Untaken Path - Ch 13: Moments of Peace

Author : Feathervenom

Date sent : October 22, 2012

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : While Ronno recovers in Bambi's herd, and the fawns grow, Nacht makes a dark discovery.

Length : Very short -

Characters :
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Untaken Path - Ch 13: Moments of Peace
By Feathervenom

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October 30, 2012
Yes... He really should...

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October 30, 2012
Shouldn't Skander be in the character list?

October 30, 2012
Usa Female
Nicely done! It's good to have a calm scene every now and then :P Loved Skander's introduction! :)

October 27, 2012
Uk
Aww, quite short but it is a break from all the horrible evil stuff. Can't wait for the next chapter :P ( I've already seen hotel Transylvania its brilliant and really funny ( I can tell you about it, but I've already said I'm not going to ruin surprises for MLW )

October 27, 2012
Oh, you tell me how that movie is! It's one of the most interesting looking CGIs I've every seen. (Now, the best I've seen story-wise is DEFINATELY How to Train your Dragon, but the most beautiful animation I've ever seen CGI-wise is either Happyfeet or Legend of the Guardians. However, Traditional style, Felidae, a rather adult but very interesting movie - german, actually. About cats. Not for the squeamish... very, very gory.) Anyway, you'll learn more later... can't give anything away now!

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October 27, 2012
If you tell me now that Huckleberry somehow survived (judging by what Hige commented), then I'm going to hit my head against the wall. Or...no, better the pillow. I'm going to go to the movies tomorrow (Hotel Transyllvania, yey!), I don't want to have headache.

October 27, 2012
Yup, I looked up German names and found Kaiser and quite liked it, so I took it. ^^ I'm glad you like this chapter. I don't need too much dark content right now, being that one of my rabbits has malocclution(His teeth are very long and he can't barely eat and is biting his lip), and he's one of my favorite dwarf Hotots in the barn, and I'm currently hoping to herald happy times in my rhinelander program ahead, as I just got nine new babies today. Two died, one of which looked like it had internal issues anyway, but given that I still have the other seven, it isn't that bad a loss. Anyway, yep, I'll find a good place to introduce some more characters soon as well as bring in one you probably didn't realize would EVER be introduced again. ;) But other than that, yeah, it's light and fluffly! I dunno if I'll bring back the River though.

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October 27, 2012
Kaiser? Hm, did you take the German word or is there another meaning to it? Just curious.
The chapter was really a nice surprise to all the heavy, dark chapters we've read before. I actually quite like it, some playing fawns are always nice. Great work.
(Oh, and I will add Kaiser's name in Noir's bio.)

October 27, 2012
Chapter 13 - almost certainly the lightest and softest yet. We all need a bit of a break from the darker themes, huh?




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