Untaken Path: Ch. 24 - The Clash

Author : Feathervenom

Date sent : August 07, 2013

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : Ronno and Bambi fight for Faline.

Length : Very short -

Characters :
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Untaken Path: Ch. 24 - The Clash
By Feathervenom

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Guest
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November 18, 2013
Yay. ^^ I'm sure Sorcha will like her half sister, when it comes to recklessness, they're a lot alike. ^^

November 18, 2013
Thanks, Kitten ^^ And MLW, you keep your family trees, but deer sure don't xD I don't think it's giving much away to say that they're going to have their twins. I decided including Geno and Gurri minorly isn't a bad idea.

... That, and Bambi's been through a lot xD

I'll try not to take so long in the future.

Guest
Guest
November 16, 2013
I like this chapter. It's short, but amazingly written and the action and the feelings are there. ^^ It does, however, make me wonder: so Bambi and Faline are probably going to have a fawn, which will then be kind of like Soleil's half aunt/uncle, but also Sorcha's half sibling, yet they're all the same age...
Me is confused.
Well, they're deer, so I guess for them, it won't matter much. ^^


November 16, 2013
Usa Female
Feathervenom- I can tell you spent a lot of work on this. It's a good chapter.:)

November 15, 2013
Chapter 24 - DESPERATELY sorry this took so long. I just got so busy and forgot for a long time. Please forgive me! I tried to focus a bit more on the relationship Korin shares with the deer who saved her life, Herla, as well as his feelings a bit.




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