gonna happen? 'Eaten alive'... Balto had a strange feeling he knew what was going to happen.
"So... Whens this 'game' going to begin?" Balto asked shakily.
"Are you serious? It has already begun! Hehehe!" the voice laughed.
"What do you mean its alre....." before Balto could finish, his sentence was cut of by the shaking of the floor. Why was he having such a horrible nightmare... WAIT! The candy! He ate too much! Balto knew it was stupid that candy gives people nightmares, but, even with that, he beleived it!

Suddenly, a horrible groan filled his ears. It was so loud that it made him anxious.
"Your bigger than before... Thats good! Your FAT!" the voice kept laughing. Before Balto could move a muscle, a huge paw came out of the dirt behind him and grabbed his hind leg. Balto yelped and screamed with terror. The claws of the paw hurt his leg. Suddenly, the paw began dragging Balto. Balto looked behind him where the paw was. A hungry face of a dead dog starred back. It was so terrifying, it couldn't be described. The eyes were evil, but not as terrifying as the glowing eyes. Still yelling, Balto yanked hard to release the grip. It was no use, the grip was too hard. Pain shot in his leg, the claws were scratching hard at him, making marks on his legs. Just then, another paw and face came from the dirt and yanked onto Balto's other hind leg. They both dragged him down into the graves. Pitch blackness!

"Wake up sleepy head!" a familiar voice said. Balto yawned and got up. It was Boris, he and Balto was in the boat.
"Wow! What a terrible nightmare! I'm never eating THAT much candy again!" Balto was releifed that it was all over.
"Eat THAT much candy again?" Boris asked.
"Yeah... Uh... Oh Boris! Is it really you!" Balto was as happy as ever! The nightmare was over!
"NO...!" Boris said in a dark voice. Balto' eyes widened. Boris's eyes were glowing, they were just like the ones he had the other night.
"BORIS?!" Balto cried.
"You really think its all over just like that? You haven't seen the half of it yet!" the dark voice said. Boris grinned. He had razor sharp teeth. Balto yelped.
"NO! NO! IT IS ALL OVER!" Balto screamed. He banged his head against the floor, trying to make himself unconcious.
"Need help?" the voice said. Balto lifted his head and starred wide eyed. Before he could see anything, a huge paw swiped him on the face and knocked him out.

"By the time I'm finished with you, you'll never want candy again!" it laughed. Balto noticed it laughed alot. It must enjoy his fear and pain.
"Why are you doing this?!" Balto yelled as he opened his eyes and got up. It was dark. Then, a red light appeared. The source of the light was unseeable.
"Never do something you know is wrong, it can do terrible things to you Balto!" the voice said. Balto was as terrifyed as ever! In front of him stood a demon-like wolf with huge jaws and the glowing eyes. Its fur was as black as the night sky, and its tail looked like a blade.
"What are you?!" Balto cried.
"That is information not classifyied for your knoledge!" the demon wolf said.
"I PROMISE I WON'T EAT CANDY AGAIN!" Balto yelled and he closed his eyes.
"BALTO!" Jenna's voice screamed. He opened his eyes, there stood Jenna, starring at the demon wolf.
"If you eat too much candy again, you will have worse nightmares than this!" the demon said. It hit Jenna and she fell to the floor. Balto was as scared as he ever been in his whole life!

"JENNA!" Balto screamed.
"Balto, what's the matter!" Jenna was concerned and worried. Balto opened his eyes. Almost every dog he knew (not steele) was in front of him. His head was killing him. And his stomache was aching badly.
"JENNA! I HAD THE WORST NIGHTMARE EVER!" Balto cried, he burst out in tears(which is VERY rare for Balto).
"You shoudn't have eaten too much candy!" Jenna said. Balto starred at her. Then he screamed and ran around in circles panicing. He would never look at anything unhealthy ever again!

THE END!

Hope you liked this, I wrote it when I had eaten a lot of candy, which means I wrote it whilst being hyper from the sugar.

In case your wondering, Balto went to the vet after having a major candy hangover and was back on his feet in no time! He never touched candy again, and he had to excersize a lot to loose all that fat!


Never feed your pets candy in real life, it can cause them to become extremly ill and even poison them!



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January 30, 2011
i like it, it weirdy reminds me of nightmare on elm street! HAHAHAHA

November 15, 2009
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thanks for the advice oh & good story :)




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