It is spelt Bukuri reading it I noticed I spelt it Bujari several times.

A actually it was more because I need some of my own characters in my own fan fic, you know what I mean?

I love this chapter and Bukari. I think you want her because you like her the best.

Thanks for that, do you like this chapter FV?

Heh, actually I did it first. XD I dislike cliches, too, but I bet it the Herd from the North it wa planned before my chapter, and I had to kill him for Trar's character-establishing moment.

I wrote my second coming while you did, so I couldn't see you changed your mind. :D Sorry for critizing you, but you know what people say...Everyone's a critic.

No he's not going to die, I'm keeping it different your right

I did mean Feather and Saske, too. I was just saying that we now have three storys (FV's, Saske's and yours) that have Prince murdered by another deer. And although I usually read almost anything, I can't stand something like that. I don't now who came up with the "Hey, let's kill Prince so someone can take over his herd/forest!" idea first and I like all three stories, but I'm getting annoyed.

Actually your so right, he's not going to die, but he is going to lose power...

Hmm, I need him to die, keep the next part of my story alive, but it will be in away, so that it was accidental , you'll see in chapter 4, I feel sorry for him, but to keep the next part running he needs to die in a unique way. And I don't think all my bad characters do want to kill, I'm not shouting at you for accusing me because I know your not.