Ronno and Bambi's fight

Bambi and Ronno crashed. The impact sent Bambi reeling. He recovered, and charged at Ronno, who fell backwards. Ronno was enjoying this now. Bambi reared up, Ronno repeating. Ronno and Bambi used their arms to battle. Eventually, Ronno got bored, and hit Bambi in the chest. Bambi staggered back, his eyes popping, all the breath knocked out of him. 

" Ha!" Ronno cried, and attempted to stomp on Bambi, Bambi didn't move away in time, and his breath was once more lost to the impact of Ronno's hoofs. Bambi wasn't thinking of the ancient poem now, As Ronno hit him in the chest again, Bambi saw distant lights and the world went temporarily black. Just as Ronno was about to Ram into Bambi who was lying still on he floor, another Buck came, and crashed into him. Ronno fell full body onto Bambi, Getting tangled with Bambi's limbs. Ronno turned round to face this bold challenger, and what he saw made him freeze.    

                     

                                                        Fawn and Mena

Meanwhile, Fawn and Mena were discussing old times, and Mena said how glad she was that Fawn and Bambi had survived. Fawn was saying how she remembered Mena never had a fight from a buck. 

" Never wanted one really" Mena sighed 

" Only Matfuso would have done" 

" Yes but he's mine" Fawn playfully teased. 

" We'll see!" Mena laughed, chasing Fawn playfully, as she ran, Mena remembered something. Another stag she could have had ... Mena stopped, Memories flowing through her. That buck.The green forest swirled into the frozen gray wasteland were Mena had met the one as a teenager. Mena saw him now, Stuck in a hunters trap, Mena knew she had to help him. She darted towards the buck, and pulled him out. The buck thanked her and together they ran to a safe place. But it was night, so Mena didn't see his full body, only his silhouette. The buck told of his name, but the sound of the gun outside drowned his words. 

" My names Mena" Mena had told the buck. 

" Mena ... what a beautiful name, fits such a perfect doe" The buck had said. 

" Please come into the light so I can see you" Mena asked. The shadowed figure of the buck shook his head. Mena had been disappointed but did not pester the buck. Every few weeks Mena would visit the shadowed Buck, but he never reveled himself. Mena had wanted to see his full body, his silhouette was impressive enough. He couldn't look terrible, and Anyway, Mena liked him so much, she didn't care. In fact she grew alt of feeling towards the buck, and one day she was brave enough to say

" I love you" To the buck. Mena and the shadowed buck began meeting more often, and Mena thought he was the one. But the happiness had to end.  Then one day, Mena decided to visit the buck in secret, so she visited his den, and looked through a " Window" When she saw the Buck in full body out of the light. Mena couldn't stand the sight of such a strange buck, even though she was in love. Mena ran away, never looking back once... But she was young, she had not wished to see that buck, not even an alien could look so un- deer like. He was a deer certainly, but not one she had seen.

The forest swirled into green again, and Mena saw Fawn coming over. 

" Mena?" Was all Mena heard as she collapsed to the floor. 

 

                                                         Ronno

The buck was silver, not white, silver. He had white spots running all over him. His head back and tail were deep brown. He had brown socks in a  very strange shape that bounced up and down. Lower, the pattern repeated into light chocolate. His eyes and muzzle were cream, and the rest of his underside purpley-grayish. His hair hung over both sides of his eye's and his eyes them self were deep grassy-green. The bucks antlers were also different. Ronno did not like this buck, actually, he saw him as a potential threat. 

" Who dares crash into me?" Ronno yelled at the buck. Ronno hoped the buck was not brave, or at least he hoped he was stupid. 

" Whoever did that is very brave, or very stupid" Ronno glared at the buck. 

" It was me!" The buck shouted back, coming closer, Ronno fell, crashing into a tree, just as Bambi stirred. 

