Nothing Else Matters Part one:

Author : Raven the lioness

Date sent : November 08, 2009

Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Category : Relationship/Love

Description : Kodi starts making fun of Dusty for not catching up with his team's speed. Dusty feels as though she is useless to her team,ends up running away.Kodi doesn't know she ran away until he notices she doesn't show up to their normal meetings as usual. Kirby convinces Kodi to go look for Dusty & bring her back home so that they could keep their job!

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PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Nothing Else Matters Part one:

By Raven the lioness

This fanfic was rated PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned).

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Raven the lioness	March 01, 2010

	Fallen wolf

DT-thanks for the comment and I will try to get better each time^


Jake Razor	March 01, 2010

Interesting start. I'm surprised, though, that it's rated PG. Even the movies were worse, content-wise, than this. Would I be correct in assuming it gets heavier down the line?

As for the writing, it's an improvement. But you still need to work on word tenses.

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