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Post subject: Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 6:39 pm |
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Now that Natalya knows about Cris, she's going to challenge Seregy? Guess, she's finally knows about what it means to grow up! *Mutters, took her long enough!*
At least Amber is willing to stick around and help out the scouts of Niju's pack.
So, Cris has seen his dead brother who has a message for him. One that could benefit everyone? Cool!
Good chapter! Update soon! 
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Post subject: ix Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:52 am |
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Now, let’s take look how Drift Pack and Buck pack are going...
_________________ Long Live the Scar! = "You know, Ray. Inuit have ways of dealing with extreme conditions. Ruling out cannibalism, we have two options."
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Post subject: IX. All Dogs go to Hell Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:53 am |
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IX. All Dogs go to Hell
Steele woke up about midday. Recent day he had been practicing with pack, what exhausted him hard. Moreover - ache in paws increased caused insomnia for most of the night. But when sleepy malamute opened his eyes quickly he felt growing anger on Peninsulans and Bucks that they hadn’t awoken him. He slowly stood up, take a look ion cave, ready to scold first spotted wolf. But no one was there.
Steele went out from cave (he wanted to run, but aching paw turned that effort into just slow march) and saw that both packs were gone. The message that Niju scratched on pine trunk in front of entrance was clear. It was a sign of war.
“I can’t believe it!” snorted malamute. “Again Niju thinks he is a smart alec!” He burst in laughter but after few seconds stopped, narrowed his eyes and sniffed the fresh tracks.
About ten hours. So it would be hard, but he still had some chance to catch them. Hobbling malamute set off west trying to avoid basing on front-left paw.
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Cris woke on dawn and instantly continued his pursuit. It turn out to be harder than he thought, because both Conquerors Pack (dog sensed well they tracks) and Natalya started to stray. Wolves made a turn north, passed the brink of Sandy Range and then turned once again and back to the west. It looked like Sergey was looking for something and when he didn’t find, directed back to the shore. Hoping that he was right, Cris decided to risk and make a shortcut, by crossing hills.
He was still confused by his nightly vision, but he was close to believe that all was true. Even running on Sandy Range we was sensing some presence, reminding him dead brother. That unseen specter seemed to guiding him, finding the easier way. At least Cris believed that – he was running fast and firmly in area he had been never before. Additionally the vision somehow calmed him down – none of his problem was solved but dog knew he wasn’t alone.
Finally Cris reached the bed of some unnamed river. It was mountain torrent, coming down from Bears Range then floating next to hills he was going. Smelling strong scent of wolves in the air, dog with relief entered frozen surface of wide river. Frosts of recent nights iced it solidly, at least near the banks. So Cris was speeding on that comfortable route, still sniffing for well known scent. About midday he sensed it right in front of him.
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Pack stopped and was looking on leader with questioning stare. But Sergey was furious and paid no attention on his charges. And if he did, he would probably felt a bit uncertain – there wasn’t any intention in that, but wolves instinctively divided into two groups – newcomers and original Drifts. Both teams were seeing that scene from slightly different perspective. Strays were just waiting what their leader would do. Drifts looked on daughter of their old chief with expectations.
Natalya was on the road west, just next to river’s cliff. She was looking with decisive stare on Sergey and her teethes were bared. She had changed for those few days and all pack, especially brown-furred alpha knew it well.
“Welcome, my dear.” Said Sergey, covering his anger with venomous kindness. “Are reconsidered your... problems and went back?”
“Yes and no.” replied Natalya. “I reconsidered problems I have and understood that only serious one is you!” and added with louder and more willful voice. “And I haven’t leave the pack. Only you left the rightful leader.”
“Crack.” Whispered Sergey. “Get her, but don’t kill her.”
“I don’t know, boss...” murmured black-furred. “But I think you was challenged.”
Sergey looked on beta with anger. Crack smiled and in that smile all turned out to be clear. Wolf wasn’t loyal to alpha as he wasn’t loyal to anyone. He was just waiting for his chance... Maybe with few leaderess he would become an alpha male?
“You will regret that.” Gasped Sergey, setting off ahead.
“I doubt, sir. I’m not sentimental one.” Replied beta with irony.
“Sergey, stand and fight!” called Natalya. Brown-furred went before ranks of wolves and came to bitch.
“What the hell possessed you!” murmured quietly. “I will kill you...”
“Are you sure?” smiled Natalya. Sergey’s jaw dropped. “I’m sure you won’t. I could win and even if I don’t you still need me. Instead of your loyal subjects.” She smiled and pointed on laughing Crack and indifferent Olga.
“You expect to rule them?” asked alpha. “They gave no heck about you when I exiled you.”
“The same as for you now.” Noticed silver-furred. “But I’m a female after all. I still haven’t chosen a mate. So I hope at least for one, loyal ally.”
“Ow...” Sergey snorted. “I don’t recognize you! You started talking like touch one. What how it could be that you - so sweet pup – became so cynical?”
“I had a good tutor.” Smiled Natalya, although the careful observer could notice a two tears in corners of her eyes. “So, let’s fight. If I win, I will consider making you an alpha. But if you win you will have no other choice than making me mate and alpha female if you want to rule that lot.”
Sergey burst in laughter and was laughing for over minute. Then pinned his furious stare in Natalya’s eyes.
“Cool!” he snorted. “But what about if I accidentally kill you?”
“You have to try.” Replied silver-furred with still firm voice, although yet without that overwhelming certainty.
So Sergey attacked without any more warning. He pounced on enemy with outstretched paws, intending to quickly pin her down and immobilize her. But Natalya seemed to wait for that. She jumped aside and wolf hit just snow on the verge of road. Impetus pushed brown-furred further and he, slipping, got to the cliff. In spite of desperate moves, he fell behind the edge and second later hit the ice below.
Natalya was ready for that. She jumped down, landing firmly on stunned wolf and grabbed his neck. Although he was much stronger and more experienced the temporally shock of fall made him defenseless for several seconds. It was enough for Natalya to hardly grab enemy’s throat and clasp it. Steel muscles of Sergey made a unbreakable barrier for silver-furred’s fangs, so she was unable to crush his trachea. But firm grip of bitch started to slowly chocking a giant male. When he understood that danger he made an impulsive attempt to free himself. He fell down on side, overturning Natalya with him and pushed the ice with all paws. So they both slid about ten feet out from the shore. There river was turning into backwater. Wide pool of still water, all covered with ice, was about hundred meters wide. But current of river was still alive under that layer. Most probably in center of backwater ice was thin and fragile. Sergey was hoping he would scare enemy, but he was wrong.
Silver-furred was still grasping his neck, in spite that wolf was crawling to the center of pool. Slowly losing his consciousness alpha knew that he would be killed by weaker female if he wouldn’t stopped her plan quickly. That why with dimmed mind he was still marching to the thin ice, despite of louder and louder sounds of crack under their paws.
Conquerors Pack divided. When Drifters noticed that their rightful alpha had a chance to win they started to gather in group. In reply newcomers formed another club on the other side of road. Olga stayed on the road, uncertain what to do. She was sure she couldn’t hope for any privileges among strays however she felt that Crack surely wouldn’t kill her. For the other paw she offender or discouraged most of Drifters. She looked helplessly on Crack.
“So what will you do, Olga?” asked Sasha with strong voice. “Decide: we or them!”
“Touching.” Smiled Crack, looking in Olga’s eyes. “But we still have a number high ground.”
Beta took a quick look on old pack. Sasha formed Drifters in ranks, taking a leadership, but leaving one place in front free – as it was waiting for Natalya.
“You were Alexander’s beta.” Gasped gamma. “And now you are Natalya’s... whatever you do.”
“Come with us.” Called black-furred. “Fourteen to twenty five jaws! We will win!”
“I’m sorry, Crack...” whispered Olga and stepped to Drift rank.
“No... that I’m who is sorry.” Replied dark-furred with almost sad voice. Then he wagged his tail, giving a signal to attack. Wolves set off to charge, when...
