Zora's awesome desgin (C) Falinelover101

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                                                                 Maudire

The large buck narrowed his eyes, his gaze stedily sweeping through the high grass that strtched across the meadow. His ears were flat, every muscle in his body tense, and his antlers (which now had 15 points on) were also pressed back hard against his back. This time he would have to get it right. A chance like this could not fail again. Maudire reared up, his eyes blazing, and brought his hoofs crashing down on a doe. Maudire had been stalking and trying to get himself a doe for weeks now, more than once had ended up killing the doe, and afew bucks for good measure. The doe squealed in his grip , trying to pull herself free from Maudires squeazing grip that held her tight like a clam. The doe kicked maudire in the chest, and pelted towards the darkened forest. Maurdire allowed her afew seconds ahead before he eaisly corned her, turning to face her. 

"Were are you going? Theres no rush" His silky voice came out like spiders thread, thick, and coating the doe, bounding her so tightly she could hardly breathe. The doe shook her head, unable to speak. 

"You know what they say?" Maudires voice spun more thread around the timid doe. Again the doe shook her head.

"They say life without pain and death has no meaning..." Maudire paused for dramatic effect. The doe became a blur of terror, dreading what this meant. 

"Leah, I wish to give your life meaning" Maudire would have killed the doe, but his thoughts went deeper. He needed a son, perhaps this doe would give him one. 

"I'm not going to kill you" Maudire smirked. The doe relaxed a little. 

"But you'll provide me with a son" 

                                                              Trotzen and Palugit

The light was fading, creating new shadows and dark patches around Palugit. Eyes glimmered from tree hollows. The wind wailed between distorted trunks, carrying the sickly stink of wood rot. She moved faster, ignoring the briars that caught at her legs, the damp leaves that grimed her fur.

Palugit lifted my face, letting the light and shadow dance across her fur. Bees hummed in and out of the pennyroyal. She inhaled its minty smell and continued on, delighting in the sound of her hooves sliding through the leaves.The full moon gleamed in the pitch black sky of the night, in a distance owls chattered loudly sending chills down her spine. As she moved cautiously through the deserted forest, twigs cracked under her feet placing fright in her every step, beads of sweat gathered on her forehead. The wind whistled over her and she could feel her own fright consuming her bit by bit. The tall trees made eerie shadows on the ground. Where she stood, the silhouette of swaying branches printed a picture in her mind that human hands were about to grab her from behind. But she was safe for now. But she wanted to be alone to do this. She had a fawn due on and didn't want to be near any other deer. 

She sat in the thickit, the wind swirling around her until she felt a pain in her belly. There was a cool breeze whistling through the tree branches overhead. The light of the moon poked through in splotches onto the rocks and pine needles scattered throughout the forest. The only sound was the wind ... and the cry of a small fawn. Palugit breathed heavily. The fawn crawled up against her parent, her bright blue eyes looked at her mother. Palugit smiled. The fawn was beautiful. It was a golden brown like it's father and had a  brown head. Like herself the fawn had blue eyes that blinked at Palugit with curiosity. The fawns muzzel and chest were cream as were the inner front legs but half way down the belly it became orange. The fawn's eye ring were also orange. She could cope, and perhaps the fawn's father could too, even if his first fawn had died. 

                                                                           Maudire    

Leah pushed her fawns closer to her. She was terrified of their father. One was a girl, a golden brown. The fawns muzzel and belly were 100% cream. Her head was a brown and her eyes were a beautiful emreled green. Leah wasn't sure how Trotzen would respond. The other was a buck. The buck was a light brown. He had bright green eyes and a dark chocolate head.Like his father he had a fluff area on his neck that was hazel. His front socks were chesnut and his back socks were grey at the top and brown at the bottem. His eye rings, muzzel, and belly were cream and his eye lids were the same as his head.Leah called him ash, and the girl Misty. She hoped Maudire would be kinder to his children than he was to her. The fawn's were playing togehter which pleased Leah.

In the distance she could see the huge shape of Maudire and Swift tail coming towards the herd and pushed her fawns closer still. In  a minute a terrifying buck entered the meadow. This was Maudire and next to him was a smaller, but still large stag. This was swift tail. Next to him was his son. He was a brown colour with a chestnut head. His left antler had a crack in, probably from fighting. His eyes were blue.Half way down his back his stripe became grey then became a triangle on his flank. His muzzel and belly were cream and his socks were dark grey and his eyes were blue. This buck was prancing about. Maudire glared at him and the fawn settled down. Then Maudire came over to Leah.

"You better impress me" He hissed at the doe "What have you got?" Leah pushed forwards the doe. 

"This is Misty" She told him a determind look in her eyes. 

"Why name it unless it's going to be of use?" Maudire snorted. Leah glared but didn't say a word. 

"And this is Ash" Leah pushed forwards the small buck. 

"Thank you for presenting me with a son even if you also gave me a daughter" Maudire snorted then he leaned down towards Ash.

"One day you'll fight with your father" maudire felt insulted when the fawn didn't answer.

"Isn't that RIGHT!?" He shouted at the buck, but Ash stared blankly. 

"He's deaf" Leah told him, but shrank back as soon as she said it. Maudires eyes flashed a dangerous colour. 

"You are useless, a girl and a DEAF buck?!" Maudire swung his body upwards and advanced threateningly towrds the doe. 

"You good for nothing ..." His tone and pace increased with each step. But a whimper behind him made him look around it was Misty. He glared at Leah but the whimper came again. He would have to dispose of this doe.

Turning he said:

"Do you want to take a walk with your father?" He asked Misty who nodded. Leah shook her head but Maudire flashed a warning glance at her. 

"Go and play with the fawns" Leah urged him but Ash stood on the spot looking at her. Leah reared up slitley as if playing then pointed to the meadow. Ash shook his head watching his sister fade into the distance. He waited for days but never saw his sister. Then one day whilst in the meadow he thought he saw her again ... 

                                                                            Trotzen and Zora                                             

"You get back here!" Trotzen yelled after his daughter. He was running down a steep hill,  leafs flying off in every angle. Abov him birds chirped in the trees. Suddenyl he hit a rock and fell head over hoofs downwards. When he got his bearings back he parted the bushed to the left of him to see his daugther near a meadow. She was grazing lightly on the grass. Trotzen was about to charge fowards when he realized if he went another step he would fall to his doom. Then he noticed a buck had come forwards to face his daughter. Trotzen flatened his ears and growled which was a hard thing for a deer to do. The buck stood out from the herd, speaking of which herd was this? Meanwhile grazing Zora became aware of a fawn aproach her. She looked up and smiled but the Buck backed away. She smiled trying to show the buck she was friendly. 

"What's your name?" She asked. The buck didn't answer. 

"What's your name?" She repeated. The buck looked towards his ears then gulped. Zora guessed he was deaf. 

"I'm Zora" The buck shook his head. Zora looked around, then she pointed to the sky. It was Dawn. Then she drew a contry in the ground. Ash saw the country and knew what she meant. Her name was Zora. 

"I'm Ash" He said but he couldn't hear himself speak so he said it again louder, but Zora nodded. She took a step towards him but he ran off. 

At this point Trotzen had reached the meadow and grabbed his daughter and dragged her