Bambi's Summer, Chapter 1

Author : KittenLover 123

Date sent : July 28, 2013

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Other

Description : Bambi meets his friends, Cassie and Amber, and, after a confrontation with Faline, gets into BIG trouble at the meadow.

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Bambi's Summer, Chapter 1

By KittenLover 123

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KittenLo ver 123	July 29, 2013

Yeah Faline's too bubbly to really hurt anyone.


KittenLo ver 123	July 29, 2013

Thanks, and thanks for the tip


Featherv enom	July 29, 2013

Now, it's good, but I do have a bit of criticism - mostly, Faline. I can understand that she wouldn't like Bambi's friends, and be cold to them, but physical violence seems like something her character is incapable of - this is a really common phenomenon, really, and actually a bit difficult to avoid, especially when writing a different character as Bambi's love interest - it's called "Character Derailment." Just a warning, but other than that, which is nitpicking, it's good.

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