Bambi also gasped. The buck had locked with Ronno's antlers, and was swinging him about all ways. Ronno was gaining nothing but a massive head ache. The buck stopped, pulling back and releasing Ronno,Just as Ronno was coming back into focus, The buck rammed with Ronno's antlers again, shaking them left and right, until eventually, Ronno fought back, pushing against the buck with the bucks own strength. The buck fell back, his opponent was strong, but he had an even better tactic. Whatever move Ronno did, The buck immediately changed to that tactic, so both of the fawns were even, then when Ronno was getting furriated, The Buck rammed into his antlers again, and shook his head, until Ronno fainted on the floor. Kral stepped forwards, he was not going to put up with his best friend being bullied like that. Kral was smaller than Ronno but he had more agility, and was light footed on his feet. But The buck also defeated him. Several bucks tackled him, until Bambi decided to sort this fight out himself. He rammed into the bucks side, but the buck paid him no attention, as he simply pulled back, and rammed Bambi in the side. The forest swam, but Bambi stayed awake. 

Nocere was pushed forwards by other bulling bucks, to which the strong buck grabbed his antlers, and he to shook Nocere around. As Nocere got his head in the game ( No pun intended ) He noticed a fawn running towards the fight. Nocere stopped mid battle, and turned to look at her more closely. The fawn was beautiful, and the whole world seemed to freeze. Even the buck was running towards him in slow motion shouting slowed down words. Nocere noticed the fawn look at him, then nudge her head side ways. As Nocere turned to look at what she was pointing at, the buck rammed into his side. 

" Leave her alone, she's mine " he growled. 

" That's all I'm fighting for" 

Suddenly, Nocere understood why this buck was being so aggressive. He was fighting for the doe, and now, so was Nocere. Nocere rammed into the buck with such force it surprised everyone. Nocere kept on repeating. Nocere had a sudden adrenalin rush, that caused, both the bucks to go head over hoof, into the brambles, were Nocere was declared the winner. But the buck would not accept defeat, and it was only the incredibly pretty doe, that stopped another brawl. 

" Stop it! " she said in a soft but clear voice. The other buck nodded. Bambi, Faline, Thumper and flower reluctantly cam over.

" You know I hate you brawling with other bucks for fun Vertrous" Vertrous. That was the name of the buck. 

" I wasn't, Lojalis" Lojalis. What a beautiful name. Nocere thought. " I  was fighting for you! And I won nearly every fight !  " Vertrous looked proud

" But you were defeated" Lojalis pointed out, looking at Nocere and smiling. Nocere felt a warm feeling spread through him. 

" What were you fighting for?" Faline asked.

" I was thinking the same thing" Bambi looked puzzled.

" I was fighting for my girl here!" Vertrous winked

" And got defeated trying" Bambi, Faline, Thumper and Flower laughed. 

" He got lucky!" Vertrous protested. " Any way I bet I could beet the great prince with no trouble!" He boasted. 

" Is that so?" The five deer turned to see an owl land on the branch behind.                                                                                      

 

                                                        Fawn and Mena   

 

Fawn took Mena to a quiet spot in the woods. An old abandoned den stood there. Fawn asked Mena what happened. Mena explained about the things she saw. 

" Why would that spot of land trigger those memories Mena?" Fawn asked. 

" I'm not sure" Mena was confused. 

" Mena?" A voice came from outside the den. 

" Is that you?" 

Mena froze, unsure of who the voice was. 

" It's me Hasslich" Mena couldn't recall the name. 

" You saved me from the hunters trap, we were friends.  You said you loved me " His tone became softer. 

Mena froze, rooted to the

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September 16, 2012
Uk
Hmm that's not what mena thinks ...

September 16, 2012
I think I'm starting to understand Vertrous's personality, and I feel so sorry for Hasslich! He can't be that bad!

September 16, 2012
Uk
I know, its's spelt like that, But google translate wouldn't let me copy it, so I had to write it and I dont have the points on the a type. The reason he fought is just to show what kind of personality he has, I do realize other wise, thanks for the nice comment.

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September 16, 2012
Just a tip, it's not written hasslich. It's writtren hässlich with little points on the a.
Aside that, the chapter was very well written and interesting. But normaly, bucks only fight for a doe when another buck threathens to take her. They don't just charge at any buck they see.
But I liked this chapter, though. Great work!




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