…” Tundra answers.

“Ok I – Wait, how did you know that I need to get back to my pack?” Kaplan asks, but he’s still baffled at the fact that he knew that.

Tundra answers, “I know everything that happens in this forest. Or…what is left of it.”

Kaplan is confused, but asks, “What do you mean “what’s left of it”?”

Tundra then takes a deep breath and says, “Well son, let me tell you a story of what happened to part of the forest… Long ago, when the birds were flying high and the wolves were howling at night, when suddenly my pack heard something in the distance. None of us were sure of what it was. But we wanted to find out. So I sent two of my scouts to search and find out. But…they never came back. So we figured they just got lost. But unfortunately, they weren’t lost…”

Kaplan then asked, “What happened?”

Tundra continued, “They were captured. We knew that the humans were going to come around and capture us sometime, but we weren’t expecting them then. We weren’t prepared for this sort of thing, so we tried to flee to the next forest. But it was too late; while I was off trying to find another trail. I found one but when I came back to this spot, there were tons of humans carrying my brothers and the rest of my pack. It was the most horrible sight I have ever seen. And so, this is where I lay until the day I die.”

Tears run down Kaplan’s face as the story ended. Kaplan then said, “Wow…that must be really sad for you, losing all your brothers and your pack. Well, I hope that everything goes well for you.”

“Thank you Kaplan. I hope that you don’t make the same mistake that I did.”

Kaplan answers, “Believe me…I won’t…” And then continues his way back up the hill.





The pack is still waiting for Kaplan’s arrival. But they find that some of the pack members have been already captured by the hunters.

Mallard is shivering. “I’m scared…” And yells, “CAN WE GO NOW?”

Timber turns around quick and says, “Alright, come on…let’s go before we get caught.”

The rest of the pack members run down the other side of the hill, hoping they don’t get caught either. But they were too late. The hunters were already in range to shoot them or capture them with the nets that they were carrying.

Rolland jumps out from the bushes, and yells, “RUN!! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!”

They all scream in panic. They’re thinking, “What the hell do they want with us?”

Rolland yells, “Get to the other side of the mountain! I’ll try to distract them.”

They all run down the hill hoping that Rolland can hold them off long enough.

Rolland starts to run down, watching them to make sure no one gets hurt. Then runs back up to the top where the hunters can see them. The hunters stop, they look up at the wolf howling at the sky.

The hunters get their guns into position. And fire, Rolland dodges all the attacks, but gets shot in the knee.

One of the hunters yells, “HE’S DOWN…HE’S DOWN!! …Get’m boys!”

The rest of the pack notice Rolland falls down, Winter runs to help, but one of the hunters shot a bullet into the air to scare him off. Winter jumps in fright, and runs back to secure the other pack members.





Kaplan finds himself at the top of the hill, overlooking the Allurer Pack. The sky turns black, the clouds drift away, and the moon is full. Kaplan’s body desires to howl at the moon. But he’s trying to fight it, but…it doesn’t work. He howls and signals to the hunters that he’s still alive. The hunters are now surrounding the right side of the forest from any trespassers. Kaplan still manages to slip away from them and runs down the other side of the hill to catch up with his fellow wolves.

The Allurer Pack finally comes to a halt; they are all tired and sweaty from all the running. Mallard is still as jumpy as can be, even though the others are panting and trying to catch their breaths.

Mallard turns around and gasps.

Timber walks up to him and says, “Mallard…what is it? What do you see?”

Mallard answers, in excitement, “IT’S KAPLAN!! HE’S BACK!!”

All the wolves jump in rejoice that Kaplan is coming back.

Kaplan runs up to the pack and says, “Miss me?”

They all run up to him and hugs him in happiness.

His mate spots him and cuddles up to him, “I thought I lost you, Kaplan. Is everything alright?”

“No…no it isn’t… Hetman…he…died…”

“Oh my gosh…what happened?”

“Well…while you all were running up the mountain; one of the hunters shot Rolland in the knee and he fell to the ground. I heard his cry and came to his rescue. I took him into the forest and behind a bush so that we wouldn’t be seen. And he told me to let him be, but I just wouldn’t listen. I was still trying to find a way to help him live. But it was too late. His last words were “And if I die, tell everyone that I will miss them and hope that everything goes well, no matter what happens. And tell my wife that……I love her.” And then his head slowly and softly touched the ground…and…that was it.”

