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8/10 It's a good character, and I like the originality of being Kopa's kid and all that, but there's not that much detail. For starters, although I didn't contribute this that much to the overall rating, his detail/body picture is in black and white. In my opinion, it'd be easier for those who want to draw him or render or whatever if they had a color pic, and judging from all the renders/drawings he's already been apart of, that wouldn't be hard to find. His personality is a bit tangled up in his appearances in that paragraph, but I can kinda tell what it is or get the gist of it. There's no real history to him and while that's fine, it'd be nice to know the background of the character.

Sadie?

Design: 9/10
The only think I'd say is to make the orangish-brown on her muzzle/legs a tad more saturated, but perhaps that's just me. -shrug-

General Bio: 10/10

Personality: 10/10
I like how she's nice, but still has reasonable character flaws. Good work! ^^

History: 10/10

Overall: 9.75/10
Great character! :)


Hmm...here's something different: a non-AnimationSource-related fancharacter! How about Michi?

The last time someone posted was...a year ago I know xD but this topic was a very nice idea so, I think I shall bring it to life again C:

Michi: 8/10
A very well made and developed character. I've never seen actually a kid from Inuyasha and Kagome and he looks very interesting 83 nice job with him!

How about my character Yoki?

...good gracious, that reference of Michi is old. XD Here, have a newer version: http://nattikat8.deviantart.com/art/Siblings-305615244

Anyways, yay, thread lives! I've missed this game. XD


As for Yoki....


Design: 7.5/10
While it dosen't look bad, I don't think it's "realistic" in that I've never seen a bear in such a pattern. Then again, I'm no expert on bears, so perhaps there are some out there. -shrug-

General Bio: 10/10
Now, personally, I wouldn't put in the mate and cubs slot if they're unknown/don't have one. BUT that's just a personal preference and doesn't affect the character himself, so I won't take anything off for that. XD

Personality: 9/10
It looks pretty good to me; she has reasonable ups and downs. The only thing I'd say is a bit more explanation about it.

History: 9/10
Again, it's pretty good and it's an interesting backbone to her story. However, I'd suggest filling it out a bit more and specifying connections to her personality and how the events of her life affected her. Get into her thoughts and feelings a little bit! ;)

Overall: 8.9/10



Samuel?

10/10 I absolutely love the originality of his character. His personality alone is very unique in the sense that - as you mentioned - many people tend to think that Balto's dad was a strong, popular racer. The history was also unique, and I think it was explained very realistically (for example: how there came to be only one pup, as pups are born in litters and Balto couldn't have been the only one; how Aniu died and became the spirit guide, etc.). The design is a bit simple, but considering it's Balto's father, it has to be simple. Otherwise, it'd be like 'What the heck?'. Oof, I just love Samuel<3 He's so unique and you made his character brilliantly well! Great job, Natti! :3

How about Alecto?

9/10 Wonderfully detailed bio on this guy ;D You get such a clear picture of what this character is like, which is what every character should have in my opinion! His design is a great mixture between simple and complex. I also like his relation to the Balto universe. I don't see siblings of Aniu all that often c:

How about Warren? All info there ^-^ Unfortunately his bio is a little brief, but I will change that eventually xc

Design: 10/10
Absolutely gorgeous. <3 Nice work!

General Bio: 10/10

Personality: 9/10
Overall, it's very good, I like how he changed with his history, but I would suggest elaborating the process of the change just a tad.

History: 8/10
As you mentioned, it is very brief, and I think that it should be expounded a bit. What you have, though, is unique and rather cute. 8D Just flesh it out a bit more.

Overall: 9.25/10



Kanti?

Kanti truly deserves a 10/10.
A perfect well made character. Simply yet developed story, I liked that when she started to have feelings for Coal, she didn't know what to do xD It reminded me of Dr Who when I read that Coal died before her and that it was a hard hit for her :C poor girl...
Overall, a character that indeed deserves more views and more favourites!
You're always great at making characters ;D

Sasha? (it's a male, not a female).

hope this revival is ok :3

8/10 Nice design, saske!
And, a VERY interesting history to add. Overall, a very well put together character.

This guy/gal
Sorry, it's just a design for a new character... no name yet, but a basic personality it shy, timid, etc.

6/10 Good design and seems like a good start to a personality, but with nothing else to judge, I can't give him/her much points/critique |D

Cobra?

Cobra is pure awesomness. I have nothing to say since you know how much I like him xD his story, the bio, the design, everything. He gets a 10/10 from me because yes ;D

Adam?

Design: 8/10
He's cute, but I would suggest either completely scrapping the scar or at least providing a more solid history to it other than "it was always there", which may be difficult to do since the character is so young. Scars in general are rather overused and this one seems, in my opinion, to be a little bit random.

General Bio: 10/10

Personality: 7/10
It's a little hard to follow. The traits seem a bit scattered with not much connection. I do like that he has flaws, though. Particularly the part about secrets.

History: 7.5/10
It's a good start, certainly, but I think that it could use just a little bit more fleshing out, such as his relationship with Arnack or a more solid reason that he was alone among the 98 other than the fact that he was adopted alone. Puppies tend to be pretty social, and in a group of 99, I'd think that there would have been bound to be more than 2 who wanted to try to befriend him. Was he shy? Cold/harsh? Intimidating? etc. As a side note, I noticed in the history that he seemed to be easily jealous of Patch. While that is a believable flaw and it adds nice development, I suggest mentioning it in the personality section, as well. ;)

Overall: 8.13/10


Kahlei?