Ice cracked.
Sergey with his last effort dragged Natalya almost to the middle of backwater. She noticed the danger but she also knew that loosing enemy meant almost death-sentence. She had no chance with Sergey in close combat so she was still holding hic throat hoping she would finally stun him or choke him. But when ice broke below her paws she lost her grab.
They didn’t fall into cold water. Both Natalya and Sergey managed to get on some big, solid drifts. Those two ice pieces were about five feet from each other, so enemies were on range of pounce. But they didn’t think about charging but desperately trying to maintain balance and not to fall to the frosty water. A look on river freed from ice-layer wasn’t soothing – smaller drifts were pulled under ice, because of strong current. If something gets under it had almost for sure float downriver.
“And whet now, sweety?” asked Sergey, panting, but quickly regaining his confidence. “I would say we have a draw. You prove to be worthy. How about our weeding plans?”
“We are not finished yet!” hasped Natalya.
“O my God!” snorted brown-furred. “Are bored by life? Now you have what you want. Let join me and as an alpha you will help me to conquer some territory for us!” He laid down on drift and put his paw to water. It seemed to be just random moves, but wolf started to row in solid ice direction. “It all came on your way, didn’t it? So let’s go to the shore and celebrate our alliance and... love...” smiled Sergey.
“At least...” snorted Natalya with growing anger., “Cris was lying in much more charming way!”
But then brown-furred jumped on integral ice-layer, trampled on it and pounced in she-wolf direction. All wolves on shore held their breathes seeing as giant male was hitting fragile bitch with all his mass and pushing her into water. Before Natalyta could reacted, she was under ice and Sergey jumped again on solid ground. But then came Cris.
Dog was running on frozen river, in last period jumping in long jumps, sliding on frozen layer to get there faster. He passed next to surprised Sergey but before brown-furred moved a paw, he was in zone of cracks. Without hesitation he jumped to the water and submerged. Thermal-shock was so rapid that dog initially felt nothing unusual. Just some powerful force pressed his chest, as if it was trying to crash him. With few moves of paws Cris swam under ice layer and grabbed unconsciousness Natalya. And then his reason called to him in terror.
Maybe it was an instinct, maybe some friendly spirits advised him – Cris submerged even deeper, bounced off on the bottom and holding Natalya tight in paws he hit the ice above him. Pain exploded in his head and back that pressed hard layer. But he broke it. Spitting water from mouth, Cris emerged in improvised ice-hole. Instantly he tired to raise white-furred and put her on surface but then he felt a resistance.
“Oh, no!” growled Sergey. “Before I know you are with her, I could let her live. But if she had a mate... well I do not like rivalry.” And he pushed them both again underwater.
Pack: or maybe better to say: both packs on shore howled. Conquerors in cheering, Drifts with rage. They set off to get on ice, but growl of strays team stopped them. Sasha halted the furious charge and turned to Sergey’s followers.
“You will pay for that!” she gasped, but before she gave a command to attack sounded a loud sound of cracking ice.
Surprised Cris however didn’t lose his cold blood, maybe thanks to fact it was very difficult to lose cold blood in so freezing water. He again submerged to the bottom, letting current took them. When they floated about twenty feet, he bounced from ground and again prepared himself for bump on forehead. He pierced the ice layer and they both found themselves with muzzles over water. Dog inhaled deeply and clenched Natalya’s chest. Silver-furred coughed and spit some water from throat. Fortunately she also took also a breath. So Cris, seeing Sergey running to them, submerged once again.
He knew it was extremely hazardous. They did it twice barely and both dog and she-wolf were quickly hypotherming. Paws of brownish-furred became more and more tired and senseless. But he managed to land on bottom and spring from it again.
“There!” called Olga, pointing another crack in ice. “They’re swimming!”
Drifts howled in triumph and Conquerors growled. Sergey was unable to chase escapers, because Cris efforts damaged whole ice layer and before brow-furred more and more crack appeared. So with anger he set off to the shore.
Meanwhile Cris and Natalya swam (or were took by current – depends how one looks) to the small island in the middle of backwater. Ice there was thin, so dog broke it with easy and pulled coughing Natalya on ground.
“Egh... what...”
“Hush, my dear.” Whispered Cris. “It all will be all right.” He nestled to her side, hoping to warm her... and himself too.
Sergey got to the shore and ordered.
“Crack! Get all forces and go to the isle!”
Conquerors uncertainly followed brown-furred and beta. But right after them went Drifters, still not ready to charge on more numerous enemy, but clearly intending it anyway. Conquerors circled the isle with rank, shielding it from incoming Drifters. Meanwhile Sergey and Crack went to shore. Alpha was looking on Natalya with view to kill.
“Cover us.” He growled. “And we will finish our job.” But then sounded a loud laughter from the shore. No one from Chukchi wolves knew it, but Cris knew it well.
“Niju!” whispered to ear of Natalya. “We are saved!”
All predator turned theirs stares to the shore. On road was standing a big groups of about thirty newcomers. Two alphas on lead – one black-and-white furred, second greyish, were looking on ice.
“All in one sack.” Smiled Niju. “I will be hard, but we will manage it. First take out that first, smaller group, closer to the shore.”
“No...” panted Cris, but he was too far to be heard by leader.
So Peninsulas and Buck went on ice and started to march towards Drifters. Seeing it, Sergey called aloud.
“Sasha! Are commanding your jaws?” When she didn’t responded, he added. “I propose an alliance... maybe even one-time deal. Together we still have serious supremacy. Put our recent argument... to ice and kill those rascals.”
“We have no other way.” Murmured Olga to Sasha’s ear.
“Drift Pack...” called gamma with uncertain voice. “Form a rank with... Conquerors.”
“Not good.” Murmured Dymitr, walking next to Niju and Flame.
“It could have been worse.” Replied at once father and son. Two ranks of four pack were closing each other.
Cris raised his head and licked Natalya’s cheek. She opened her eyes.
“You are back...” she whispered and smiled. “So it was real?”
“It is real.” Said dog with serious tone. “I love you.” She closed her eyes and cuddled harder to his side.
“So I’m more important than your mission?” asked with disbelief.
“Actually it doesn’t matter anymore...” murmured dog, looking on two groups of wolves, closing each other with bared teethes. “I’ve just failed my mission completely.”
But then Cris saw a blurry silhouette of Lucas, standing before him and with smile on his face pointing on the sky. Dog looked up and in the same moment he heard the sound of closing plane. Arashi’s and Gunnar’s vehicle was flying fast and coming to landing.
In very, very improper place.
“Pull up!” yelled Gunnar, trying to overscream the loud engine. “You can’t land here! The ice is cracked!”
But it was too late. Biplane touched icy layer on eastern edge of backwater and started to slide on it towards wolves and island. It was going quite well for first hundred yards. Then ice broke.
_________________ Long Live the Scar! = "You know, Ray. Inuit have ways of dealing with extreme conditions. Ruling out cannibalism, we have two options."
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Post subject: Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 1:12 pm |
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Good chapter!
Sergey is not gonna give up that much is obvious. Let's hope the Buckland and Pennuslia packs can stop the Conquerors and the Drifters unless Cris and Natayla do something first. So, the biplane has landed on the ice. Not good.
Update soon!
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Post subject: Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 5:42 pm |
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I just began reading 'The next Round (TCoL)'.
Better late than never.
First chapther
Off to a good start, some promissing charaters. I perticularly like Dahabu, for some reason I can't quite point out yet...
But it all happens kinda fast. Maybe a bit too fast...
_________________ Merry Christmas and/or happy holidays!
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Post subject: X/fast Posted: Tue May 01, 2007 8:00 am |
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BaltoLuver:
As You noticed, the young generation is still a bit lazy and childish, to the elder ones still have to mess things up. I wonder if like Niju’s performance and evolution of his philosophy.
