Untaken Path - Ch 15: Rising Storm

Author : Feathervenom

Date sent : November 10, 2012

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : Another herd is taken down by Trar. With this herd under his antlers, he sets an ambush on Bambi's herd in the Fall. A strange new doe appears in Bambi's herd and, almost immediately, Kaiser starts to fall for her.

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Untaken Path - Ch 15: Rising Storm
By Feathervenom

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December 18, 2012
You know that the two new girls are actually a little similiar to each other? The both grew up in the care of man, and both were chased with dogs and guns. Granted, no one ever had the intention to kill Noir, but still. And they're both a little extraordinary in Bambi's herd, since Noir is the only fallow deer (and a black one at that) and Korin is...well, a cougar.
I like that. ^^

November 22, 2012
Uk
Thus was exititing! Can't wait for the next one!

Guest
Guest
November 22, 2012
Wow, great new chapter! I'm rather happy you mentioned Rora and added Noir. (Mission accomplished, yay!) And Korin promises to be an interesting character. As it is, I'm really looking forward to read the next chapters (but take your time). ^^

November 22, 2012
Raidar - Didn't realize you'd taken to reading! ^^
Faline - I can try, but no promises. The only way to fit it in is to make Fawna the daughter/mate of the leader of the herd Trar took down here, and add in Trar's mate and son in the next chapter. I can't say they'll get more than a few mentions for now, rather like Rora got here.
MW - Yes, I figured that trap probably would cause her some pretty darn heavy injury, so in order for her to be... of any use later in the story(Struggling not to give anything away here), I had to introduce her early, since she's probably got a fractured bone or two, and probably will get infected.. Anyway, I'll add her!

November 22, 2012
Usa Female
Woo hoo!!! Awesome chapter! :) I didn't know you were gonna write Korin in already! I went ahead and added her character page! Can't wait for more! :cool:

November 22, 2012
Usa Female
Can Trar's mate and Son be in the next chapter and can Trar take down my charcter Fawna's herd. Trar's Son likes fawna but she hates him back.

November 22, 2012
Usa
Very interesting, makes you want to read more! ;D Can't wait to see what happens next.

November 22, 2012
Chapter 15, everyone! Sorry for the wait.. wasn't in the mood to write. Anyway yeah, enjoy! ^^




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