Balto wolf quest: First person point -of- view.

 

 

 

 

        I'm Ty. A male wolf that's black with an under belly of brown. My tail has a mixture of the two colors. My mother's name is Lou, brown and white. My father's name is Zig, black and gray. I was born with two brothers and a sister. Jamella, female, Black and brown, no mixture at tail. Lance, male, black and white. Trum, male, brown and white.

 

    I wasn't a happy wolf. Never smiled. Also my parents treated me different from the 3 others. They hated me. From the first few days of my life, they gave me scar's. My favorite place was lake nearby my (unfortunately) home. It was beautiful.

 

        One day, 18 months old, I went to the lake. And before i took a sip, i saw my reflection, suddenly I began to see color. I thought it might be my body development. But it did not seem right that my mother's  background eye color is pitch black. She approached me and stepped on my head. After she left, I risen from that and i saw Jamella, And her eye color was blue. After a few days of seeing each and every (i think) eye color from every family member

 

     Red = happy

 

      Blue = sad

 

     Yellow = shy

 

     Green = worried/nervous

 

    Purple = depressed

 

     Black = hatred

 

   I can turn off this ability, but cannot stop seeing color.

 

      I went to the lake and i saw my own emotion , Its striped for the three colors. Blue, Green, and purple. One word summary: unloved. Tears came out of my eyes, after that sight

 

   "I'm alone." I said to myself

 

   I went back at my home that day and i only saw my brothers and sister.

 

    "What happened?" Lance questioned

 

   "What do you mean besides the fact that i got torturistic parents!?" I yelled at him

 

   "No it's not that." Trum said knowing that lance could got hurt if he answered

 

   "Well whats wrong with me?" I said slowly walking to him ready to attack

 

   "Its your eyes." Trum said showing no fear.

 

   "What? You guys can't do this?" I said thinking that I'm different.

 

   "No" all three answered.

 

   "That and we never seen anything except black and white." Jamella answered further.

 

     After what Jamella said, I knew something, that something is about NOT knowing something. I ran out feeling that I was a retard for a attempt to hurt my brothers. I went to the lake once again. And when I saw my reflection again, I knew I needed to find a better home.

 

   Before I began running, this rabbit tried to sneak through me. I wasn't hungry but I know I need the energy. So a short chase happened, killed it, and took one large bite out of his lifeless body. I ran as fast I could, finally i feel cool air, rushing through my stressed out body, felt warm from the afternoon sun before I ran away.

 

     Nightfall start. I was worn out. I needed a place to stay tonight to rest. I sniffed around the area for while. I scented a wolf near, JUST ONE. I followed the scent and........ I found her, sleeping. She was gray with a white under belly, with white "socks". She.....was.....beautiful. I thought water was beautiful. This feeling I had in my chest that I never felt in my life. I turn my ability on and her eyes were Green, Blue, and purple. She felt like what felt before I found. I had this thought in my head to say something. But I did not what to disturb her rest. So I left her alone. But a few minute later I heard a noise from back there I hoped I she was ok.

 

      A few hours later when the sun's light started to make the clouds change to a pinkish/ orangish color in the sky, I reached the mountain ranges. Finally a good path without the worry of tripping on debris. I got to the top of this one mountain. I found the ocean right in front of me. Feeling I was nearby home. I turn around the corner and....... I heard a howl from the cave nearby me.

 

    "Your singing was quite beautiful."

 

    "Thank you, sometimes I just can't help myself."

 

    Oh that was beautiful indeed. I sniffed around and it's the wolf I saw last night! I couldn't hear what they were saying because I was trying to recall the howl. But whoever was in there with her, was probably taking care of her. I walked around the corner and left. Before I reached the plains. Another wolf was walking at me.

 

    "Hello" I said

 

     "Have you've seen my daughter?" the stranger asked

 

     "What does sh.....I'm sorry I don't like to she or he to point out a person. What's her name and what does she look like?" Not lying about the name thing.

 

    "Her name is Aleu, and she is gray and white with white "socks"." He answered.