Hetman’s mate starts to break down crying because of the loss of her husband. She was devastated of the loss of him, so she just walked away in agony, “Just leave me alone.” She says this as the pack watches her, walk away in agony.

Kaplan says, “Timber…”

“Yes Kaplan. What do you need?”

“I need a favor, I need you to go out and watch her. Protect her if you will, make sure that she doesn’t get captured and that you don’t get captured. Is that too much to ask?”
“What do you think I can’t do simple tasks like this? Is there some force in this world that is keeping you from making positive comments about me? Or are you just some hypocrite or you just like to make a mockery of me?”

“No, that’s not what I said. Stop trying to put words in my mouth! You know that I don’t appreciate when people put words that I don’t or didn’t use into my mouth.”

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Chapter 4





Mufasa, Sarabi, and the other lionesses are now walking away from one of the last battles between Mufasa and Scar.

“Your brother is a real pain in the butt, you know that right?” Sarabi says, very angry at him.

“Yeah…I know. But he is my brother and I’m one of the people that had to deal with him earlier in life you know!”

“That’s true… Umm…Mufasa?”

“Yes Sarabi honey?”

“Was Scar always like that, I mean…evil?”

“Unfortunately…yes. He was the only cub in our Pride to get himself into trouble. He also got other people into trouble, but not as often as getting himself into trouble. And that, in a sense, “Way of life” if you may, carried on with him until today. He was very jealous at the fact that my father picked me to take the throne instead of him. And I understand that he’s mad, but he doesn’t have to try and kill me for it!”

“Well, what would you do if you were in his position?”

“I would never even think about being the way that Scar acts like. Never in my entire life.”

“Now…DID I EVER SAY THAT YOU MORON?????”

“No…”

“Well then!” Growls softly; then continues her sentence. “As I was saying, if and only if you were in his position, would you do the same?”

“Well…I guess so…Maybe… I don’t know…”

“Well then, you have no right to complain or mock what he is doing!”

“Yes honey!”

Mufasa, Sarabi, and the rest of the lionesses walk back to Pride Rock just as Scar and the hyenas walk back to the Elephant Graveyard in shame of being beaten by Mufasa and the lionesses once again.

“Man I hate coming home and thinking that Mufasa beat us again. I just hate it so much, I just feel like –“

“Hush my minion, one day, we will be the stronger force and kill Mufasa and finally claim what is rightfully mine… the throne!”

“And when will that day be, because you said that the last time and look at where we are at now!”

“Don’t get smart with me. You know what you need Shenzi, PATIENENCE! We just need to wait for the right opportunity and take advantage of it!”

“Well it better come soon, because I’m getting tired of feeling this way…”

“SILENCE!! Just wait…just wait…our time will come to rise up!”

“I’m really hungry, Scar. What’s there to eat?”

“You want something huh?”

“Yes.”

“Well then……GET IT YOURSELF YOU IMBACILE!”

“Fine…gosh. You don’t have to be so mean all the time Scar!”

“Well, get use to it. It’s my nature!”





Meanwhile, at Pride Rock, Mufasa and the other lionesses are sitting and lying around relaxing. Sarabi is pacing the floor thinking, “What is Scar planning? What happens if he attacks again, which I know that he will? But how are we going to face him then?”

Sarabi walks up to Mufasa and asks politely, “Mufasa…what are we going to do if Scar comes back to attack us?”

“Well…I guess we can…”

“Thank you, I rest my case. We have nothing planned for the next time he attacks. We don’t know when to expect the next attack. It could be anytime! So get up of all your lazy butts and think of a plan!”

“But I was—“

“NOW!!!”

Mufasa and the other lionesses are getting up as fast as they possibly can to think of this great plan.

One of the lionesses says, “Well isn’t she bossy?”

Sarabi hears the whisper and says, “Say what?”

The lionesses replies, “Oh, nothing…nothing at all…”

“Well, I’m going to go out and get some food. I’ll be back soon, okay?”

They all reply, “Okay…” And go back to thinking of a plan to get try to keep Scar and his army of hyenas away.

Mufasa asks, “Well…anyone have any ideas?” He hears dead silence, the only thing he hears are birds chirping in the sky.

“Umm…HELLOOOOO!”

“Yes Mufasa?”

“Did anyone just listen to me just three seconds ago?”

“Uhh…nope!”

