Untaken Path - Ch 13: Passing

Author : Feathervenom

Date sent : October 31, 2012

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : Okay, NOW Nacht makes a terrible discovery. Skander and Kaiser are growing up and meet a few friends and foes in their home. Trar begins to plan a terrible plot to destroy Bambi's herd once and for all, and even in the high times of spring and summer with no herdened antlers about, he executes it...

Length : Very short -

Characters :
3304 visits



Read the fanfic

Download the fanfic :   HTML   -   PDF   -   TXT  



Return to Bambi Source


                  PG (Parental guidance suggested)
Untaken Path - Ch 13: Passing
By Feathervenom

Go to the writer's section

This fanfic was rated PG (Parental guidance suggested).


Comments

3305 visits

Report this fanfic Report this fanfic

Last comments

November 03, 2012
V Indeed it would! I'm debating on whether or not I'm going to do the next chapter today or not... I haven't been in the mood for doing anything much other than watching Youtube due to currently suffering from tonsilitis, but maybe writing and making others suffer will make me feel better. XD I dunno, it works in its own twisted way... only in fiction though...

November 03, 2012
Usa Female
Very awesome chapter! I must say, I'm loving Kaiser's innocence; the way he openly talks about seeing spirits even though most others don't believe him. Doesn't seem to bother the little fellow, does it? And what is Nacht planning to do with this new herd, I wonder? What's Bambi planning? I'm very excited about the next chapter as I'm sure everyone else is; so don't keep us waiting! ;)

And, as a side note, I would be too happy to design a fawn for Lihua and Nacht. That would make for an interesting character and design....

November 01, 2012
Uk Female
Why is this story so addictive and makes me want more!? lol XD. keep up the good work Feather, Kaiser is such a cutie!

November 01, 2012
Uk
Wow very dramatic, just the way I like it! No sign of Calemvir for a few chapters though. XD

November 01, 2012
Usa Female
Nacht is like Sona in Who Kiled Zaina. Sona is a name. It means the end in Turkish.

Guest
Guest
November 01, 2012
(True. XD)

November 01, 2012
(If we were, you'd be so dead. XD)

Guest
Guest
November 01, 2012
Yes, I like asking.XD (Good that we're not in St. Aegolius...)

November 01, 2012
So many questions! XD Yes, Kaiser's terribly cute. XD And yeah, not many girls like being ordered around, but I based this particular phenomenon on a girl in my Winterguard who had a boyfriend by the name of, well, Leif. And I hate him. He's out of highschool, a cheater, ordered her around, and I swear he had to have STDs if that means anything. :\ So yeah, Maple can do better.
Yes, it's hereditary. Nacht passed the ability to see spirits over to his children, but apparently Kaiser got it a bit more than either his father or brother, which is why he "Sees" the wind. It is odd, isn't it?
Nacht isn't stupid, no - he really did ridicule himself for not seeing it coming. He was sure ticked off. (I actually planned on raising the chapter rating to PG-13 and having him kill an innocent rabbit or something, but then I couldn't bring myself to just yet. Anyway, yeah, it's awfully difficult to feel sorry for Trar.
And I haven't considered the fawn's design - that'll probably go to Roach if she wants to, since I'm lazy. :P
And nah, this is a new herd, not Bambi's.
Things just got worse for Bambi.

Guest
Guest
November 01, 2012
Aw, Kaiser is such a cute little fellow. Stupid Leaf. Why did Maple go with him? Can't she stand up for herself? (I can just judge by my experience, but most girls I know, especially me, DON'T like being ordered around.)
The thing with the Spirits is very interesting. I guess since Nacht saw death and these nymphs, he can see them, too, and passed it over to them? But I agree with Leaf, it's a little weird.
And Nacht is...well, Nacht. But I can't understand he didn't see it coming. I mean, yes, Nacht is cruel, but he isn't stupid. Well....*shrugs* I would feel sorry for Trar, but...no. Just no.
I wonder what Nacht's and Lihua's fawn will look like. Who will design him/her? You or Roach?
And last but not least...was it Bambi's herd Nacht spotted?

Previous

Previous
1 2



Not connected : To be able to post a message site, you must be connected.

Register on the site!