Calemvir's in this chapter, but you didn't add him to the list of characters.

Wow, this sotry is getting more and more interesting. Ya got me hooked to it!
Wish it wasnt so shirt, the suspence is killing me. Yay! You added more of Huckleberry, ^-^ I love how you made him determined so save Yew from Trar.
Clovers dream has got me wondering, I havent got a clue what its a bout but.. this buck thats twisted ..could he be nacht?!

Ohhh! That's brilliant. Calemvirs personality fitted perfectly. ( Don't worry Salvia Calemvir has already got his eyes on another doe, two before the snakes, you still have a chance with someone else. )


PS: Wonder what the fawn'll look like.

Ohhh

Exciting as I expected But, oh, how the short chapters keep me in agony! I want more! Lihua seems to be forming a plan in that clever mind of hers....

It's getting more and more interesting with each chapter; Feather! (Speaking of chapters, did you see that I posted the first real chapter of my story?). I like Herla. Really, I think that guy is great. And even though Bambi's a bit...unfriendly, he's still right. I just hope Faline won't do anything stupid. The part with Nacht and Lihua was great as always (I wonder what will happen, because Lihua's answer won't change anything). But that doe, although as evil as both Nacht and Trar, is one of my fav chars. Then Huckleberry...I can understand him, actually. He just wants to save his loved one. Poor guy.
And then, Clover's dream...Bambi, you've got to do something! But he can't rush into war...I guess he will figure something out. (At least I hope so.)

Sorry this chapter took so long, guys!