was astonished "She is way older than him!"

"I know!" Antara exclaimed 

"However...if they are happy toguether..."

"South, she's old enough to be our mother!" Antara exclaimed.

"Well, Jonesy's mate is also older than him" Southwinder said

"Ashes is different" Antara explained.

"Muffy isn't a bad person and you know it"

"It's just..." Antara said "What if they..."

"I don't think Mountaineer is stupid" Southwinder gently conforted her sister "You worry too much Antara, I think you are afraid to be left mateless. There will be someone for you, I'm pretty sure" Soutwinder said as she started to leave.

"Where are you going South!" Antara exclaimed 

"With Nathan" Southwinder giggled "He must be waiting for me"

Antara stood there, completely alone.

 

 

The following days were a nuisance to Antara, it was something eventual that Mountaineer sterted to leave the house on his own. Antara knew where was he going, but she played dumb, it was to painful for her. Even JT sometimes realized Antara's downs in her usual cheerful mood.

One night Mountaineer wasn't home, Antara wasn't the only worried.

"Dear, where's you brother?"Amelieh asked

"I wish I'd knew" Antara replied sofly "I can look for him"

"It's too late hun, it's dark already" Amelieh replied worried

"I'll be just fine" Antara reasurred her mom "I'll be back"

The husky hesitated, but eventually greeted her daughter with a nuzzle "Please be careful, will you?"

"Take care hun" Charles replied from his place.

"Do skoro, chao*!" Mihaella squealed at Antara.

 

As Antara left the house, she searched everywhere. Muffy wasn't home, Antara's worries came true. She had searched every alley, every front poch. Everywhere, exept one place; The boiler room.

The idea of visiting the boiler room gave Antara the shivers. She knew what some couples did at night. As she aproached the place, she slowly sneaked her face. Her heart loudly started beating her eyes widened, she froze at the sight.

"What..the...hell!" Antara loudly screamed.

Mountaineer and Muffy had to separate finding their act interrupted.

"Mountaineer...Muffy" Antara still trembling "What have you DONE!"

"A-a-a-antara w-w-what b-b-" Mountaineer was too nervous to speak.

"I can explain Antara....It's not"

"Oh shut up" Antara sarcastically snapped "Don't tell me it wasn't that. I saw what I needed to see" 

"B-b-but" Mountaineer tried to speak again, but Antara interrupted him with a glare.

"What was in your mind when you decided to get with this senile old-" 

"We are in love!" Muffy interrupted Antara 

"Love?" Antara kept her sarcastic tone "Muffy don't make me laugh" 

"Yes Antara... Me and Mountaineer are in love, a powerfull love than can't be broken, we can't deny our feeling for eachother!" Tears started runin through Muffy's eyes "Our love is unbreakable, not even the ugliest blizzard can tear it off. Mountaineer is whole life now, away from him...makes me anxious and sad. Me and Mountaineer belong toguether, and I'll love him until my heart stops beating. Because we are in-!" 

"Aww shut up, you talk to much" Antara snapped, her eyes balzing.

"Can't you see our love" Muffy exclaimed

"All is see is an old lady getting with my brother!" Antara's behavior grew more violent by every word Muffy said "You two-faced little-".

"D-d-don't speak to Muffy like that!" Mountaineer snarled

Antara looked at her brother in disbelief "What?!"

"You heard me...leave my mate alone!" Mountaineer took an agressive pose.

Antara was shocked, but didn't put an end to her violent behavior.

"You see Antara" This time Muffy was smiling "Seems like Mountain chose me over you"

"I WON'T ALLOW IT!" Antara's snarl turned into a roar, as she lunged at the fluffy female. Her jaws grabbed something, it wasn't Muffy, but Mountaineer.

"How dare you get in the way!" Antara snarled, grabbing her brother by the scruff. Shaking her brother violently, Mountaineer just whimpered in fear. Antara has never been so violent. The smaller female stood there, still with Mountaineer's neck between her jaws. She started to loosen her grip, slowly backing away. Mountaineer stood up still shoocked and scared.

"Theres no way I can kill my own brother...!" Antara angrilly sobbed at Mountaineer, and she stood there sobbing incomprehensibly.

"Antara..." Mountaineer mumbled at the image, Antara who before looked violent, now looked so pityful and in despair.

"Why...why does it have to end like this...idiot...imbecile....damn! Antara spoke and cursed between sobs.

"Maybe we should leave hun" Muffy whispered to Mountain, a glimpse of pity in her voice.

They left Antara crying there, completely alone.

 

TO BE CONTINUED...OBVIOUSLY!

 

Dobró utro - Good Morning

dóbər den- Good Afternoon

obícham te- Love you

Chao- Bye (informal) 

Zdrasti - hello (informal)

Do skoro, chao - See ya later

 

 

 


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December 26, 2009
Mexico Female
retro---Antara was selfish, this fic is suposed to show her negative side

November 30, 2009
Uk Female
im not a wolf, ok.
:P This fic has really cool ideas and I love Antara but I don't understand, it says Antara dislikes Muffy but why does she hate her enough to kill her, wouldn't she just want her brother to be happy?:!

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November 18, 2009
Oh Anatara, I feel so bad for her! I wanna give her a hug! :( I think she needs a mate of her own!

November 18, 2009
Mexico Female
What can I say XD He never experienced any love in his life, and he was in love.

What he did wasn't correct tho.

November 18, 2009
Canada Female
Lone Wolf who protects others
Wow Mountain is pretty jerkish isn't he he should have stayed there with his sister instead of going with an old bat like her DX

November 17, 2009
Mexico Female
Yeah she's lonely, she now only has Mihaella the pup who Antara can't understand a thing she says, and her friend Steph the travesti lol

But yeah, Muffy isn't really evil. Just a spoiled pushover XD

November 17, 2009
Poor Antara, she's so lonely! D8 Muffy seemed pretty pushy in the beginning, but its good you had her feel bad for Antara toward the end.

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Guest
November 17, 2009
Really? Eh, I really don't like Muffy. No offense dudette. Like, Muffy is just one of those characeters thar you look at and go "I hate you, just shut up". I'm soooo wishing for Mountain to find a better girl, at least someone his age. But hey, its your charries.

It was nicely written too, I love the cover page image

November 17, 2009
Mexico Female
LOL I think Antara did enough, I mean what she did to her own brother 83

I don't really think of Muffy as evil, her love feelings were true, but she is very spoiled and likes getting what she wants.

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Guest
November 17, 2009
dude, this so awosme in a messed up way . we should have dingo run inside and turn Muffy into a fur coot, the little bitch...




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