And yes, descendant of the stars will soon be back! Whilst I was gone, I picked up some writing skills :) (His mother is open)
History (aww):
Ash was born to an unknown doe and Maudire, along with his sister Misty. However he was born deaf, and never knew what any deer said to him. But his sister was patient and guided him through life with a steady hoof. He loved his sister more than anyone, and she was the only fawn he talked to. When his father came to inspect the fawns that had been bred, wanting an army, he was disappointed to find the doe had bred a Girl and a deaf boy. His first step was to get rid of Misty, so he asked her to come on a walk. Ash waited for his sister's return, but she never came back, but every night he searched for her, but of course never found her. He was also prone to fawn abuse from his father, resulting in a missing ear on his left side. After a close encounter with a hunter, he never went close to human kind again, but since his sister was the only one he trusted, he never went near other fawns either, and other fawns didn't go near him either. But whilst he was in the meadow at dawn (to avoid other fawns and bucks) he saw a fawn that looked just like his sister. Rejoicing he ran towards her, but when she turned, he realized she wasn't his sister. This doe had blue eyes, his sister had green. But the doe had noticed and asked his name. Being deaf, he didn't understand her, but asked her name. The doe tried to tell him, but he didn't understand, until she pointed to the sky then drew a country in the ground. Her name was Zora. She asked for her name but he ran away into the forest.
Later he fell into a stream and broke his leg, where a family found him and raised him as a pet. Ash became to trust and love the family and they treated him like a dog, with all the love in the world. Ash didn?t need to be ashamed or afraid of his past. But a deer was too much to handle, so they chained him by a gate one stormy night and left him there, cowering. He could never look anyone in the eye again. When he eventually returned, he saw a figure he thought looked like his sister, and thought he had found her at last, but it was Zora again, and he was not able to look her in the eye, or speak and ran, until he bumped into his father. Upon recognizing him, his father realized he had never done away, and as if his life wasn?t bad enough, he confined him to a small prickly bush and a hard ground to sleep, and if he ever ran into him, Maudire would scar or wound him. His food was rationed and Ash whished he could die. One day Maudire asked him to come down where he again whipped him. Ash stood there, and then fell to the ground. The fawn?s life was destroyed. Maudire left him for wolves and went to battle. Zora had spotted the fawn fall, and stayed with the fawn, remembering him. Ash wasn?t able to open his eyes and whished his life would end quickly, but it went slowly and painfully. He remembered seeing a pair of dark blue eyes belonging the fawn Zora when he eventually opened his eyes for the last time. There was something in them that made him trust her.
?Why are you here?? He asked, but her voice was unknown due to his deafness. But she understood. She stayed until he faded. Luckily Ash pulled through, but he never went into the open, but he stayed near Zora, who was like another sister to him, but perhaps more than a friend ?
As a teenager he stayed away from the rut, as he hated other bucks because of his experience, and his father was there. But his father saw him anyway, tipped off from Swift tail, leader of the herd. Zora once again stayed by his side, but Ash cowered away, with his last breath he saw the meadow, in gloom, fawns and doe?s cowering from his father and Swift tail. But even they didn?t know the hurt he had gotten. He looked up to the sky, so peaceful, before he joined his real sister. Perhaps one day he would have another chance, but until that day, he would wait, perhaps training, waiting till his second chance came and he could claim the forest back from Maudire and Swift tail, and claim the doe he once mistook for his sister as a mate ...
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