Cogitor:
 most of readers complained that TNR plot is too stretched and too slow;)
I hope You find more likeable characters – this story is full of real freaks 
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Post subject: X. For Pack and Country Posted: Tue May 01, 2007 8:02 am |
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X. For Pack and Country
All wolves froze when unknown, screaming air-monster came from over the trees. It was speeding directly on centre of backwater, so tight ranks of pack got loosen as predators were preparing to escape. But plane touched the ice and starter to slow down. Drifters and Conquerors knew the deadly power of such machine, but they also knew that it is helpless on the ground. The only danger from that were human pilots. But every human apart of powerful rifle had also a throat to bite. The enemy on the ground was dangerous however vulnerable as any other creature.
“Look!” called Sergey with delight. “It will drown!”
Biplane was carving the ice layer by its skies. Cracks appeared under undercarriage but machine was to fast to fall in holes. Yet. Airplane was slowing down and it was sure that sooner or later it wouldn’t escape from crushed ground. More perceptive wolves knew it as well as humans in machine.
“Pull up!” yelled Gunnar. “Start it!”
“I can’t!” replied Arashi, grappling with joystick. “We are going too slow.”
“So drive to that island!” called Norwegian and turned his shift-stick right.
Wolves made a way for sliding plane. It braked just before insula but submerged into water and floats about teen yards before it. It slide on bottom few yards and stopped, touching shore with propeller. Whirling airscrew halted about five inches from laying Cris and Natalya.
“What the heck that means!” growled amazed Sergey. “Regroup and keep an eye on that humans. I guess we will have some extraordinary dinner.”
Isle was surrounded by three circles of wolves: Conquerors who were the closest, Drifters farther and Peninsulas with Bucks, who just were entering the ice. Seeing that Drifters started to getting closer to Strays. The dividing line seemed to be clear: locals and newcomers.
Gunnar and Arashi get out from plane’s wreck and jumped to the dry ground on isle. When Norwegian spotted whole gathering of predators around he instinctively grabbed his rifle and aimed.
“Stop!” called Japanese. “We haven’t enough of ammo. There is over seventy of them.”
“I have five rounds in clip, and twenty in backpack.” Reported Kaasen. “Your colts?”
“Twelve in barrels and twenty in sack.... what I left in plane.” He looked on drowning remnants of machine. “Still we have to small firepower, even if we would hit with every shot.”
“I guess they should run off after we start shooting.” Murmured trapper.
“I guess that wolves shouldn’t gather in so huge packs.” Replied doctor. “If I survive, I will shock the present biology... But what...” He noticed a pair of canines, who was lying on beach. Bitch was almost unconsciousness, lying motionlessly and dog barely raised his head to look on humans. In his eyes Japanese stopped a silent ask for warmness. “Gunnar, light a camp-fire!”
“Sure.” Murmured trapped. “Now it’s our only way of defence...” Then he noticed a wolf and dog. “Ow, and who are they? Malamute, here, in wild? With wolfbitch!”
“Something strange is going here.” Said Arashi, covering Natalya and Cris with his coat. “Give me your rifle and will keep an eye on that pack. And light a fire imiedately!”
Kaasen hadn’t to be told twice. With fast moves he cut some brush from fir and lighted it. Island was about twenty yards long and ten wide. It wasn’t many trees and bushes there, but fairly enough to easily make a solid fire and keep it for long. “About forty hours of real flame.” Estimated Norwegian in mind. “And that the time we need fix something to get alive from here.”
When trapper made a campfire, Arashi dragged dog and wolf closer to it. Wolves from around were looking on that indifferently or they were ignoring scene behind theirs backs, more focused on hostile packs. Only Niju looking on worried Flame said.
“It’s about Cris? Your brother-in-law is safe right now. And we can’t go for him, because humans have guns. We will retake him after we’ll deal with those strays. Right?”
“Right, father!” confirmed wolf with official tone. “We will crush them.”
In the other group fate of pair was more in concern. Drifts joined to Conquerors to defend from locals. But they were also looking on unconsciousness Natalya with fear. She was in paws of humans – dreadful creatures with lighting sticks. The only satisfied member of coalition was Sergey, sure that silver-furred wouldn’t get alive from humans grasp.
“So, what now?” asked Sasha with anger, looking on brown-furred.
“Call Crack and we will think.” Said Sergey and seeing that dark wolf came, continued. “We don’t have to love each other to cooperate. We have to rid out those humans and local wolves and then we will finish our argument. But then...” he smiled with grim smile. “I guess we could live in peace. When we kill that lot and subdue survivors, there will be enough of territory and food for both packs... Conquerors and Drifters.”
“But first we have to save Natayla!” growled Sasha with decisive voice.
“Hold your moose!” interrupted her Sergey. “I won’t risk a charge on armed humans. All I can promise that I won’t kill her when humans are here. And later we will finish our duel according to the laws.”
“But we must save her from those hunters!”
“Calm down... We will deal with locals, then wait for humans to freeze or starve. I bet Natalya would stand longer than they.”
Warmth slowly restores senses to both Natalya and Cris. They were lying under Arashi’s coat, to shocked to be confused. After few minutes of regaining the orientation, Natalya whispered to Cris ear.
“We are still alive.”
“And we will... nor now.” Said dog. “Those are friendly humans. It will be all right...”
“Except that our pack are about to slaughter each other...” whispered silver-furred. “And what you will do now?”
“I’m so sorry, I didn’t tell you everything from the start...” said Cris. “Few days ago I thought that I know with whom I am. Niju, that alpha is a friend of my father. His son is mate of my sister. My father...” he smiled with grim smile. “Is alive and probably will be here soon. To fight with your companions, although he doesn’t want that war. My mother and my sister are looking for help for local pack.”
“Cris...” whispered Natayla with tensed voice. She licked his forehead with sympathy. “I know I did bad, saying you all that. You have your own life... And I still wish to part of it, if we manage to do that... and if you still want that.” Dog smiled and their lips joined in kiss.
“Is that normal wolves behaviour?” asked a bit confused Gunnar.”
“Not more weird than all this mess around.” said Arashi, pointing on packs but also looking on pair of mates.
“By the way...” asked Norwegian. “Why that bitch doesn’t escape?”
“Her paw is twisted.” Replied doctor, pointing on one of silver-furred’s limb. “I will take care about that when I am sure she won’t bite my hand off.”
“Do what you think as best.” Replied Kaasen. “But cover me, I’m going for more wood.” He took his knife and started to saw a trunk of dwarf pine. It was exhausting work, but they had nothing else to do. Night was slowly coming to the river’s mouth. Norwegian knew that coming night would be frosty. Fire was a matter of life.
When Natalya and Cris finished their caress, dog looked on her and asked.
“How do you fell? Can you walk?”
“Hobble - yes. But I won’t be able to get thought that packs. If your decide not to stop me, Sergey would take that idea.”
“And he surely won’t let me go...” agreed Cris. “But wait, I’ll try to solve that as I can.” He stood, went on beach and howled to gathered wolves. “Niju, Dymitr, Sergey, Crack... listen to me!”
“Hold on, boy!” replied Niju. “We will take you when we finish off those strays.”
“Ow...” hissed Crack. “And where is your famous <American hospitality>?”
“Dormancing during the winter.” Called Flame and bared his fangs. “I’m ready, dad.” He added with quieter voice.
“I know it well.” Said Niju and smiled.
“WAIT!” cried Cris. “Why do want to fight? There still could be a peaceful solution.”
“No more, Cris.” Replied Niju. “They will not let us go.” He pointed with muzzle on humans on isle. Last rays of sun faded over the trees and cold wind awoke. “Don’t you get it? Why those Russian wolves came to us.”
“To rip your throat!” howled Sergey, but seeing serious stare of black and white alpha, he added. “Actually, we were being hunted all the time. We decided to find a new territory.”
“Exactly.” Nodded Niju. “And when more wolves come where, there will be less game for us all. So pack will hunt closer to humans seats... or even for humans animals. And even people of Alaska will start a massive hunts on us. The only way to prevent that... is to decide here and now, who is destined to live!”
