i only read to "Bambi had lost, and failed to protect Saliva."
No!!! If he can't win, heal, Bambi! Get your energy back! Don't be weak!
Trar is horrible and I miss the Great prince

Huh. Why thank you ^^ what a coincidence, that instead of 'night,' I Accidentally call him 'power!'

First of all: I love this fanfic of yours. Your way of writing is wonderful and the what-if thing is brilliant. I really enjoy reading it.
However, I saw a little spelling mistake in one of the last paragraphs on the first page. You wrote Macht instead of Nacht. (Here's the sentence "He turned away to walk down the meadow, followed by Macht and Huckleberry.") It's nothing, really, but it's kinda ironic that Macht happens to be the German word for power. (I should know, I am German.)
Enough said, keep up the good work.

Well, you're doing a wonderful job so far, laying everything out in a professional fashion and not over-crowding the scene with new characters I'm sure Lihua will make an interesting addition to the story, adding a bit of Oriental flair and passion into the hearts of the young bucks, especially Nacht ^_^

Oh my goodness! This is AWESOME! Poor Salvia, i hope Birch doesnt hurt her... Loving the thing on Huckleberry and Yew, this story is getting more intense. I cant wait for the next chapter ^-^

Thanks! I promise Lihua will get in, I just don't wanna crowd everything together.
Yup, I added Gobo! Why? 'Cuz I felt like it. .

So awesome Aside from the story getting more and more exciting (and the fact that Nacht is just as bada$$ as ever), I must admit you are a very good writer! I'm a sucker for cliffhangers, I do that all the time with my story chapters, so I'm always impressed to see another writer do it too Also, I LOVE that you added Gobo in there! He was one of my favorite characters from the novel ^_^

And here's Chapter Four! Introducing Huckleberry in more detail as well as Yew.