Decendant of the stars chapter 4: tricks

Author : JetxLucy

Date sent : September 20, 2012

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : The new genaration have finally reached maturity, and Vertrous decides the forest is his one way or another. But in attempt to kill the great prince, Vertrous due to a certain change if a events, makes a deal with Matfuso, in exchange for Matfuso life.... And Bambi battles Ronno again, and Vertrou decided this time Lojalis is his!

Length : Short -

Characters :

Friend Owl	Mena	Thumper	The Great Pr...	Flower	Nocere
	Ronno	Lojalis	Bambi	Faline	Bluebelle
	Miss Bunny	Bambi's moth...

2892 visits

Read the fanfic

Download the fanfic : HTML - PDF - TXT

Return to Bambi Source

PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Decendant of the stars chapter 4: tricks

By JetxLucy

Click to read

This fanfic was rated PG (Parental guidance suggested).

Comments

2893 visits

Report a problem

Report this fanfic

Last comments


Falinelo ver101	September 23, 2012

Yes I am.


JetxLucy	September 23, 2012

Ohhhhh! Good at guessing are you ?


Falinelo ver101	September 23, 2012

The familiar voice is Bukuri.


Featherv enom	September 22, 2012

Oh, just make her flame a (censored) duller.


JetxLucy	September 22, 2012

Yes they say she's a sparkle because of her flame


Guest	September 22, 2012

Well, there are many fights in your story. And don't get me wrong, they are well described, but you don't get the deer (and the readers, for that matter) a chance to breath. We just rush from one fight to the next. I'm excited to find out what happens next.
Oh, and by the way; did Bukuris char page get deactivated?


JetxLucy	September 22, 2012

My little world what do you think of the chapter?


Falinelo ver101	September 21, 2012

Great just putting finishing touches on Lojalis.


Featherv enom	September 20, 2012

Very nice! I am excited for the next one.


JetxLucy	September 20, 2012

Yay chapter 4

Return