Prince. "It's your position."

"Never," He returned, rearing up and bringing his head down to attack again. Trar aimed a blow at his throat but hit his side, slicing open the Great Prince's side. He made a noise of pain, but reared his head and slashed at Trar's head, catching him in the eye. There was a choke of pain and Trar swung his head around to hit the Prince's neck.

Silent deer watched in terror and tension as the battle raged on, seeming endless. The Prince was strong, clearly, and this was obviously why does seemed interested in him - no fights because no buck dared go near him.

But no buck dared go near Trar either - and their suspicions and fears were clearly founded. These two feirce deer had quickly gone from a rutting battle to a vicious fight to the death. The Prince, honorable as he could be, was clearly now looking to gore his competitor, not wanting this monstrous cervine to be the new Prince.

As they watched, it became clear to Ronno that something was different about Trar's antlers - the wounds he inflicted were deeper and bled more heavily than those of the great Prince. The prince reared up and kicked Trar's head, flinging him to the ground. The Great prince reared again, but Trar rolled onto his feet and stabbed at his enemy's stomach. The Prince fell, making a pained noise. Trar approached slowly, baring his teeth and looking at his crippled enemy. "I am the Lord of this herd now," he sneered. Trar reared up, bringing his weight down on the Prince.

He would not stand again.



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May 17, 2013
Oh nooooo!!! :o

July 25, 2012
Uk Female
kay when im done ill put the pics in my fanart gallery

July 25, 2012
Make them and I will see!

July 25, 2012
Uk Female
feathervenom, I could create some. If you wanted?

July 25, 2012
I WILL say there's gonna be an army to enforce Trar's laws... so, I'll need some minor-to-major side characters that I can't think of to design. I'm thinking I'll have some people create some characters to help out some.

July 25, 2012
Uk Female
OH noez! Bad things happening *Chimes in* Dun Dun DUN!

July 25, 2012
The sad thing is I can't help but smile at his name... when you've never heard it before, Trar can sound threatening and pirate-like... to me, it's a combination of a truck and a car I once saw. XD
Very, very bad things will happen now.
DUN DUN DUNNNNNN

July 25, 2012
Uk Female
Wow This is amazing! Poor Prince... I wonder what will happen next. Keep up the good work! ^-^

July 25, 2012
Usa Female
Very awesome indeed! Poor Prince! I feel sorry for the herd, too. No telling what's gonna happen now that Trar is in charge.....

July 25, 2012
'Kay, Chapter 2 finished!
...I really hope this one isn't too violent... I'm really quite proud of it...




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