Untaken Path: Ch 21 - The Misfits

Author : Feathervenom

Date sent : March 31, 2013

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : While the rut goes on, Bambi finds unexpected allies from a most unexpected place. In Nacht's forest, the rut runs strong and forces are built up under Braila's tyrannical dictatorship.

Length : Short -

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Untaken Path: Ch 21 - The Misfits
By Feathervenom

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July 24, 2013
MW ~ Have you ever seen a senior Rhinelander? xD It's only fitting! His personality can only be described as unusual for a Rhinelander, since most are very gentle and curious, but I do have one a lot like him in the barn. ...Interestingly, his name is Mercutio. xD He's very nosy and rough. I had him out once and he tried to dig in my belly >.< Anyway, thanks!

July 24, 2013
Usa Female
Love that bunny XD Very ballsy. Awesome chapter :P

June 02, 2013
Uk
Wow an epic chapter ^^ Can't wait for the next part :P

May 31, 2013
Glad you liked it! ;3

May 31, 2013
Uk Female
Wow~ Great chapter :D Can't wait to see what happens next, wonder if Bambi will choose Salvia or Faline to fight for.. XD It be interesting to see a fight between him and Ronno without any jealously in it X"DD lol Oooh a hint of HuckleberryXYew :"33 Ya reminded me I need to make their fawns pages XD

I love Loki and the others~ Their really interesting B3

May 31, 2013
Thanks, MLW! ^^ I admit your comments made me smile xD Yes, I fear I may have gone a bit too in depth describing Loki, being a breeder of Rhinelanders myself xD I do love them, even with a little hotot crawling on my shoulders right now! (Socializing them, they have awful eye circles and head shape, and they're just at the perfect mix of "Old enough" and "cute little bunny"!) Honestly, I admit I got the idea from something I planned on doing, but found an alternative. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed!

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May 31, 2013
Yeah, go get her, Kaiser. You two have to make your two slightly-messed-up-but-still-likeable fawns. ^^ (And there is no point in saying Sol and Cutio aren't. ^^)
But why, what an interesting chapter. I really like those rabbit characters, especially Loki. Rough as he may be, IMO, it's the decision a leader would make. Keeping the group safe at all costs. Their backstory is interesting and kinda heart-warming, I like it. :)
And the rut is coming on, Sol and 'Cutio are gonna be around in a while (not quite as pretty as they'll look when they're actually born, but alive at least) and finding out what's going to happen next will surely be exciting.




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