Descendant of the stars Chapter 3: Bukuri

Author : JetxLucy

Date sent : September 16, 2012

Rating : PG (Parental guidance suggested)

Category : Epic

Description : After Vertrous gave his brave speech friend owl takes him and Lojalis to meet the great prince to explain what they are doing, and Vertrous decides that Nocere and him will battle for Lojalis again. And Mena gets an unwanted surprise, by an old friend

Length : Very short -

Characters :

Thumper	The Great Pr...	Flower	Mena	Nocere	Ronno
	Bambi	Lojalis	Faline	Bambi's moth...	Friend Owl

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Descendant of the stars Chapter 3: Bukuri

By JetxLucy

This fanfic was rated PG (Parental guidance suggested).

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Guest	September 18, 2012

Aww, Bukari is so cute. I can understand that you want to keep her for yourself. But even though it's your story, I freaking HATE that all of your bad guys kill/want to kill (let's face it, in Herd from the North, Prince didn't die. He wouldn't be able to befriend Ataneq if he was dead) The Great Prince. Really, think of something unique. (And even though Prince will most likely die in my story, it will be of old age, for a change).
The chapter was well written, though. I quite liked it, actually.


JetxLucy	September 18, 2012

Yay chapter 3

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