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(Yeah that sounds great, and I like the idea about two leaders, you will have to tell me what you called it when you post it so I can join. Also I will be one of the group of cats, I can't wait to get started. Oh and by the way, I am going to be posting a rp called Broken Lines sometime soon, it is about a parallel world where there are no humans and wild cats can speak and have their own cities etc. There are 6 cats who have to basically save their world from shadows that steal your soul, I can reserve a place for you if you want)

'Yeah, fine, sounds like fun' Karba mumbled, he didn't sound very excited.
'Ok then, Shar and Dawn can join us at the river, we should have some food by then' Jaka said, and started towards the river to try and hunt for rabbits or something.

(I will tell you when i'v posted it up, and I will reserve your slot because i'm only letting a maximum of 8 people join)

'I suppose, but deer are hard to catch, we would have to find one first and then ambush it, that means working as a team' Jaka said, 'now does anyone have any idea ho to track?'
'I do, don't you?' Karba said with a slight laugh to his voice. Whoever heard of a wolf that can't track, it's instict he thought to himself.

'Yes, that sounds...perfect' Shar said, grinning back at her sister, 'they are separated now, I will tell Jaka and you tell Dawn, we can't have any of THAT kind of stuff in our new pack.' Shar gave her sister another grin and then quickly followed Jaka.
Karba followed off after his brother, the thrill of the hunt making his eyes blaze. He was chasing after the limping deer he had spotted, he couldn't see any other weak ones and that deer was big enough to feed all of them. 'Trooper, help me take it down' he yelled over the stamping hooves.
Jaka followed the petals, they led behind the tree and then settled by a small lake. Jaka looked into the clear surface, hoping he would see his sister's face again, she had seemed so grown up. After he had been sitting there for a while and nothing happened, he sighed and was about to stand up when he thought he heard a voice.
Darkness. Coming quickly. It invades the minds of the weak, of those who already harbor evil thoughts. There is but one you can trust now, she will soon also turn to the darkness. Find her. Save her.
Jaka shook his head. The voice had said her, was it someone he knew, maybe it was Shar, or Dawn, or it could even be Darla.

(Would it be ok if Shar tells him that Dawn hates him but he doesn't believe her and manages to get to Dawn before Darla tells her)

(I saw, I didn't think you would enter Kaala! And I was reading your fanfic about Kaala and you use the name Brahma Could you put Brahma (c) me because I might make him into a proper character, if you do then you are welcome to use him and I can help you out with bits of your fan fic as well)

'Hey Jaka' Shar called. Jaka looking up at her, he seemed puzzled. 'Jaka I am so glad I found you, I'm so sorry, I was talking to Dawn and she said...well...she said she hated you and never wanted to speak to you again' she said, trying to look sad. She watched Jaka's face go from puzzled to shocked, and then without a word he ran off towards Dawn and Darla.
How can this be happening, is this what the voice was warning me about Jaka thought as he rushed towards Dawn. He could see Darla with her, and he wondered if it was already too late. With a sudden burst of speed he didn't know he had, he managed to get to Dawn and Darla. He skidded to a stop in front of Dawn, nearly crashing into her, and blurted out 'is it true?'
Karba glanced at his brother and nodded. He leapt at the deer, which was down to walking speed by this time, and landed on it's back. The deer bucked and kicked, but Karba held on and bit the deer round the neck. He twisted his head to one side sharply, and felt the deer's neck snap. He jumped off of the deer as it fell to the ground, dead. He stood in front of it for a while, panting, and then collapsed onto his side from exhaustion.

(Sounds great, I would be happy to help, the start bit was great so far, but it could be done even better as everyone said in their comments, but as I said I would be happy to help any way I can)

Karba heard the commotion and walked over to the group. He could hear everyone arguing and shouted as loudly as he could 'everyone quiet, I want you all to shut up and explain.' He let his head flop down from tiredness and then his body followed, but he still glared at everyone.
Shar skidded to a stop a short way away from her siblings and Jaka, and instantly hung her head low in guilt. Uh oh, rumbled she thought, but held her head up again and walked into the group as if nothing was happening. She sat down next to Darla without saying anything.
'Karba I'm not sure what is going on, Shar told me that Dawn said she hated me for some reason and never wanted to talk to me again, so I came to ask her if it was true and Darla said it was and told me to leave' Jaka said, glancing around nervously, and then back down to Karba who had flopped to the floor.