Left There Alone

Author : Kepz_TheFairyChihuahua

Date sent : November 15, 2009

Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Category : Relationship/Love

Description : Antara thinks her brother Mountaineer wll never get a mate. However she starts to notice how her friend Muffy works very hard to get Mountaineer's attention, and Mountaineer likes it. What could this friendship lead to? CONTAINS STRONG LANGUAGE AND SUGGESTIVE THEMES

Length : Short -

Characters : 1481 visits



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                  PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)
Left There Alone
By Kepz_TheFairyChihuahua

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December 26, 2009
Mexico Female
retro---Antara was selfish, this fic is suposed to show her negative side

November 30, 2009
Uk Female
im not a wolf, ok.
:P This fic has really cool ideas and I love Antara but I don't understand, it says Antara dislikes Muffy but why does she hate her enough to kill her, wouldn't she just want her brother to be happy?:!

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Guest
November 18, 2009
Oh Anatara, I feel so bad for her! I wanna give her a hug! :( I think she needs a mate of her own!

November 18, 2009
Mexico Female
What can I say XD He never experienced any love in his life, and he was in love.

What he did wasn't correct tho.

November 18, 2009
Canada Female
Lone Wolf who protects others
Wow Mountain is pretty jerkish isn't he he should have stayed there with his sister instead of going with an old bat like her DX

November 17, 2009
Mexico Female
Yeah she's lonely, she now only has Mihaella the pup who Antara can't understand a thing she says, and her friend Steph the travesti lol

But yeah, Muffy isn't really evil. Just a spoiled pushover XD

November 17, 2009
Poor Antara, she's so lonely! D8 Muffy seemed pretty pushy in the beginning, but its good you had her feel bad for Antara toward the end.

Guest
Guest
November 17, 2009
Really? Eh, I really don't like Muffy. No offense dudette. Like, Muffy is just one of those characeters thar you look at and go "I hate you, just shut up". I'm soooo wishing for Mountain to find a better girl, at least someone his age. But hey, its your charries.

It was nicely written too, I love the cover page image

November 17, 2009
Mexico Female
LOL I think Antara did enough, I mean what she did to her own brother 83

I don't really think of Muffy as evil, her love feelings were true, but she is very spoiled and likes getting what she wants.

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Guest
November 17, 2009
dude, this so awosme in a messed up way . we should have dingo run inside and turn Muffy into a fur coot, the little bitch...


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