"And? Why do you ask?"
She shrugged, turning her pretty, petite head. "I wondered about the structure of the herd, is all. You know I am not like you," she added, "And where I came from, things were far different."

I'd imagine. Nacht grumbled. "I see. But you assumed Trar will die soon." Nacht much did not appreciate her implication, as if Lihua had expected that he, the most loyal buck in the herd, would betray the Overlord.

 "Just a scenario," she replied in an almost sing-songy manner.

Despite several attempts to make a short end to the conversation, but Lihua had stubbornly refused. Finally, finally, Trar returned with three powerful bucks. All Nacht recognized about them was their muscular build, heavy antlers and early shed of velvet. Clever, he thought approvingly. Nacht himself did not come out of velvet particularly early, but he was killer the minute he did. Nacht nodded at them coldly.

"Nacht," Trar pulled the large black-and-silver buck aside.

"I want Lihua," he told Trar immediately, in a low voice.



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August 29, 2012
Oh I wod NOT stop in the middle� that would just be too cruel!
Thanks for all those compliments. When I get home tonight I'll get to work.
Then break to feed my rabbits...
And probably forget what I was doing XD

August 29, 2012
Usa Female
I can't find the words.... :o

Epic. Awesome. Extreme. Superb. Tremendous. Thrilling.

Yeah, I think those sum it up! :P

Of course, I can't help but read Nacht's dialogue in Davy Jone's voice...and I can't help but read Lihua's voice in a charming and innocent Chinese-accent XD

This is turning out to be so exciting >_< I've never been so eager to read a fic. I love thrillers. The only bad part about this story is the feeling I get when the chapters END!! I want to keep reading!

So please keep writing. I would be sorely disappointed if this story were dropped in the middle. I anxiously await the next chapter!!!


And for those of you who are wondering, Lihua's name is pronounced, LEE-HOW ;)

August 28, 2012
Next chapter, introducing a few new characters, and Lihua in more depth!




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