“No!” called Cris. “It doesn’t end in that way.”
“Shut up, dog!” barked Sergey. “You know nothing.” Wind grew stronger, showering wolves and humans with some snow from trees.
“Cris...” whispered Natalya. “Is there any way to stop that?”
“If you forgave me, everything is possible.” He replied.
“I didn’t forgive you. You did nothing you must shame.” Said silver-furred. “I grew up in those days and saw that you did what you have to... But now... show me once again that my puppyish dreams are true... That there is some way to save us all.”
“Niju!” called dog. “How do you know you will win? Your wolves would die too!”
“But those who survive, will be strong and safe!” replied wolf, looking on Cris with decisive voice. “One, when I was just young and stupid youngster, my old alpha, Nava, taught me many important things. Initially I thought that as a wolf I’m the master of all life. But then, with him, I understood that we are just a part of a Great Design, the order we can’t oppose and we shouldn’t.”
“That means we have to kill each other?” yelled Cris.
“Don’t blame me.” Replied Sergey with innocent smile. “I want to kill you to get land for my pack. But I have nothing to do with those moonshine.”
“Yes.” Said Niju. “As the Nature intended. The strong will survive and the weak will die. I’m sorry, son, but there must be that way. You say we’re doing it because of humans? Yes and no. They are subjected to Grand Design too. If we follow it, they have to follow also. We can’t shun our fate, but stand it as proud and strong species. We walked this land before humans came here and we will walk it long after they will perish. But to do that we must follow the ways of Nature, as we were following for ages.”
“I think that is nonsense.” Added Sergey. “But we will fight anyway.”
“You will understand it soon.” Said Niju.
[“Survival” song. Tune is sublime and a bit scary. Melody of verses a bit resembles “Grand Design from WQ, except to totally different rhythm and structure.]
[Niju is standing on ice, in rank of wolves from Coalition. Next to him is Flame, looking almost like father. He looks on parent, from his face expression we see the pride and want to show his valour to the father. He also is still barring teethes to scare the enemy. His paws are a bit stretched, ready to charge on enemy. Niju sees this, smiles but then starts to declaim with serious voice:]
Now I saying what I was told When I was just a young fool There one way we can afford Being free by follow rules
[Music starts. Niju shows with paw the surrounding landscape. He goes ahead and gets to the line of Conquerors and Drifters. Although whey are growling on enemy’s leader, Sergey wage his tail to let him in. Old wolf passes the rank of adversaries.]
Since moment of a life-blood started in veins of this land We are following the route that draw on Earth the unseen hand It is guiding us still towards the perfection and the peak Being strong is heaven that we seek
[He comes closer to the island, carefully avoiding ice-cracks made by landing plane. When he is about twenty yards from shore, Gunnar raises his rifle and aims on him, but Niju jumps aside with unexpected speed.]
All this purge to reach salvation is to weakness cast away This is route for only those ones who could stand the trials I say This is one and only duty for the creatures to fulfil Stand and kill or to be killed
[Then he again comes to isle’s beach. Gunnar is still aiming on his and Arashi holds a flaming torch in his hand. But wolf seems be indifferent towards humans. On words < purge to reach salvation > he comes to air-hole and submerge his cut paw to cold water. Blood-spot is washed away, however we see on face of Niju that holding limb in water is very unpleasant. But he stands it with ease and shows Cris his cleared cut. He comes closer puts it on dog’s shoulder. On words < kill or to be killed > scratches his throat with a claw, of course making him no harm, but Cris follows wolf’s paw with stare.]
Chorus:
The survival of the fittest And for weakling just death’s call Call it cruelty for the weaker? That’s the fairest deal of all!
[He turns to all pack and sings with louder voice. He pushes Cris with his paw – dog falters due to surprise, but regains his balance and stands still and firmly.]
Rules are simple, immutable For one lives the other dies No more dishes on this table Than reach only, earthly prize
[Niju gets back to rank of newcomers. He chooses some she-wolf from rank. She is small and weak, possibly omega of pack. He pushes her, but she stands on spread paws, enduring that shove. She bares her teethes, but Niju just smiles, like he was proud of that.]
What is goodness if not power? What is beauty if not might? Cause for every blooming flower ten more wither with no light Does life really is the blessing, or we must deserve for it God created our fangs to tear the meat
[Then he comes to some other female – she is strong and is growling on old leader loud. He bends to her, as if he wants to kiss her. She snapped her jaws on him – Niju jumps back with laughter.]
You could sympathy the weakling, knowing you will fall one day But that tragedy on road-side just can’t lead you on astray And when my time some day will come – I won’t yell for any break That heroism all of you will someday make
[Niju comes to Crack, who is probably the strongest of Conquerors (along with Sergey). He pretends he pushes him, but in the same time he trips dark wolf with paw, so Crack falls down. Then Niju puts a paw on his forehead, but let him go after few seconds.]
Chorus:
The survival of the fittest And for weakling just death’s call Call it cruelty for the weaker? That’s the fairest deal of all!
[He is walking back to own pack, fare welled but hostile snaps of Conquerors and Drifters. His own wolves part before him with respect. Then the rank gets back to tight formation. Niju is again on lead, between Flame and Dymitr.]
By hell we’re fighting right now We’re ascending to divine With his instinct one understands Be the best means be alive
[Zoom-in on Flame’s face – he looks almost hypnotized by father’s song. When it ends, he turn to enemy with even greater fury in eyes. Music stops.]
“Shoot me down!” murmured Gunnar, looking on wolves in their sophisticated ritual and nudging Arashi’s side. “I thought that such a ridicules are only in those stupid books. But now I see it on my own eyes.”
“Sometimes I’m glad I have a myopia.” Replied Japanese and then a loud howl sounded.
“Steele!” called surprised Niju.
“Dad!” cried Cris with relief.
“Not only!” called Kitty, sitting on Steele’s back. “We are in right moment for cavalry, mister sled-one.”
“What a mess here!” barked malamute. “Son, we have to clean it up. You must bring your mother and sister here. I will make sure they won’t bite themselves to death.”
“I’ll do it, dad!” said Cris and bended down to lying Natalya. “Listen to me... I have to leave... But I’ll be back, I promise.”
“I believe you, my love.” She replied with weak voice. “Help them... and that way you will help me... you will help our.” She licked his cheek.
“So I’m going.” Repeated Cris. “Don’t be afraid of those humans. As I figured out they are friends of my father.” She nodded her muzzle and dog turned to west.
“Do you think we will let you go?” asked Sergey with genuine amaze.
“No.” replied dog and added quieter. “I hate baths!”
And then he ran to other side of isle, hit the ice with paws, breaking it. Instantly he jumped under and let current to take him.
“What the...” gasped Conquerors alpha, seeing the shade of floating dog right below his ranks.
“Quick!” called Steele. “Make him an air-hole!” Several Peninsulas and Buck starts to his the ice straight down-river from isle. After few hits ice cracked and Cris muzzle appeared. Wolves grabbed his fur with jaws and helped him go out from water.
“Funny thing.” Said Gunnar to confused Arashi. Actually Norwegian was also shocked, but whole situation seemed so weird for him that he decided to ignore any new wonders. “That malamute... He looks familiar...”
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And so, at 00.30 hour, I finally finished reading 'The next Round (TCoL)'.
Overal, I have to admit I liked the previous tales better (The Golden Queen and Scar's heir v.2); as the 'The next Round (TCoL)' plays out without any of the original TLK-cast and features radicaly different locations, I sort of felt detached.
But 'The next Round (TCoL)' cerainly had it's moments; the domstic-violence approach with Dhalimu was pretty original, and I can allways appreciaty a deceatefull, power-hungry demagogue like Mtanga: in real life, he would have made a 'fine' african dictator.
The revolutionaries lacked a bit in revolutionary spirit, but a band of anarchist, self-proclaimed tyranacides was a hilarious idea nontheless, if one reads past the drama for a decond.
