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![]() | November 22, 2012 | |
Wow, great new chapter! I'm rather happy you mentioned Rora and added
Noir. (Mission accomplished, yay!) And Korin promises to be an
interesting character. As it is, I'm really looking forward to read
the next chapters (but take your time). ^^ |
| November 22, 2012 | ||
Raidar - Didn't realize you'd taken to reading! ^^ Faline - I can try, but no promises. The only way to fit it in is to make Fawna the daughter/mate of the leader of the herd Trar took down here, and add in Trar's mate and son in the next chapter. I can't say they'll get more than a few mentions for now, rather like Rora got here. MW - Yes, I figured that trap probably would cause her some pretty darn heavy injury, so in order for her to be... of any use later in the story(Struggling not to give anything away here), I had to introduce her early, since she's probably got a fractured bone or two, and probably will get infected.. Anyway, I'll add her! |
| November 22, 2012 | ||
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Woo hoo!!! Awesome chapter! I didn't know you were gonna write
Korin in already! I went ahead and added her character page! Can't
wait for more! ![]() |
| November 22, 2012 | ||
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Can Trar's mate and Son be in the next chapter and can Trar take down
my charcter Fawna's herd. Trar's Son likes fawna but she hates him
back. |
| November 22, 2012 | ||
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Very interesting, makes you want to read more! ;D Can't wait to see
what happens next. |
I like that. ^^