Descendant of the stars chapter 11: Split

Author : JetxLucy

Date sent : October 20, 2012

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : After Swift tail split the herd into two new herds, the deer that went with him, the ones that remained loyal. But the other herd has a problem, who will lead them? And what connection do they have with Swift tail?

Length : Short -

Characters :
Ronno
Ronno
Sterk
Sterk
Poza
Poza
Cervola
Cervola
Faline
Faline
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Descendant of the stars chapter 11: Split
By JetxLucy

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October 25, 2012
Uk
That's what I was worried about. Chapter 6-10 I've slowed down, but this was a crammed chapter. Oops.

Guest
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October 25, 2012
Good chapter, I like it. But take it slower, describe things better. There are so many things happening in one chapter, one can easily lose focus.

October 25, 2012
Uk
Chapter 11 it is! I hope it's ok.


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