This time around, the Kings of the Past were a bit more restrained; I like that.
The violence, though chaotic, was nicely dramatised and described with a certain detachement, giving the cold facts in a meticulous way; that contrasted nicely with the somtimes (neo)romantical feel I got when the characters were discussing ther love for the monarchs.
Good show... but the reactionary spirit shows.
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Good chapter!
Cris proves his great bravery again, only this time he becomes submerged under the ice. The humans were cool to save the lives of Cris and Natalya. At least Steele and the others got Cris up out of the ice and cold water.
Nicely done! Update soon! 
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Post subject: touching/reactionary-free-zone Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 6:31 am |
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BL:
So after some action now it’s time to some touching scenes of meeting after years...
C:
Well, thanks for honest review. I feared if brand-new cast of characters would be accept by readers. But if You liked at least some of them, I’m still somehow proud, because if I partially failed, it means also I partially succeeded;)
I hope that [good show] in TNR recompensed You those weaker moments and covered (at least partially) the reactionary spirit;)
What I can suggest is that in my Balto-stories I had absolutely no chance to add st. Thomas, de Maistre and co. to the tale.
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XI. Fathers and Sons
Few hours passes and wind grew stronger, bringing heavy snowfall. Actually the real storm was coming. Thanks to that frost wasn’t to severe but fresh snow was even greater danger for unprepared humans. Arashi and Gunnar were dressed properly for Alaska’s frosts but they had limited supplies and whet they had, had drown with plane. So they were lacking of food and ammunition and dwarf-pines from island could fuel their fire but wood was also limited. Around them was dark, October night and tens of wolves.
“Whatever will happen, I won’t kill that wolf.” Said Tazaku, correcting Natalya’s bandage.
“So you think we will be here long enough to get so hungry that we would consider eating her?” asked Kaasen. “Come on, somebody will get know something happened. Probably right now in Buckland they are thinking about searching us.”
“Probably.” Agreed Japanese. “But it’s useless. They have no airplane and journey with sled would take full two days... under condition they know where to go.”
“So they telegraph to Nenana, ask for air reconnaissance... Ow.” Stopped Gunnar with grim smile. “Yes, that could took a while. But now don’t think about it. Take a rest, until we have fire and I’m strong enough to keep the watch.”
“I will change you in few hours.” Promised Arashi and laid down next to fire. “Wake me up if they attack or I start to burn.”
But two circles of wolves were waiting in silence. Snow in the air made that night quite bright – no stars were seen but white layer on the ground and milky cover on the sky was glowing with mild, reflected light. Also glare of campfire was enlightening whole area. Gunnar was on watch. About two hours passed in peace but then trapped spotted some moving shadow. He nudged sleeping Japanese, waking him up immediately. Arashi raised his head, turned it in pointed direction and gasped with amaze.
“I can’t believe it too.” Agreed Kaasen.
Two silhouettes ware marching to the island. When they reached inner circle of Drifters and Conquerors they were greeted by hostile growls and barks. But they didn’t stopped. Ignoring scary jaw-snaps in the air, two shadows entered the circle. In mouths of both canines were bodies of does.
“We have to go back for more.” Murmured Steele, who was barely audible due to load in his mouth.
“What?” gasped Sahsha. “That many meat will last her for few days.”
“That is meat for humans!” replied malamute. “I had to lie we giving it Natalya, because it was the only way to make your companions let me in.”
“You’re witty one, sir.” Said Sasha. “But next time I suggest you explain me your plans.” They entered circle of light from fire. Two humans froze, falling silent and lowering their guns. Then they called.
“STEELE!” cried Gunnar.
“STEVE!” cried Arashi.
“THAT’S MY DOG!” they called together.
“Ow, so you are living double life all the time?” smiled Sasha and put her load in front of humans.
“Some sort.” Replied dog. “Maybe even triple.”
Then he threw down the meat and went to humans. He lowered his ears and open his mouth, craning his tongue. He laid down in snow. First Gunnar, carefully stretched his arm and touched malamute’s head. Steele licked his glove. Then Arashi came and put his hand on dog’s side.
“It can’t be...” he said. “Steele? I’m sure that is my old sled-team leader, Steve!”
“That’s Steele! My best guide, whom I lost six years ago and saw three years ago in forest...”
“You said <Six years ago>?” amazed Japanese. “That the time I found Steve in Buckland...”
“Go back.” Ordered malamute to Sasha. “Family reminiscences could take a while. Get your wolves and hunt something for Natalya.”
“Right, sir.” Replied she-wolf and disappeared in darkness, while humans were still petting Steele and trying to create the true history of dog. Finally malamute barked.
“Ow, right...” agreed Arashi. “We must look on those wolves. You have luck they let you in...”
“O, my God!” gasped Guunar. “They left theirs preys! For us... or for that wounded bitch.” He looked on friend with amaze in his stare. “Arashi, you are the educated man. Tell me, how it is possible.”
“You are not scientist.” Replied doctor. “YOU tell me how it could be. I can only explain you that is impossible.”
“At last, master.” Murmured Steele, cuddling to Gunnar’s side. “I know you can’t hear me but I hope you feel it. That is for that in Nome. Now I’ll do what I have failed there. Save you... or die trying.”
“All right.” Said Japanese. Get the meat, cut some raw part for that wolf and let grill the rest.”
When humans started to prepare the meal, Steele came to Natalya and woke her with gentle nudging on her nose. She opened her eyes and noticed malamute in front of her.
“Who are... You look like Cris!”
“Or even more handsome!” smiled dog. “Nice to meet you, I’m Cris father. Did I understand it well? Are we going to be family?”
“If we survive this, I would like to.” Replied wolf.
“Another wolf in family.” Murmured Steele. “God has His own sense of humour. But anyway, how you paw?”
“Good... I mean: bad, but humans bandaged it.” She replied. “Do you think that Cris will make it?”
“I think he has no other choice.”
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What was just pleasant snowfall on shore-lowland, higher in mountain, on Green Range, turned out to be real storm. Cris decided to take the shortest straw to Buckland, whatever it takes. He hoped that when he passed Bears Mountain main peak, he would be able to howl and being heard from town. He knew that his mother sharp hear would recognize son’s voice from many miles. But even that wouldn’t help if storm is still raging.
“Go, go, go ahead. If stop that means you’re dead!” was murmuring Cris silently, wresting with furious element.
Wind was hitting him with snow right into his muzzle. He left the peaceful pine forest and was marching on mountain slope, passing just dwarf-pine groves. Those gave him minimal shelter from the storm. But that situation had also some advantage – the terrain was so hard that Cris just could think about making a stop. So he was going on and on, barely sensing own paws.
“For you, dad...” he whispered. “And for you, Natalya...”
*
It was about two hours after midnight when from inner circle came Sergey. Coalition wolves started to growl and bared theirs teethes, but Niju calmed them down. They had a messenger.
“What do you want, stray?” greeted him warmly.
“Some action.” Replied brown-furred straight. “Don’t you think that it’s the best time to finish those humans?”
“Maybe.” Nodded leader. “But what I have to do with that? It is your problem.”
“We will take care of them... But you have to promise you won’t attack us then.” Proposed Sergey.
“And why it’s that?” asked Niju. “We could wait for humans to starve. We are not hurrying.”
“***** you, Yankee!” snorted alpha. “Where is your wolves-solidarity?”
“In the same place that is your respect for host’s rules.” Grimed Niju. “If that is all what you wanted to say, go now.”
“You will regret that!” gasped Sergey and looked on Flame, who was sleeping in snow few yards away. “I don’t how many it takes but I will kill your boy, I swear!” Although Niju tired to remain indifferent, he instinctively narrowed his eyes. “I make sure that our fight... whatever it would end... hurt you really bad.”
“Shell see.” Replied alpha, however his voice was breaking a little.
“What’s up, father?” asked Flame, who just awoke.
