Angel belongs to Kovu lover ( Nicki)
Siege Rye (C) feather venom
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The buck turned, his eyes filled with self pleasure. He had escaped from the hunters gun, that shot, but never once hit him. The confused farmer meanwhile, tried looking with binoculars, but the buck was way to clever for the small mind of the farmer. Suddenly, the weather changed, and heavy rain poured over the land. Eventually, the farmer decided he had died, and went back into his house to shelter. Tricheur pulled a victory sign with his antlers, then realized the heavy rain was heading his way, and decided to pick up the pace. Soon enough though, the rotten weather caught him, and Tricheur had to find shelter. This was not slightly heavy rain, but the kind were it was now so grey, that Tricher could not see his own hoof infront of his face. The rain came down so hard, that it stung his eyes, and pelted him constently. Without warning the sky darkened down to pitch black with tiny patches of deep blue peeping through. The heavy clouds hung ominously low, covering the hills. The animals took cover as the first flash of bright lightening zigzaged across the sky, illuminating the clouds. Thunder followed, with a crash that rattled the trees, and farmers houses. Rain came pelting down, smashing against the rocks, and streams. Another burst of lightening brightened the dark sky, immediately followed by a low rumble. More rain falls down hard, crushing the new roots of plants and the leaves of growing trees. The third crack of lightening hits a power line, in the far east, sending luminous sparks into the air like a fireworks. Lights from houses in the far distance flickered into nothing.
But Tricheur had to keep on going, despite the distractions. A large oak tree stood alone in the middle of a meadow, and Tricheur decided to shelter under it. A foolish decision, as the lightning struck the top branches, setting them on fire. The bright orange flames fell on the dry grass underneath the tree, setting the entire meadow on fire in a sheet of orange flame. Amongst the flames, Tricheur struggled to survive, his lungs filled with vile black smoke, that was being emitted from the flames. Near by, a large dam loomed quite near the meadow, and Tricheur saw it as his chance for survival. The dam was being weaken by the flames, and the rain had stopped, so no water was putting any of the smoke out. Tricheur kicked the dam once, that's all it took.
The dam burst open like a rugby ball from scum, and flooded the whole field in grey water, leaving Ticheur in no better situation, as the water was getting into his lungs. Forcing his eyelids open, Tricheur saw the mass body of water was heading towards a near by herd of deer, and animals that had just emerged from after the rain shot back into their dens. Eventually, Tricheur passed out, as the wave swept and rolled over the herds entire ground.
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Bambi called the deer and animals of the herds names out one by one.
" Swallow tail?"
" Check!"
" Adrian?"
" HERE!"
" Rae?"
" Present!"
" Lilly?"
" Yes"
" Rita?"
" Affirmative!"
" Ronno?" Bambi narrowed his eyes, watching for his old enemies move.
" Here your majesty" Ronno scoffed. Bambi shook his head gruffly.
" Faline?" His tone was anxious. Bambi heard a small cough from somewhere and was satisfied.
" Vertrou, Bukuri, Nocere, Lojalis and Sanft?" Bambi finished.
" Here!" The first four coursed.
" Sanft?" Bambi repeated.
" Here" A shy voice came. Bambi sighed. Of course he felt sympathy for Sanft, losing Chestnut, but Bambi could do nothing about it. Bambi also recalled the memory of when Vertrou told his daughter about what happened, and she had become even more quiet since then. Vertrou had then had a quick change in heart and had handed the forest over to Bambi. Bambi thought this rather easy, but was not expecting an unexpected attack... yet.
" So we are all here!" Bambi was satisfied. Then he remembered something.
" Where is the buck that was on top of that wave?" He asked. The forest animals shuffled and coughed, but no one knew the answer in particular.
" I'm here!" Tricheur called, barging through the crowds. Bambi noticed 9 does crying at the back, each helped by one another, but Bambi was to perplexed about why this buck was here to notice.
" All of you may leave, but I'm keeping ur" Bambi looked at the buck
" Tricheur"
" But I'm keeping Tricheur here" The other forest animals turned and left.
" So what happened Tricheur?" Bambi asked softly, for he was concerned.
" Well..." Tricheur started, and began his tale.
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Sanft strolled along, head held down, memories of Chestnut flooding through her. She was rather curios of this " Tricheur " character. Rumors and gossip that spread showed that he had cheated and broken 9 does hearts already. Sanft did not want this to happen, especially since she already had a massive rip in her love life. She did not want this rip to become a hole. Mulling over these thoughts, Sanft headed towards the meadow, but was stopped by a large stag, blocking her path. Ronno shook his head, swatting a near by mosquito whilst moving closer towards the retreating doe. but another stag backed her up against the bolder close to her. Both the bucks were threating and Sanft dared to ask;
" Ronno, I know you spilt up with May, but were is Angel?" Sanfts voice got higher on each word. Ronno shrugged.
" For now, who cares?"
" Kral, were is Rye?" Sanft tried to hide her feelings.
" Out for a walk with Siege " He sighed.
" So what are you doing?"
" Rounding deer up"
Sanft looked left and right.
" Why?"
" Yeah, why?" Kral looked at Ronno.
" Why not?" Ronno said.
" Because you'll have to go through me. " Tricheur stepped out, his large antlers threating to gore.
" Kral, Hey KRAL!" Rye called in the distance. Siege was next to her.
" Gotta go!" Kral called, and shot off like a bird.
" COWARD!" Ronno called after the rapidly withdrawing figure.
" Ronno!" Angel and May called.
" Go meet your girly friends!" Tricheur smiled.
" I..." Ronno began
" RONNO!" Angel snapped.
" Going!" Ronno walked towards Angel and may, tail between legs like a puppy that had just been disciplined.
" Thanks for saving me ... I think" Sanft smiled.
" No worries" Trichuer faked a smile.
Meanwhile a doe in the meadow stood alone crying, after her heart had been crushed.
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Bambi stood alone in his den, waiting for some news of any sort. Later, he would wish for another kind of news than the one that came. To scouts rushed into the den, panting and out of breath. The first one attempted to speak.
" weweresearchingintheforestwhenwesawsomeonemissingandwethoughtweshouldcometoyoubecauseyouknowherthedoethatisbetterthananyoneandswifttailandidecidedtoseeyoufirstratherthananyonelseifyouknowwhatimean!!!!!!!!" Henry the first scout blurted out.
Swift tail the second scout had resumed some of his breath and said much more clearly
" When that flood came and you checked everyone, you must have thought you heard an answer, but didn't!"
Bambi nodded his head, showing Henry could continue.
" Faline's gone you majesty."
Bambi's heart stopped.
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-> FV: I'll take this as a compliment. :D Well, you had me shocked at
the end of the last chapter, for I was TOTALLY not expecting you would
kill him. (Since everybody seems to love this particular character.) |
| October 14, 2012 | ||
Auuugh~ Just finished reading! Wonderful chapter. I'm very pleased,
actually, to see Rye and Seige! ^^ |
| October 14, 2012 | ||
MLW is a VERY observant one... she makes it a bit difficult for me
even to surprise her, since she's so good at snagging up hints, but
I've got something ingenious enough on hand that even she'll be
surprised. ![]() |
| October 14, 2012 | ||
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Ok. You have a clever eye, but I'd chestnut died then the timelines
may have altered... |
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No! Not Faline! But wait, she was there in the story Chestnut told, so
I figured out she must be fine. Anyway, your story is getting more and
more interesting. Another thing, since I joined your contest, could you PM me and tell me something about that lost herd thing? I would like to get my character up soon. |