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Rozalyn
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Post subject:  Posted: Sun May 06, 2007 12:15 pm |
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Saba watched as Cinder ran over to Thorn, and start to circle him, holding her tail directly in front of his nose. Enough to make Saba run over and interrupt thier little moment. " Hey Thorn, I saw you race. You were awesome." Saba said in the most seductive tone she could. She caught Cinder's eye, noticing how angry she was mad Saba laugh inside. Cinder then went back to her more ladylike appearance. "Well hello Saba, ahem shouldn't you be getting back to daddy dearest over there?" Cinder said smirking. Saba then turned and indeed saw her father heading right for them. Suddenly both Saba and Cinder noticed that Thorn was not with them anymore, that was due his brother Coal's arival. Thorn and Coal were bitter enemies, The ladies knew that, but they never saw them fight. Balto quicky showed up and broke through the mass of the 2 sibling brother's and sisters, but Balto could'nt break the 2 apart. "Move!" Balto turned and saw Roxy charging right through the dogs, and pushing Balto out of the way, quickly seperate the 2 huge rivals. " All of you little delinquents better get back to the house now before all of you face some powerful hurt!" Roxy said in a furious tone. She was used to dealing with these fights by now, but Balto was still in shock at the fact that she was so quickly abl eto come between the 2 dogs that were twice her size. And when everything seemed to be calm again, Balto suddenly hear a scream. He and the other dogs ran to the sound to find...
Yeah, i'll never give up on the cliffhangers! forgive me if this part is a bit odd and short. More coming soon!
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Rozalyn
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Post subject: Posted: Sun May 06, 2007 11:31 pm |
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i am gonna try to work on the paragraph thing, a lot of people asked about that with my other story, the only trouble with that is that most of the post are only on one thought, so it's harder to make paragraphs.
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Post subject: Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 8:28 pm |
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Rozalyn wrote: i am gonna try to work on the paragraph thing, a lot of people asked about that with my other story, the only trouble with that is that most of the post are only on one thought, so it's harder to make paragraphs.
well I kinda had trouble reading what it said...
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Lady Vader
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Post subject: Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 7:33 pm |
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looks interesting. I haven't read the 1st one, but I'd like too. Care to give me the link to your fanfic gallery?
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Rozalyn
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Post subject: Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 11:14 pm |
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don't have 1 yet. that was my first fic, and it was done on the forums, but ill send you a link soon.
and to all, the characters pics will be up soon!
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