“No, nothing.” Said Niju, looking on returning Sergey.
“He is pleading for mercy?” asked young wolf and smiled. “Right on time, before we start!” he came to Niju and whispered him on ear. “I’ll make you proud, dad. You will see me in the first line. I prove I’m strong and worthy.” Alpha shivered.
“Go back to sleep, son.” Replied. And there came Steele.
“It’s funny, but the older I’m getting and the weaker my eyes are, my hear is going better and better.” Said, looking on father and son. “Are you sure, Niju, you want out all your pack to that test?”
“Go back to your humans, Steele.” Said Niju. “There you will be safe when it all will start.”
“I will, but you won’t.” Replied dog. “I give no heck if you want to die, but I’m trying to make sure my daughter wouldn’t lose her mate. Let them all go.”
“You are crazy!” replied Niju. “They will attack us immediately after they rest. Now they are weak and tired, lacking of food. We will crush them!”
“The last of you will kill the last of them. Praised be the victory!” snorted Steele.
“With all due respect, sir.” Said Flame. “But I think you know nothing. You aren’t a wolf and I respect that. But let us solve us problems as we are designed to. That’s the way of the Nature. That’s...”
“Stop that!” called a voice from isle’s side. It was Sergey, who was standing between Crack and Sashe. “We made a decision. If you don’t want to let us kill humans. We are going to fight now.”
“Your turn!” smiled Niju. He knew well that time was playing for locals.
“Order your wolves to fight!”
“We have to attack you?” asked Flame with malicious smile. “You do it. We could wait till spring here!”
“So...” said Sergey uncertainly, looking on Sasha and Crack. “I challenge Flame for leadership of Peninsula Pack.”
“NO!” growled Niju.
“Why not?” asked Flame. “Dad I will finish him and it all will be over...”
“No... I’m an alpha and...”
“Quit it.” Snorted Crack. “Your son is your successor and he is already considered as an alpha. Isn’t he?” Dark wolf looked on father and son, knowing that was question with no good answer. If Niju deny Flame’s status it would be a great disgrace for chief’s son. But letting him to fight... “And die!” thought Niju, looking on muscular silhouette of brown-furred. “Flame, it’s to early for you. He will win with you.” Added silently, but he could say it loud.
“Dad, let me do it!” asked Flame with official voice but a quiet and desperate plead was also heard. It was everything for young wolf. Niju looked on Steele and theirs stares met. “It’s all your fault.” Seemed to saying malamute. “You made him believe in strength... his own strength.” “Help me!” begged leader.
“No, wait!” said Steele, looking on Sergey. “I heard you started a duel with claimant for your pack... but it was interrupted for some cowards who broke the rules, helping you. Is that right?”
“I don’t know...”
“...what I’m talking about?” smiled malamute. “So what happened to your ear?”
“And what you have to do with that?” snorted brown-furred.
“It happened that I’m father of dog who challenged you. I could finish it instead of him.”
“YOU?!” called all: Niju, Flame, Sergey, Crack and Sasha.
“Are so afraid?” smiled malamute.
“You are... too old!” gasped Niju.
“So we will see if I’m still deserve to live.” Replied dog with airily voice, although in mind he was carefully estimating his chances. It wasn’t an optimistic estimation.
“Good... so...” started Sergey.
“But not now!” replied Steele. “I have to hunt for myself and rest. Let meet on tomorrow dusk.”
“You’re playing for time!” growled Sergey with anger.
“Exactly.” Smiled Steele bluntly. “But it’s all according to the rules. So if you want to hurt humans or those pack... you have to kill me quickly. But for now... I wish you all good night.” He turned back, leaving confused wolves behind. Flame caught him up before he went on the shore.
“With all due respect, I was extremely stupid, sir.” He hissed.
“In opposite to your father’s philosophy?” smiled Steele. But in next second he tensed his muzzle in expression of pain. “Get some meat for me. I can’t hunt.” Flame looked on him with fear. “My paw is freaking again.” Then he hobbled to his fir-branch bedding, leaving surprised Flame on beach.
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Cris had to turn of almost all the senses. Wind with snow was hitting his muzzle, blinding him and almost overturning him. Dog sensed as if his nose turned to a ice-cube, so no smells were reachable. His ears were filled with howls of storm. Fortunately the way was straight, as straight was Bears Range. But route became more and more blurred due to snow-cover. If Cris still was there and hadn’t fallen down from some bluff it was a kind of miracle.
Finally he decided to face the truth – he was snowblind. Way in front of him was just a distant line of whiteness, but dog saw no cracks nor trees. He was steeping at random, praying that there were no holes in his way. But he was wrong. Suddenly he submerged in the snow, where a rock crack was filled with whiteness. Dog found himself in hole and chocking snow-mass was falling on him from every direction.
“HELP!” yelled brownish-furred to no one in particular. But someone came.
“At last!” smiled Lucas who appeared in front of brother.
“You... are not real...” panted dog. “I’m chocking and my brain is going ape.”
“I’m glad to see you too.” Said pup, licking brother’s cheek. “As I say – I’m always near, but you ask me for help now. So I am.”
“Get me out from here!” yelled Cris, sensing his air-stock in hole is decreasing quickly.
“So... as you inanition I can’t help you..,.”
“Sorry, Lucas, I believe!” yelled brownish-furred. “But take out! Dad is in danger... Natalya is in danger!”
“I know, I know... I will help you if you help yourself. Just trust me.”
“I guess I have no choice.” Whispered Cris, slowly loosing his consciousness.
“So roll on left.” Ordered pup.
“There is... a bluff...” said fog with fading voice. “We will fall.”
“Exactly.” Agreed Lucas and pushed Cris side.
World turned somersault. Dog was hit by wave of fresh air – he inhaled deeply to fully regain his awareness and understand he was rolling from slope down. Lucas was holding his neck, laughing aloud. Then they hit ledge below them. Cris gasped from pain and Lucas just call with puppyish joy. Dog started to dig out from the snow, for not to be covered once again. After few minutes he was on surface... somewhere.
“Great!” yelled brownish-furred. “I don’t know where I am. And I can’t see it. My eyes are snowblind.”
“I will be your eyes.” Said Lucas. “Follow me.”
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“It’s bad idea!” was crying Ralph Fitch, desperately trying to stay on narrow route. “David, watch out!”
“And what I’m doing for last six hours?” asked team-leader, although human had no chance to understand him. “I wasn’t careful, you would have been dead as ice.”
“What?” called Ice from the lead of second sled. “Are calling me?”
“No, nothing!” replied husky, overscreaming the storm. “It’s fine...” called. “...night to die!” added quieter and turned to his mate, Eva, who was in second rank. “Our owner should pay us more.”
And on second sled was riding a fragile, young woman – Sara Ash. During absence of her husband she decided to take over his duties. And when plain with her father and Gunnar Kaasen didn’t return from flight on cape, she alarmed Ralph – owner of the second sled and they launched a improvised rescue mission. However the trapped was terrified of idea of woman riding sled.
“You haven’t mushed the sled!” yelled Ralph. He was doing his best as a leading musher, but to express his unrest and irritation he was complaining on Sara for all the time. “You even don’t know to drive!”
“As well as my father doesn’t know how to fly.” Noticed woman.
“And how it ended?” asked trapper. “And where we are riding? We are going now only according to David’s nose.”
“To her nose!” murmured David, looking on she-wolf, who was running in second rank next to Eva. “Aleu, how the heck you know where we are going?”
“I don’t know.” She replied honestly. “But I’m suspecting where those pack are. This is our only chance to find them. We haven’t a guide.”
She was wrong. David managed to turn on left to side-road, when he noticed that white drift of snow in front of them was moving and was actually a wolfdog. He barked aloud and both sleds stopped.
“Cris!” called Aleu with amaze. “Son, how it...”
“Mom! Fast!” whispered dog. “Dad is in serious trouble!”
