Campion, Birch, Clover, and a few others need character designs and I'm stumped. Could you help?

I've had my fanfiction The Untaken Path For several months now. Boy, how time flies. Anyway, I noticed that Campion, Birch, Clover... they don't have pages. They also don't have designs. I thought I had one for Campion, but frankly, I'm not a huge fan of it, same with Birch. So, I would like you all to send me some designs.

The Goal:

Character designs for the following:
Birch

Campion

Clover

Braila

Vervain

Leaf

Lemon

The Rules:

1. No fighting, stealing, or complaining if I choose a different design. Remember - I'm not even looking for one that I find absolutely stunning and adore. I just want something that "fits" the character. So if your's doesn't win, it doesn't mean I don't like it.

2. No sparkle deer... That's not allowed anyway.

3. Have fun

4. Follow all the rules!

Prizes:

Your design will be the character design for the respective character. Everyone else... sorry, but all I can give you is a free life-time supply of air.

Brief character profiles:

Birch - described briefly as pale. Also he's strong and unflinching, starting out as dubious and rebellious, only to fade into one of the most loyal bucks Bambi has. Eight points currently.

Braila - This guy's rangy(Long-bodied), cruel, and the current general of the Pine Forest Herd. Points count at somewhere above six.

Campion - He's the Big Guy and the gentle giant. Unfortunately, due to velvet antlers, he can't fight. He's not even inclined to. He has ten points, and large antlers.

Clover - she's the clever doe, the Smart Guy of the herd. I was honestly thinking she'd be piebald. ...I think it's safe to say she has zero points.

Leaf - He's a bit unkind, but gets better with age. A young, five-point buck. He's also strong.

Lemon - beautiful, manipulative, and the Alpha Doe in the lower ranks. She'll soon get fed up with living in Trar's herd... her ambition is not near so cut-throat as her rival, Lihua's.

Vervain - This guy is almost like a weasle. He's described as having an asymmetrical blaze up the muzzle. He should have twelve points.

Members who have joined the contest :

JayTodd

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Falinelo ver101

MW Roach

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Entries submitted :

• by MW Roach (December 31, 2012)
• by MW Roach (December 30, 2012)
• by ThatKodaik (December 28, 2012)
• by Falinelover101 (December 28, 2012)
• by Falinelover101 (December 28, 2012)
• by MyLittleWorld (December 28, 2012)

Comments

MW Roach	December 30, 2012

Here's my design for Braila! I didn't want to make him look very garish with a million different shades of browns or greys and overly-unique looking markings. I wanted him to have a very similar color palate as Bambi. The main difference is that Braila's coat pattern is primitively striped. He's sort of an evolutionary throwback of Megeloceras-- a massive deer from the Pleistocene era (Ice Age). I've seen a few artist depictions of Megaloceras having subtle primitive striping on the back, rump and legs. I also gave him widely-spaced antlers; thin and sharp. In the pic, he's coming out of his velvet. I remembered to make him rangy and thought it helped his bad-boy look to also be a bit on the scruffy side. His front legs are black all the way down with very subtle primitive tan stripes. His back legs are light tan all the way down with very subtle primitive stripes around his fetlocks.

JayTodd	December 28, 2012

xD To be honest, I really liked him in the series. Well - I liked the series a lot more than the movie, and I've never read the book. The movie is to..well..realistic for me. xD

Featherv enom	December 28, 2012

(I liked original Campion because he was a kind of "Just doing my job" guy. XD)

JayTodd	December 28, 2012

Thanks MW! We was so fun to work on Can't wait to do Campion. (He was my favorite character in WSD xD) And yeah, bad guys are really fun to create. :3

Featherv enom	December 28, 2012

Heh heh, Yeah. XD Bad guys are the most fun 'cause you can make them absolutely ANYTHING. Heros, they have to have standards. But a villain? Heck no. He can be massive, tiny, ragged, sleek, conform to "Evil is sexy" ideas(NONE of mine do XD), be that hideous monster in the closet...

MW Roach	December 28, 2012

Totally kick-butt design for Birch! I like it a lot! I'll have my Braila design in later today (hopefully, if not, then Saturday) and I'll definitely work on a Trar design (I LOVE designing bad guy characters XD)

Featherv enom	December 28, 2012

It doesn't bother me. ^^ He was a pale-coated buck, always has been, and I like what you did with his design.

JayTodd	December 28, 2012

I hope it's okay if it's kinda similar D: I really liked his colors and I wanted to make him a little unique, but not sparkly looking.

Featherv enom	December 28, 2012

I like your Birch design... rather similar to mine, indeed, but yours is just... better. XD

JayTodd	December 28, 2012

Hmm. I think I'll try for Campion too.

JayTodd	December 28, 2012

Tadaa! Birch is sent. :3

Featherv enom	December 28, 2012

Well, I'm hesitant to say. It keeps shifting, almost like Tupilek's did at first, and I'm kinda waiting for it to shift into place, but if you want to send in a design for him, feel free to. Also, I've got the next chapter up, I bumped it in the comments - juuuust don't read the comments 'til you finish. XD

MW Roach	December 28, 2012

Also...do you have a design yet for Trar?

MW Roach	December 28, 2012

I'd like to try one of the bucks....maybe Vervain or Braila...

Featherv enom	December 28, 2012

Oh, I like that one too.

Falinelo ver101	December 28, 2012

A better version of Lemon

Falinelo ver101	December 28, 2012

ok

Featherv enom	December 28, 2012

Her name being Lemon, maybe. If you or I choose a different design(I.e., you take this one down), you can most certainly keep it. Perhaps a yellow-er color, but it isn't my design to make.

Falinelo ver101	December 28, 2012

Feather well I don't think it fits her

Featherv enom	December 28, 2012

VERY pretty... hmm. ^^

JayTodd	December 28, 2012

Seems like everyone is getting their entry in tonight. o.o Well in that case.. *Cracks knuckles and gets to work*

Falinelo ver101	December 28, 2012

Feather,my entery is in. I hope you like her^^ well I was going to make her light colored but that seems like a sparkle to me.

Featherv enom	December 28, 2012

*Instantly interested in this gay character concept* Hmm. Sounds interesting. Kodaik - I like words. XD I felt my own definition was awkward at best, honestly. Manipulation is a difficult concept to put to words. It just has to be... expressed.

Falinelo ver101	December 28, 2012

well I will work on her ASAP after my gay character.

JayTodd	December 28, 2012

....Ignore my definition and bow down to Feathr's. xD -crawls away-

Featherv enom	December 28, 2012

Oh and manipulative... hm. To be able to manipulate someone is to be able to get them to do something you want them to, usually by tricks and cun... like how Scar got Simba to stay in the gorge and then manage to make him think it was his fault Mufasa died. Also a manipulative character can make a conversation turn around and give themself the upper hand with words. Generally, being manipulative is also being cunning, sly, and tricky.

JayTodd	December 28, 2012

It means having the power to influence emotions of others or change things for your own purpose.

Guest	December 28, 2012

Well, as long as nobody else tries on Clover, I don't have to worry. ^^ But I'm glad you like it.

Featherv enom	December 28, 2012

Oh, she's wonderful! ^^ Of course, we'll have to wait til Kodaik's birthday to see if I choose that design or not.

Falinelo ver101	December 28, 2012

what does manipulative mean?

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