“This is for being an ignorant leader, an irresponsible mate and a horrible father.” She ripped into his jugular, ending his life. The blood pooled around Raven’s paws and snow. Luke shook violently for ten seconds and then was still, his eyes glazed over as he took his very last breath.             The other wolves took notice of this event and one of them yelled, “RETREAT!” The others sprinted after him and raced away from the dogs that were left standing. Raven breathed rapidly and she closed her eyes, taking in all that happened.             Riley stepped outside and scanned the area, the humans still watched in awe. After a while, the women took the whimpering children into the houses and the men shook their heads and talked amongst themselves.             Riley’s heart thudded hard when she noticed her sister; she raced toward her, “Raven? Are you alright?”             “Never better.” She smiled and opened her eyes, “It’s all over.”             “Hey Riles.” The voice that Riley had grown to love caused her to turn and squeal with joy. She tackled him and pinned him, “Whoa there.”              “Muwahaha, guess who can still take you down?” She smirked and flicked her tail at Jael’s right back leg, which caused him to shiver.             “Did I ever tell you that you are the most beautiful female I have ever laid eyes on?” He cocked a half smile.             “Yes but my memory is a little fuzzy, care to tell me again,” Riley collapsed on top of him licked his cheek.             “Well now I can’t even remember,” Riley laughed as his voice cracked, with nervousness.             “Hey!” Raven grunted, “You two aren’t the only ones here you know.”              “Yea really, get a room.” Czech said as he approached Raven.             “That does sound like a good idea,” Jael smiled hugely and the two scampered off into the boiler room.               Jenna came out of the house and walked over to her eldest daughter and stared into her eyes, “I put you through so much, I almost caused you to lose your life…twice now, I sold you to your own murderous and deceitful father and I pretended you were dead all that time,” Jenna allowed the tears to drip down her furry cheeks, “I can never thank you enough for forgiving me and for what you did today. Raven I could have never asked for this and I am so grateful to have you as my daughter, I love you Raven.” Jenna sniffled and nuzzled her daughter.             Raven did not resist this time and allowed the tears to fall to the earth as she nuzzled back, “I love you too mom and I forgive you.”


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July 06, 2010
Usa Female
Aww man!! It's Piyip here. You're #1 fan. Anyway, I love this thing. I'VE BEEN WAITING MONTHS FOR THIS!! Sorry I used caps. The only thing I can really say is that you have to make sure that you press the enter key, not just tab. It made the story really confusing. :/: Otherwise. Good story. I love it. All of them.
P.S. I hope you gave Kodi a large, painful death. :P !!!!
~Piyip~

December 01, 2009
Usa
haha DIE KODI!

December 01, 2009
I bet you made Kodi jump off a cliff XD

November 26, 2009
Usa
The MCR-my!
Yaaay! Great ending! RILEYXJAEL 4EVA!

November 24, 2009
Usa
Darn I knew someone would notice, lol he is the one in hte forest that takes out all the scouts. Sorry I didn't include him but I really didin't liek him in this story so yea I kinda killed him off lol

November 24, 2009
Australia Male
Member of Aurora Borealis Pack
what happend to Kodi ?:/:

November 24, 2009
Canada Female
Lone Wolf who protects others
Aww cute ending great work on this :3




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