”What now!?” growled Ralph with anger. He went out from sled and saw a dog on snow. “Another stray... But here?”
Sara noticed that newcomer went to Aleu and licked her cheek. She ran to first team and grabbed Ralph’s shoulder.
“Harness him to your sled.” She asked.
“Are lost your mind?” cried trapped. “That’s a stray!”
“No, he will lead us.”
After few minutes Cris for the very first time in his life felt a harsh caress of harness. He was placed next to David in first line of Ralph’s team.
“So you have never pulled?” murmured husky with hopelessness in his voice.
“He will manage.” Said Aleu. “I’m pulling for eight hours and I’m using to it.”
“*****!” called David, who was sharing the mood of his owner. “A band of amateurs. Son, can you walk?”
“Yes, sir!” replied Cris. He still didn’t see a thing, but Lucas was still near. Family was almost at full strength.
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Nice one!
So Steele is planning on challenging Sergey in his son in law's place eh? Hmm, that should be interesting.
Cris is blind but his dead brother is his eyes. Even better. He'll be fine now that he's with Aleu and the others.
Good chapter! Update soon! 
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Right, so we have some more action and... hehehe, this chapter is dedicated to Claymore as an appendix to our talk about “deus ex machina” plot-solutions
Ps.
To the Person who gave me negative note: I would be extremely grateful for PM and some more critique.
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XII. Warrior of the North
Flame woke Steele two hours after midday. It meant it was almost evening, at least in technical sense. Sun was slowly setting over the forest, giving the red rays on snowed wood and dog’s den under a pine. It was something in that scene that Steele shivered and not because of cold.
“This day is getting old.” He thought. “It’s still bright and yet warm, but it’s getting to dusk. Just as me. Well... who knows it this is not the best time.”
“Your meal, sir.” Said Flame, putting a haunch of caribu in front of malamute. He nodded with gratitude and started to eat. “Sir?” asked young wolf uncertainly.
“Yes?” and seeing stare of youngster added. “No it’s finished. I will fight with him.”
“Sir, please, reconsider it.” He turned his stare to the ground. “Ami wouldn’t forgive me, if you die because of me.”
“If she shares the philosophy of your and your father, she will understand it. The strong will survive.” Smiled Steele, swallowing the portion of meat. “Sorry, just kidding. But look on that from my perspective: she wouldn’t forgive me, if you gets hurt.”
“Thank you, sir.” Replied Flame. “But it’s so unfair... You are fighting instead of me, however I’m younger, and – with all due respect – surely stronger.”
“I’ll try to surprise you all.” Murmured dog. “But now help me...” he outstretched his front-left paw. “It is aching as hell. I must warm it up. Can you massage it? Here. I don’t want them to see it.”
“Sir, if your paw is...”
“It is thirteen years old.” Replied Steele. “So it could ache a bit. But it won’t fail me. Not this time.”
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Sergey was waiting for time of duel with serious anticipation. He was walking among Drifters and Conquerors, arguing with Crack, Olga and Sasha, just to cover his unrest. Of course he wasn’t scared by some old dog who had challenged him, but whole situation got more and more complicated. They all were hungry. Peninsulas and Buck, who were in outer circle, were able to hunt, at least with some scouts. And them were surrounded. Few times Sergey was close to make a final decision of breaking out, but ultimately he left it. He wanted to determinate the war then and there. That why he was in hurry.
“I will kill that idiot.” Growled to betas and Sasha. “Then we will attack those humans, eat them and provoke locals to action. The faster we are done, the better.”
“Natalya will be in danger if we rush on humans.” Noticed Sasha. “Sergey stopped, looked on her with fury and gasped.
“She is not a pup. If she wants to be an alpha she has to take care about herself.”
“She is wounded...”
“So what? Our main goal is to rid off those rascals around.”
“Crack!” called Sasha with tensed voice. “Don’t listen to him. He doesn’t care of Natalya, as well he didn’t care for your brother. Do you think he will be more scruples when will come time for you?”
“Amber wasn’t my brother!” growled dark-furred.
“But he could be.” Noticed Sasha. “He looked just like you. I mean: you could share his fate.”
Sergey snapped his teethes in front of gamma’s muzzle.
“Are you bossing now?” asked with venomous voice. “I will lose my temper soon.”
“With losing me, you will also lose about fourteen jaws.” Smiled Sasha. “Watch your tongue.”
Sergey furiously hit with front-right paw in ice. It cracked loudly. Although it was frosty day, the cracks on ice and then refreezing of pool made ice-layer very fragile. What was worse – the fresh snow covered most of air-holes and dangerous places so walking on that thick ice... was actually walking on thin ice after all. Fortunately Steele appeared, marching slowly from the shore.
“At last.” Smiled Serger. “Are you cold, old dog, that you want to die earlier.”
“I wish to finish you before supper.” Replied malamute, although he was intending to stretch the duel as long as he could. “But first I wish to visit humans.”
“Say them <goodbye!>” laughed Sergey.
“I will forward it from you.” Smiled Steele and went to the island. Although he tried to hide it, the hobbling was clearly seen.
“Well done.” Murmured Crack with irony. “Recently you are fighting with females, kids and invalids.”
“If you consider yourself as one of them, just tell me!” growled Sergey and bared his teethes.
Meanwhile malamute got to the isle. It changed, mainly because Arashi and Gunnar cut down most of bushes to made a defending-brush. But that wall was also continuously being destroyed, because humans lacked the fuel for fire. Steele entered unseen via one of gaps in brush, hoping that wolves on ice didn’t see it.
“Steve!” called Arashi. “I mean: Steele!” Dog went to Japanese and nudged his leg with his side. “Good to see you, old pal. What brought you here?”
“You won’t understand me.” Barked Steele. “But I have to hope you somehow fell it. Goodbye, master Arashi. Probably we won’t see again. Thank you for all... For saving me... Feeding me and... letting me meet with Sky. I will greet her from you.” Then he went to Kaasen, sitting with rifle next to fire. “And good by, master Gunnar. Thank you for all... and I’m sorry one again. But I must know before I die, if you forgave me that night on serum-run.”
“He looks like he is trying to say you something.” Noticed doctor. “But I have no idea what exactly.”
“Me too.” Replied trapped, petting his old dog. “But maybe we see him for the last time. If we won’t make it with wolves...” He looked in malamute’s eyes. “Just in case: goodbye, Steele. You was always good dog. Always.” However constitution of dog’s muzzle was making it extremely hard, Steele smiled. At least Norwegian thought that.
Dog licked face of old owner and went to Natalya. She wasn’t sleeping but looking on scene with wide opened eyes.
“I don’t know what to say...” she started. “Sir... don’t do it. Remember about Cris...”
“I’m, my child.” Murmured Steele. “That why you must listen to me.” He sat in front of wolf and started to whisper quietly. “If Sergey kills me, there will be no one to stop the slaughter... except of you. If you love Cris, you have to do everything to save pack of his sister. And he is calling help to save your companions. So you have to play on time, use every pretext to postpone the final battle. Niju believes that what he is doing is right. Sergey believes that what he is doing is beneficial. Whatever we think about those motivations those are very strong ones – faith and profit. Usually both of them are good, but sometimes they lead to disaster.”
“But what I should do?” yelled silver-furred.
“You know it well, somewhere in your heart. You are the real alpha of your pack and you are responsible for each member of it.” He bended down to her muzzle and licked her forehead. “Do not fail them. None of them.”
And then he stood up and set off on the ice, right in direction of setting sun. “Save your pack” whispered dog and turned to Sergey.
“Finally!” smiled alpha. “Let make it quick.”
“Good.” Nodded Steele. “Quick. I’ll try to get your throat.” A laughter of Coalition Wolves sounded.
“Laugh, old dog, until you can.” Replied brown-furred. “But now, follow me.”
