Untaken Path - Ch 12: The Begining

Author : Feathervenom

Date sent : October 18, 2012

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : Unexpected visitors arrive in Bambi's herd, Herla becomes aware of a way to use himself. Lihua begins putting her plan into action, and Huckleberry soon makes a daring decision.

Length : Short -

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Untaken Path - Ch 12: The Begining
By Feathervenom

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October 19, 2012
Usa Female
Good chapter Feather!

October 18, 2012
Uk Female
Oh my god!That was amazing, and Nuuu Huckleberry! But....*Smirks* You know I know something about that... XD

October 18, 2012
Uk
I love it! And no there is no contest. I just like surprises

October 18, 2012
Usa Female
That's very true ;) Lemon ought to be grateful that Lihua doesn't break her own promises XD

October 18, 2012
Haaaaa I totally forgot! XD yes, she is! But Lihua DID promise herself not to use it on an animal...

October 18, 2012
Usa Female
I'd also like to add that Lemon is SO lucky that Lihua didn't use her Kung Fu on her XD

October 18, 2012
Usa Female
The reactions of your readers are just as exciting as the story ^_^ Lihua...what a clever witch lol Very awesome so far!!! And I must say, nice little insight for Nacht there...He will get his just deserts. :P Even though he's my character, I'll be glad to see that! Can't wait to see what's next!

Guest
Guest
October 18, 2012
My friends always say I'm a seven-year-old in an seventeen-year-old's body. Although I can be deathly serious, I'm mostly in that cheerful making-people-laugh state. ^^
(Now I have to tell my best friend that Ronno is not dead...she will like that. She was really upset about it. ^^ And no, she doesn't read your fanfic herself, although I would like if she did. But for one thing, she hasn't got much time for reading because of her work, and she doesn't like reading English.)

October 18, 2012
I smile at your somments. XD no, no contest. I was just excited to see how you would respond to the reveal in this chapter. The thing is he fell into a semi-coma state, and had a concussion. He would have gotten to Bambi sooner if he hadn't had a brain squish. Anyway, yeahhh, Lihua... Bit of a female-dog indeed. XD and it works for her. Anyway, exciting chapter!

Guest
Guest
October 18, 2012
SPOILER ALERT!
*dancing around in circles, cheering* Ronno lives! Ronno lives! *calming down and mourning poor Huckleberry.* Or is Huckleberry alive? No, death was there, Huckleberry must be dead.
Aww, cute little fawns. :D
And I knew Herla wouldn't give up. I like this guy, really.
About Lihua...She's such a...no, I won't write that word with b. You know what I mean.

One question...why the hell do both you and JxL so desperately want to surprise or shock me or make me solve riddles?! Is this some kind of contest?!

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