“WHY NOT??? Well, you should of. Because I said that I need ideas. Sarabi could be coming back and minute and I’d like for her to know that we weren’t just sitting around doing absolutely nothing! I want her to know that we actually did something productive! You understand? I need ideas, answers, anything!!!”

“Well we could just use Zazu as a look-out and then if he is coming, then we use that one technique…what was it again... It’s at the tip of my tongue…”

“Are you thinking of sneak attack?”

“YES! That’s it. Thank you!”

Mufasa paces, and then decides, “Fine, we’ll go with that plan. Then if that fails…well…well…you know…we’ll think of something.”

And just as Mufasa and the lionesses perfected their plan, Sarabi comes walking into Pride Rock with legs of zebras in her mouth, dropping them onto the floor.

“Well…did you think of a plan, Mufasa?”

“Why it just so happens that we just finished putting the finishing touches on it. You see what we are going to do is this, --“

“Upp Upp Upp! Say no more. I don’t really need you to tell me what the plan is. Just tell me when it’s time for you to do so.”

“But you…But…WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT WOMAN?!?!?!?”

“Excuse me? Are you talking to me?”

“Yes I’m talking to you. All you wanted us to do while you were gone was make up a plan on how to get rid of Scar and the hyenas if they want to launch another attack on us and now you don’t even want to hear it! That’s preposterous!”

“What do you mean that’s “preposterous”? If I don’t want to hear it, I don’t want to hear it. I’m just tired, so leave me alone unless it is an emergency. And not like last time where I was sleeping and you woke me and some of the other lionesses just because you and some other guys were hungry. So don’t try to pull that stunt again!”

“Okay, fine… Jeez, you don’t have to be so harsh all the time!”

“Well with you Mufasa, I do.”

“You know what?”

“I don’t know…what?”

“I love you!”

Sarabi awes and snuggles up to him as she walks past him to go and sleep.

Mufasa roars out into the Pride Lands hoping Zazu hears him. I then watched this bird in the distance flying toward Pride Rock. He just sits and waits for him to fly over.

Zazu finally gets to Pride Rock and settles down on a nearby rock and asks, “Yes sire?”

“I have…a job for you.”

“And what exactly does this task consist of may I ask?”

“Why nothing big or extraordinary. All I want you to do is…umm…come closer, I don’t need anyone to hear this.”

“Okay…”

“Alright, this is exactly what I want you to do; I want you to keep watch over these Pride Lands and make sure that no hyenas or Scar gets into these sacred Pride Lands. And in the event that you do find him or the hyenas roaming around in these lands, fly back immediately and let me know, so that we can end this war once and for all time.”

“Aye-aye Mufasa! I will get on it right away!”

Zazu then lifts off of the ground and flies out into the clear blue sky. Mufasa watches, and then walks back inside.





Sarabi then finally wakes up from her long and wonderful slumber, when suddenly Mufasa roars and yells, “THE HYENAS ARE BACK! WE NEED TO GET THEM OUT OF HERE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! GET UP NOW!?!?!”

Sarabi gets up, as if there was a fire and says, “Well you don’t have to wake or scare everyone else that is NOW GETTING UP!?!?!”

“Well excuse me! I didn’t notice that matters had to wait until you were all ready and awake!!!!”

“Who the hell do you think you are talking to? Let me get this through that enormous and thick head of yours, I happen to be your mate, you understand that right or was that too hard to comprehend?”

“I understand…HEY!!!”

“Yeah well, get over it. Anyway as I was saying, I am not and never going to be one of your buddies that you can talk to however you want. Get it straight, I am a woman and would like to be treated with respect. Not how you have been treating me lately. So, you have one of two options, you can either get your act straightened out or you can leave these Pride Lands and never come back.”

“Can I have the second option please?” After that been said, he smirks with a devious smile.

“WHAT THE –“

“I was just kidding, calm down. You know that I would never leave you no matter what! …You do…don’t ya?”

“Oh…” Then wipes her forehead with her paw, then says, “Yes, I just didn’t think of it right this moment.”

Zazu flies into the middle of this conversation and says, “Now, I would hate to waste this wonderful little moment you are having, but there are HYENAS IN THE PRIDE LANDS!!!”

“Well then…” Then both reply, “Let’s go!”

Mufasa runs ahead with Zazu flying over him in the sky, just as Sarabi is rallying the lionesses to go into the Pride Lands to confront the hyenas.

