K the story behind this is Velvet looks excited to see Brook and Karina just feels like looking inside the window. I created Karina for a real life friend and I still have to make a bio page for Brook and Velvet.

Maybe you shouldn't use a solid black to color your characters, makes the lines invisible. Try a very, very dark grey instead. and I am courious to know what's going on in this image, what's the story to this?