I can feel your rapid hoof beats

As I run through the snow, 

through the slush, the ice and snow sheets,

We must run, is all I know.

 

I feel my heartbeat increasing,

And my breaths coming faster.

What I fear is your heart ceasing, 

Mine is not the master.

 

As I run, I fear for you,

For danger's on our tail.

You have not even a clue,

That our future may be pale.

 

And as I run, I want to cry,

I fear you'll go away,

I wish that I could try

To avoid us separating in such a way.

 

As I start to slow my pace

And my energy gets low,

I realize what's ended is the race,

And how I will miss you so.

 

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October 13, 2014
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Interesting.

September 26, 2014
I haven't been on in a long time... thank you very much everyone!

June 18, 2014
Usa Male
Short, but it really got me in the gut.

January 24, 2014
Uk Female
This is a star of a poem. In particular, I like your choice of rhyme :) Well done

December 10, 2013
Australia
Very heartfelt and emotional. It just makes me sad to think of that time when Bambi's mother was taken:cry: To this day I am in my late twenties and I still cry when I see or think about that scene.

This poem was beautifully written and it creates both a heartwarming and heartbreaking vibe at the same time. You have certainly got my vote, mate. Well done.




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