They all are now 50 yards away from them and Mufasa motions everyone to stop. He turns, lowers his body to the ground and everyone else does the same. Mufasa then whispers to the Pride, “Let us watch these…morons look for their lunch, the wait for the right moment…then…BAM! We catch them and lure them back to the Elephant Graveyard.”

Sarabi and the other lionesses nod their heads in agreement and keep the silence while watching them.

“What the heck is going on here, Banzi?”

“Oh, and I’m suppose to know everything about where the animals are?”

“Well YES!!! Didn’t I tell you before to go and find some food for us to munch on? Or did you just not listen to me and sent us where-ever you wanted to go?”

“I went, and then got tired…”

“YOU IDIOT!!! You were suppose to go out and find some food, but noooo you had to go out and forget that you even had to go out there, took a nap and went back home! This is the last time I trust you anymore, I trust Ed more than you, and he’s more stupid than you are! I just can not believe this!”

“Well, excuse me madam! I didn’t know that you were the big boss lady around here!”

“What, haven’t you noticed that—wait a minute, now when did I say that I was the big “boss” lady. So get your fact straight!”

Mufasa jumps out of the shadows and says, “Well…well…well…what do we have here?”

“Oh no, it’s MUFASA!!!”

The rest of the lionesses and Sarabi jump out of the shadows after Shenzi, Banzi, and Ed are shivering with fear.

“What’s the matter, cats got your tongue?” Sarabi asked the terrified hyenas.

“Uhh…well…Got to go!” Then as they start to run off, Mufasa and some of the lionesses form a circle around them to close in on them for questioning.

Mufasa asks, “What the hell are you doing here, for one?”

“Well…uhh…you told us—“

Just as they were finishing their sentence, Mufasa interjects by saying, “Not to ever come into our Pride Lands! And what did I say was the consequence for breaking the rules…?”

“Uhh…I don’t really remember.” Ed starts to laugh, Shenzi and Banzi looks at him, very perplexed. Banzi asks, “What the hell are you laughing at, Ed?”

“Hee-Hee-Hee…Hee-Hee-Hee…” Then out from the grass, Scar and a couple other hyenas jump out behind him. “Ahh…we meet again Big Brother. Nice to see you…” He said sarcastically.

“What the hell are your little “hyenas” doing in MY Pride Lands?”

“Well…I don’t know…Why don’t you ask them…” He then glanced over to the left at Shenzi, Banzi, and Ed.

“Okay then, what the—“

Then just as Mufasa starts his interrogation, Sarabi interrupts by saying, “Hell are you idiots doing here? This isn’t where you belong, so buzz off.”

“Excuse me, Sarabi. I was in the middle of interrogating these hooligans!!”

“Well, I hate them so I interjected. But anyway, it’s fun to torment you!”

“Hey!”

“It’s okay, I still love you anyway. I do it out of love!”

“Yeah…sure you do!”

“What are you talking about?? I love you and you know it!”

Zazu flies in between both Mufasa and Sarabi and says, “Now I really hate to ruin this wonderful little conversation, but AREN”T WE GOING PENALIZE THESE FIENDS???”

“Oh yes…right…uhh…Sarabi, do you want to take the honors?”

“No, but I bet YOU WOULD!!!” While she is screaming at him, motioning to him that he needs to take the astonishing role of punishing the moronic hyenas.

“Okay, this is what I want you to do, you have two options; you could either leave now and never and I mean never come back.”

“Umm…” Shenzi said. “Is there a second option?”

“NO YOU MORONS!!! YOU NEED TO LEAVE IMMEDIATELY!!!”

“Oh, okay!” Then Shenzi, Banzi, and Ed then run out into the sunset as it falls.

Scar then thought for a minute, “Why must those idiots of a henchman fail me once more?? Just wait till I get back there…just wait!!”

“Well…I guess I must attend my moronic henchman. So I must part.”

“Not so fast, Scar. I need to speak with you.”

“What the hell do you want now, Mufasa?”

“You don’t talk to your elders in that way! Respect me as you always did!”

“Like it really matters anyway.”

“...Anyway…You need to do me a favor…KEEP THOSE IDIOTS OUT OF MY PRIDE LANDS!!! Or you wish you’ve never been born!”

Scar just keeps the silence, and walks away following the hyenas that failed him one more time.

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