They went to some square of ice partially cleaned out from snow. It was a ring of about forty yards wide and long. The lack of snow made able the more manoeuvrable combat, what Steele greeted with anger, due to his aching paw. “More running.” Though malamute. “I was running whole my ***** life and I’m going to die running. How sweet!” And there was one thing more that should worry Steel, but in fact cheered him up. The square was between island and shore, but near to place where biplane had landed. It meant that ice was thick but very fragile there.
“Owi...” smiled dog and whispered in mind. “If you are up-... or downthere, maybe you will be pleased that your good friend is going to share your fate.” He recalled the scene when he threw the wolf to cold sea. “But this time I won’t take a bath alone. If I’m lucky, I’ll get him with me.”
Snow was still falling and wind grew up, in spite of forest cover. For short while Steele thought with anxiety how the weather could be on Cris route, but then he left gave thoughts. “I have some problems on my own.”
“I’m very sorry, that it came that way.” Said Niju, looking on malamute.
“The only thing I could wish to you, is to have similar and so spectacular end.” Replied Steele with bitter smile. “Maybe you’re right. For everybody time will come. I won’t yell for break! Bring it on!” he called to Sergey.
“He will beat him.” Whispered Kitty to Flame’s ear. “As he beat your father and Dymitr...” Then duel started.
Eyes of all wolves and two humans were pointed on ring on ice. Silence fell in ranks of predators when Sergey made few steps back to prepare way for gaining a rush. Ice made a cracking sound when heavy wolf closed to zone of air-holes, but it stood. So Sergey set of in run to Steele. Malamute was standing calmly in the middle of ring, waiting for enemy to come. Whole wolves gathering was shivering from emotions but he, alone was waiting still. Only his aching paw was shaking a bit, what dog couldn’t stop. And everyone were sure that the first brown-furred’s charge would finish all the duel. Sergey stated to run and gaining speed. Five yards before still Steele he jumped up in powerful pounce. He flied three yard above the ground, stretching his paws to pin enemy down. Falling snow dimmed whole scene – Sergey landed in white cloud and his attack, as well as surprisingly fast retaliation of Steele was unseen. But when dust felt down from under white cumulus appeared both adversaries, turned with back to each other. Steele was where he had been, Sergey stopped about five yards behind him. They both were panting heavily. After moment of freezing silence eyes of all spectators turned to brown-furred. Particularly – to his head. Directly – to his ear. And being precise – there was no ear. Wolf’s second auricle was ripped out.
“YOU... MUTT!” howled Sergey with overwhelming rage.
“Not mutt.” Replied panting Steele. “Pure-breed Alaskan Malamute, you stray!”
And then all happened in one moment. Amazed spectators saw as Sergey turns back to enemy and Steele runs to it. They collided face to face, falling on ice and rolling aside. But malamute quickly let wolf go and quickly – however: with heavy effort – stood up. Sergey slid closer to fragile ice, however he was so furious he didn’t notice it.
He jumped back on Steele, but dog shunned that charge easily. Malamute even tried to hit enemy with front-right paw, but he missed. That didn’t calmed a fury of brown-furred, who landed and turned to dog. He started to run, without jumping, just to faster get to enemy. They both collided again and started to roll to air-holes. Ice made a cracking sound, announcing everyone what Steele was intending to do.
“No!” whispered Kitty.
“Of course not!” growled a new voice behind her. “Stop it!” called aloud.
“Amber!” cried fox. “What you are doing here!?”
“Returning my part of deal.” Replied dork-wolf. His paw was still swollen but he was walking firmly. Wrestling enemies stopped and looked on him. “Where is Cris?” asked newcomer. “I have to return him a favour.”
“He is away.” Said Kitty. “But that malamute on ice is his father.”
“Right... I’ll take care for father instead of son.” Smiled dark wolf. “Sergey, leave him!”
“Look!” called Olga to Crack. “Your brother is alive... and he is back!”
“HE IS NOT MY BROTHER!” called both twin-looking black wolves.
“Ow, how do you know it?” asked Kitty. “But they have human doctor there. I suggest the blood-test and...”
“It’s absurd.” Called Amber, coming closer to Crack. “I can’t be his brother, because I grew up in Chukchi pack, who saved me from human hunt. I even remember my parents: Simon and Lilia...”
“E... Amber...” whispered Crack to ear of wolf. “There is a problem...” he added with almost inaudible voice. “My parents named also Simon and Lilia...”
“And were killed by hunting humans too? Don’t be ridiculous.” But Crack nodded his head. “What!?”
“I know this story!” called Natalya from the isle. “My father once told me that after some human hunting when whole pack was killed, three other groups found dead mother with three living pups. Because it was hard winter, alphas of those pack decided to divide triplets among them and raise as own... I know it because one of them was...” she looked on Drifters ranks. “...e... Sasha.”
“WEKR!” growled all three siblings: Sasha, Amber and Crack. They sounded with so perfect timing that then instantly fell silent, confused.
“So...” yelled Sasha. “Are we...”
“Sasha!” called Crack. “Cover Amber!” he ran to dark-furred, who was marching in Steele’s and Sergey’s direction. “Forgive me brother... I let it because I didn’t know...”
“Forget it!” replied Amber. “But are you with me now?”
“Of course I am!” he nodded his head. Then Sasha came.
“We separate them?” she pointed on malamute and wolf, who were ignoring whole touching family matters around them and chocking themselves with firm grips of jaws on each other’s neck.
“Yeah!” nodded Amber. “That dog is father of Cris who saved me.”
“And he is mate-to-be of Natayla.” Added Sasha. “And she is my friend after all.
“All right! Stay where you are!” growled Crack. He turned to back and was barring his fangs. What was more confusing he seemed to do it to both Strays and Coalition. “We will take care of those guys.”
Meanwhile Sasha and Amber with effort separated Steele and Sergey. They made it in last moment – malamute almost lost his consciousness. So both enemies fell on ice, panting heavily. Steele had few cuts on side and brown-furred’s ear was still bleeding.
“What a mess!” murmured Amber. “And what we are going to do now?”
“Natalya?” called uncertain Sasha. “Any plans?”
No one from amazed wolves reacted on that. The sudden shift of situation made whole gathering speechless. They were just measuring with stares siblings, Natalya, Sergey and Steele. Nothing was certain then. The spell was broken be some new surprise.
“They are coming!” called Kitty triumphal.
*
Cris thought his paws are burning. It is very strange felling when there is about minus twenty Fahrenheit degrees. But he had to stand it. His mother was pulling hard and after all dog was son of best leader in whole Alaska. So Cris clenched his jaws and called.
“That is near! Make a howl, to announce them!” So both teams howled.
Cris still was barely seeing, but Lucas was running before him. Dog was watching brother’s aura, who was leading him strait on road. For whole run pup didn’t say a word but he turned few times with cheering stare and smile. And Cris was sensing the friendly presence – it was enough to overcome the exhaustion.
“I see them!” panted Aleu, who was almost fainting too. “There, in river’s pool.”
“I have one question.” asked David, who seemed to be fresh and strong as if they hadn’t run for miles but just woke up. “How are you going to convince humans not to shoot all that lot down?”
”Why do you think masters want to kill them?” asked Eva.
“Because they are wolves... mostly.” Replied David. “And master Ralph took with him that nasty machine rifle from doc Tazaku’s house...”
“I hope they are alive...” murmured Aleu.
Sled was speeding down from range. Sara was barely keeping it on road, but Ice was doing his best to maintain speed and not to kill his mistress. Meanwhile Ralph was getting out from pack a heavy BAR and checking the clip.
“***** wolves!” he murmured.
_________________ Long Live the Scar! = "You know, Ray. Inuit have ways of dealing with extreme conditions. Ruling out cannibalism, we have two options."
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Steele has always proven his great bravery.
So, Sasha, Crack, and Amber are siblings? Wow small world or should I say forest? *chuckles*
At least every one has a plan to keep to keep Steele from dying at least for the present time.
Uh-oh, David's master has a brutal plan in mind from the looks of things.
Not good.
Good chapter! Update soon!
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