 

      "Oh think she's on the mountain that were standing on" I proclaimed

 

      "Thank you." He started running up the mountain.

 

      So that's her name, Aleu. At least I don't have to call her a "she" or a "her" all the time. The feeling in my chest from just looking at Aleu, expanded. Never felt this way before, ........Was it love? or something else. I walked off the mountain and into the plains.

 

   As I went deeper into the plains, the ocean's smell of salt grew even more. The feeling of being nearby a home a grew along with the feeling of Aleu. Another wolf looked at me at was ready to attack.

 

     "What the hell are you doing her?!" The wolf said

 

     "What wrong with just entering a place." I said know he will get pissed off.

 

     I turn on my ability and his eyes were black, Hate at first sight.

 

      "Stop what you are doing Niju!" One walks up to him.

 

      "So you think he's alright to being here Nava?" Niju said

 

      "Well you treat everyone like crap, get out of here." Nava said

 

      Niju walked away from Nava, like just lost a war.

 

     "Who are you?" Nava asked.

 

     "Ty" I answered.

 

      "What are you doing here?" Nava asked more.

 

      "To get away from a life that physically and mentally hurt me." I said softly.

 

     "Do you want to join our clan?" Nava said with a smile.

 

      "Clan?" I said.

 

 

      "Yes." Nava said.

 

      "I would like to." I accepted his offer.

 

      "Follow me." Nava turned around .

 

      I followed him in the clans home, now I know why Niju tried to protected. Nava howled to alert the clan that there is another member. One by one, soon enough every member was looking at me. I howled out gladly to accepted to become a member of the clan. Nava showed me around and showed me where my home is. After all that I went striaght to the ocean shore.

 

      I jumped onto the shallow water and I found myself, smiling, in my reflection. My eyes are red. I knew this is my home and I will never live in anywhere else. A alaskan salmon jumped up and I took it before it went into the water. Took it on the shore and began eating it. 

 


     "Hopefully i'll get some king crab." i laughed

 

" I laughed to myself.I laying down on the ground watching the ocean tides coming in.   A few minutes later my eyes were droping, and began sleeping.  A few minutes of sleep then I had a scent, It was Aleu. I got up and ran, maybe this time I can meet Aleu. I saw Aleu on the rock that reaches for the ocean, with her father, and I saw Nuk, Yak, Sumac, and Niju attacking them. At then I knew now that Aleu wasn't a member here, but I did not want anything happening to them two.

 


     I alerted Nava to stop them attacking the two. Instead of just Nava coming to help the two, the whole clan went with him. Nava put a end to the fight. Niju got wet from a near by whale, and everyone was laughing....... except for me. I never saw Aleu when she was awake. But her eyes was piercing blue (my ability wasn't on). Her eyes looked like they were sculpt by the heavens.

 

A meeting was held at the clan base, the caribou is at russia.  Stubborn Niju demands leadership, and wants us to stay here, which will kill us. Nava gives leadership to Niju, Niju tries to attack Nava, and he just vanished! The clan followed Niju, the only ones that did not go was Aleu, her father and me.

 


      I was spying on the and suddenly Nava.....I don't



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December 20, 2009
Uk Female
ok i just finished reading it and it was awesoem im just a little confused but it was really good and i get it now you wern't miru you just heard miru i the story so im on the all clear its just the speech though.

December 20, 2009
Uk Female
eer youve got it all wrong the speech is most defently wrong they saying bad words that i wont repeate becasue my mum will kill me. and why did nava tell niju that he treted evreyone like poop he's wise and thoughfull not a modern day person lol and are you muru? youve taken the lines out the movie that muru says so i though you where muru?

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December 07, 2009
Hey, don't sweat it, man I won't kill you for writing this. Besides, I myself and making a fanfic that's probably bloodier and more violent than this one.

December 03, 2009
Usa Female
I <3 Riley Biers (Eclipse)
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! SOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!! Aleu and Ty would be so adorable as mates!!!!!!!!!!




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