Hmm...PM to me this story of which you read.....

I am afraid I must be crueler. I won't work on it for a day or two: I must admit the story is inspired by a book I am currently reading(the book is in my lap now), and a few characters and plot elements are based off of the book as well. In said book there has just been a... Dramatic reveal about the antagonist that I could not expect. I am a persOn of iron nerves when it comes to books, but this has thrown me on the ground and I am too shocked to even think of making my own antagonists match the monster...
I don't know if I even have the nerve to try. Not even Nacht who toys with his mates' friends and whatnot, the half-antlered buck who killed a family Of ell just 'cause he is absolutely insane, can hold a candle to this. If you wanna know more you can PM me.

However I swear most of the story is all me.

Desired effect achieved? Is your desired effect to torment your readers with teasers and tidbits of future awesomeness??? HOW CRUEL CAN YOU BE!!!

Good! I really love working on thUs story and I would love to see a wider audience enjoy reading it.

it's fine

oh ok if it's only slight violence i'm just fine with that, and mates are ok. i'll try it.

It is only that way for a bit of violence...(and some talk of mates but I am not a graphic person. Eww.) I personally think it would be okay, just read prologue through chater four first... If you feel it's too violent or something you can stop reading.

aw man its PG for 10 year olders i'm only nine years old oh well gotta wait another year.

Desired effect achieved. ^^ I'm almost as cruel as Nacht, aren't I? Making the chapter this short on purpose... THEN MAKING YOU WAIT!!! Muahahahahaha!

Okay, Nacht moment over. I promise for a good, log chapter next time with lots of good drama and junk. Does that help?

Also considering making Clover an important female role. I shall need a rabbit to be a 'sentry' for Bambi once the war begins. I want tO be sure you all get a chance tone in this because, well... It feels really good to be apart of something big like this. And for something more technical it makes the story's characters more diverse.

Why so short!!?
I cant wait for the next chapter.... Huckleberry got anougher scratch!! He is one tough buck, an dhe wont let Trar or Natch have Yew.
This was a good chapter, i wait for the next one ^-^