Hmm that's not what mena thinks ...

I think I'm starting to understand Vertrous's personality, and I feel so sorry for Hasslich! He can't be that bad!

I know, its's spelt like that, But google translate wouldn't let me copy it, so I had to write it and I dont have the points on the a type. The reason he fought is just to show what kind of personality he has, I do realize other wise, thanks for the nice comment.

Just a tip, it's not written hasslich. It's writtren hässlich with little points on the a.
Aside that, the chapter was very well written and interesting. But normaly, bucks only fight for a doe when another buck threathens to take her. They don't just charge at any buck they see.
But I liked this chapter, though. Great work!