believe you're here."
Birch opened his mouth to protest, but suddenly realized that many young bucks were about. He froze. "Yes, then," he said, regaining his composure. "Campion, come with me. We'll find Korin a place to bed down along the stream - maybe she can fish." He walked over to the mountain lion, who held her bloody paw up, and she gave him a challenging look. Birch paid no heed. He began to speak with her as he and Campion moved off.

Bambi and Herla turned to Huckleberry. "Friend, how about you and your hawk tell us about what you're here for?" Herla asked.

"Hang on!" Skander interrupted. "I wanna come. Let me listen - I want to hear about my blood herd."

Herla stared at Bambi. This whole incident - Birch's outburst and the deer failing to listen to Bambi - had made Herla snap back into his place as a Captain. He wanted orders now. "Yes," Bambi agreed hesitantly, "He can listen in. I... I think he needs to know these things. Call Ronno and Faline. Fleetfoot!" he called to a buck at the edge of the clearing and told him to get Bambi's two old friends.

 

Soon after, they were all there and Huckleberry and the hawk explained what had happened, each respectively. "I'd like to see my homeland freed," the bird finished. "I'll help your puma if you let me stay and help take out these bucks. I... I saw them on their way in, and that huge grey one was killing some songbirds... he was attacking... the... the animals," he added softly, his eyes glazed in horror.

All was silent after this. It was almost deafening. "I should have seen that coming," Herla whispered. "He's been... away from his anters his whole life."

"Well," Bambi stared at Skander. "That's your father. I doubt he holds to your expectations?"
The young buck said nothing. "Anyway," Bambi continued, trying to sound brisk, "It's time we start making preparation for the real battle to begin. The rut is coming on fast, now, and we need to prepare for battle. We'll make make-shift warrens above ground - thorn walls and such - to keep the does with fawns safe."

"I can't think of anything more unnatural," Ronno said, astonished.
"Yes, but Nacht and Trar break the natural way of things - rabbits do it. This is better than them." Bambi replied. Ronno hesitated but nodded. Indeed, he still didn't get along so well with the prince, but his jealousy was gone.

"I'll get started," Skander stood up, looking determined. "Give me some plans."



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December 30, 2012
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lol X"DD

December 30, 2012
Lolz, there's a trope for that. XD What Happened to the Mouse? Well, I suppose in at least my closing I'll tell you. She may show up before then, depends on if the situations supports it. Don't wanna tack in a character 'cause I wanna say "HEY LOOK IT'S CHARACTER X!" :b Anyway, glad you enjoyed! ^^

December 30, 2012
Uk Female
Feather... WOOOOOOAH! *Flails* That was so EPIC! Yay Huckleberrys back and better than ever ;D MLW did catch on about my comment X"DD Oops lol I cant wait to read the next chapter, its getting so tense..

I wonder what happend to Yew... Never really thought abotu where she disapeared too lol

December 28, 2012
Rebumpin'

December 27, 2012
HAH you had to explain Kaiser's lineage to a non-fan XD I find that amusing indeed. There's always the eagle in Spirit to trace, I suppose, and I was THINKING he'd be red-tailed, but I'd have to check what hawks live in the area Bambi takes place in. Anyway, no, Trar's not overly complex... he's just... Trar. He wants power and he wants does. Pride, avarice, lust... Geez, and Nacht suffers from Wrath, avarice, envy, lust, gluttony, AND pride. Everything except slothfulness! ...Well, maybe not pride, so much.

Oh, Trar's antlers? He probably fought some buck when they were in velvet at some point. I never did explain that... when a buck's antlers are in velvet, they are bendy, and that's why Campion can't fight - Trar must have ignored that idea and gotten in a fight/defended himself while in the summer, and they got all torn up. Usually nontypical antlers occur when a buck bumps into something with them, but hey... this isn't exactly real life. :b

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December 27, 2012
I would adopt the hawk, but honestly, I can't draw hawks. At all. (I COULD of course search for a lineart or coloring page, but...meh.)
I honestly love to make doodles of them in school. They're usually very cute. ^^ (But I once had to explain to a friend why Kaiser is the son of a brain-damaged mass murderer. She hasn't even read your fanfic, but Nacht is already her favorite char. XD)
Trar...well, I hate him, especially for killing my favorite Bambi character, but he isn't the most interesting or complex character in your fanfic, I have to admit that. But it's kinda like with Eric. Eric is nice and believes in true love. Trar is evil and believes in...well, using does to get strong offspring.
By the way, you never told us why Trar looks the way he looks. I would like to know that.

December 27, 2012
I'm glad to write Noir in. ^^ I'm excited especially to write in the romance between her and Kaiser. :D They're such a cute couple! I don't have it now, but I'd sketched out a picture of her with him and it was very cute. X3 Anyway, yes, I can garantee I'll enjoy writing in the fate of Trar. I mean, I can't bring myself to hate a character I devised, but if YOU honestly hate him, can't stand him, and can't wait to see him die, I've done my job right.

..That is, of course, if you don't hate him for being generic and bland. o.o He isn't, is he? I need to know if he is. XD Anyway, yeah, I'm probably going to start the next chapter soon - I just don't know what to do with the hawk. I plan to keep him as an informant for Bambi, but he needs an owner. :b And name. And personality. Heck, if no one takes him, I'm keeping my hawk!

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December 27, 2012
New chapter! Yay! :D
Huckleberry's back! Yay! I suspected him to come back judging by what Hige was saying, but that was really nice of Death and Life. ^^
And yay, Noir! I'm pleased to see her in this, really.^^
And Trar...terrible as always. -.- I mean, I hate the things Nacht does far more than the ones Trar does, but honestly, I hope both of them get what they deserve.
Yay, Skander finally knows what his dad is like!
Well, battle's just about to begin...I'm anixious to see...read...what's going to happen.


December 27, 2012
CHAPTER 16 FINISHED! *Throws a party* Ummm, so yeah, the mouse turned into a hawk. He needs adopted!




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