Ronno                     

" Well maybe you should say that to the great prince himself!" The owl hesitated. 

" What are you doing here, may I ask?" The owl questioned.

" Picking unnecessary fights!" Kral yelled, backed up by Ronno who said;

" I didn't do any thing, big boned antlers here did all the hurting, I was just claming victory over Bambi, then silver guy here bashed into me, I defended myself, and he starts hurting the innocent" Ronno boasted. Vertrous growled. 

" Is that so? Well we'll see!" He muttered softly, in such a warning tone, even Ronno stopped boasting. Vertrous shook his head, spoling for a fight. 

" Ahem " The owl said " can someone explain their purpose?" He asked, looking at Vertrous and Lojalis. 

" They came into the forest, and Vertrous started battling" Faline told the owl

" Lojalis stopped it" Bambi mentioned. 

" And that" Faline nodded. 

" Well, we'll see" The owl coughed, indicating Lojalis and Vertrous to follow him. As Lojalis turned to go, she turned back to Nocere. 

" Hopefully I'll see you again, my brave hero" Lojalis smiled.

" Yeah, see you" Nocere blushed. As she turned back, Lojalis turned around once more, and licked Nocere on the cheek. Nocere went beet root. 

" Twitterpated" Friend owl tutted, looking back " Let's go!" He called. 

" Nocere and Lojalis sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G" Thumper teased.Flower shyly hid. Nocere didn't respond, he watched Lojalis and Vertrous fade into the distance. 

                                                   Mena, Fawn and Hässlich

 

A great silver buck entered the den. Mena froze. He was every thing she remembered. Huge, silver, over sized antlers and ... deeply battle scared. He was ugly, Mena hated to admit it. But the scars were new. Last time Mena saw him, he was only strange. Mena hated to ask, she thought it would seem rude. Fawn did not want to get on the wrong side of this buck. He was bigger and more powerful than Matfuso himself! Combat, he would win. Fawn shuddered at the thought. 

" Mena I would like to introduce my daughter, Bukari " He smiled, his voice was slightly gruff, but Mena looked into the eye that was not scarred, and remembered all those happy memoriries how he had abandoned them. No how she had abandoned them. Mena mentally corrected. A young, quite pretty fawn stepped out. She looked like her father, silver, white spots running all over her, but at the same time she looked different, unique. She couldn't have been younger than Bambi, Ronno or Faline. Mena and Fawn both recognized her age. Like her father, she had a marking, but in the shape of a red, orange and Yellow flame, quite a remarkable contrast. Fawn thought, she feared saying this out loud might turn the bucks attention, whether Fawn liked it or not. As Hässlich turned to talk to Mena, who was shaking, but both the does grew more confidant, Bukuri turned to the entrance, and saw two fawns near her age, and a bird in the distance and decided to follow them. 

                                                Meeting Vertrous and Lojalis 

It was sunset, and the sky was tinged with pinks , reds and oranges. A yellow sun was setting slowly in the far east.  The distant figures shadows blended in with the sea of beautiful sky colours. It was cold, but as cold as she was, Bukari was determined to carry on. Just as she was half way there, a blizzard came. It wasn't big, but even at her age she was vulnerable. As Bukari lay shivering in he snow, she saw the three figures making their way towards her, she smiled, others were coming to her rescue. 

Bukuri woke up, she was safely in a den, and this time, a great big deer was standing over her. Bukuri gasped. The deer looked down at her. 

" Why are you and the other deer in the forest?" He asked. Bukuri gulped. 

" My father, he's here" 

" Who's that?" The huge brown buck asked. 

" Ur, his names urr .... Hässlich!" The fawn recalled. 

" Hässlich is still here? I thought he was killed by the ..." The great brown stag trailed off. Bukari was curious but knew not to pester this stag. 

" Your highness" said a bird. So the stag was king. Bukari noted. " The deer say they are lost, please allow them to join this herd." The King thought it over. 

" I'll agree, but when your adults, I want no trouble causing, to many deaths nearly happen ... " Matfuso shook his head of the memories. The owl followed him, making shooing gestures. It was then that Bukari noticed the other two fawns were similar to her. The buck of the fawns walked over. 

" What are you doing here, We thought we were the only ones left of this race!" He growled. Bukari scrunched up. 

" And that's a bad thing? Listen to yourself Vertrous, you wanted another doe of your species, here you have one" 

" Your right about the first part, but if Nocere wants a silver backed doe, he can have that one" Vertrous shook his head. The doe fawn shook her head.

" come on .. ur" 

" Bukari" Bukari smiled. 

" Come on Bukari, I'm Lojalis by the way" Lojalis smiled, as Bukari joined them. As Vertrous looked at her, he noticed she was the same age, but she was allot smaller. For some reason, Vertrous suddenly felt very protective of this doe. She was the only other doe of the species left, besides Lojalis. Bukari looked at Vertrous, and he noticed she was actually quite pretty. Vertrous felt something, but he shook off the feeling, and concentrated on the path back to Bambi. 



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September 19, 2012
Uk
It is spelt Bukuri reading it I noticed I spelt it Bujari several times.

September 19, 2012
Uk
A actually it was more because I need some of my own characters in my own fan fic, you know what I mean?

September 19, 2012
Usa Female
I love this chapter and Bukari. I think you want her because you like her the best.

September 18, 2012
Uk
Thanks for that, do you like this chapter FV?

September 18, 2012
Heh, actually I did it first. XD I dislike cliches, too, but I bet it the Herd from the North it wa planned before my chapter, and I had to kill him for Trar's character-establishing moment.

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Guest
September 18, 2012
I wrote my second coming while you did, so I couldn't see you changed your mind. :D Sorry for critizing you, but you know what people say...Everyone's a critic.

September 18, 2012
Uk
No he's not going to die, I'm keeping it different your right

Guest
Guest
September 18, 2012
I did mean Feather and Saske, too. I was just saying that we now have three storys (FV's, Saske's and yours) that have Prince murdered by another deer. And although I usually read almost anything, I can't stand something like that. I don't now who came up with the "Hey, let's kill Prince so someone can take over his herd/forest!" idea first and I like all three stories, but I'm getting annoyed.

September 18, 2012
Uk
Actually your so right, he's not going to die, but he is going to lose power...

September 18, 2012
Uk
Hmm, I need him to die, keep the next part of my story alive, but it will be in away, so that it was accidental , you'll see in chapter 4, I feel sorry for him, but to keep the next part running he needs to die in a unique way. And I don't think all my bad characters do want to kill, I'm not shouting at you for accusing me because I know your not.

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