crowd. "Now...just wait." Bronze said. He stepped bhind the box made fence to help keep the pups away from the crowd. A little bit of chattering when on. "False alarm." Bronze said. He dogs sighed and walked away. Mar ran up to bronze.
 

"Look.....I know it's you fault I'm alive....Why?" He said/ Bronze didn't answere. "WHY!" He growled. "So you can feel your blood soaking the earth." He said and went on. But that didn't scare him. At all. But the night grew cold. All the dogs were asleep. Ecept for Mar. He climbed onto the wooden fence. "My last day on Earth...." Mar snickerd. "Hmp....I can't wait." Mar said. He stoped talking to himself to look at the sky lights. He couldn't see the stars to well because of the street lights. Suddenly he heard an odd sound. He looked around. All the dogs were asleep, But some figdeted at the sound. He hopped back on the fence, and walked around until he could sit and see into the carboard box, that the Female was in, that was turned to the fence so knowone could look in.

The pups were lying beside her. Seven pups. How could their be seven? He thought. He alsmost thought of killing one. But he jumped awa as his father woke up. Sleeply looking over the pups. Then jumpin to his feet. "SEVEN!" "SEVEN AND NO RUNT!" He barked. Dogs began waking up a cheering. A large dog pulled mar by his leg to his father. He smiled. "Well...." He started. "Seven." The dogs backed away. Making a circle.

 His father sprung at him. But Mar Jumped back. Grabbing his throught. He went in rage. A mash of fur, claws, teeth, fur, claws, teeth, fur, claws, teeth. A huge blood splatter then Mar howled. His paws mashed against his father's Brocken jaw and teeth. His other on his blood soaked back. The dogs ran and scrambled. it was all so confusing. But the taste of blood. Hung in his mouth. "IT TASTES OF REVENGE!" He barcked. His mind seemed to spin and he blacked in and out. The rain started pounding on his fur. He jumped up on a trashcan and over the fence.

Thier was a large Pile of boxes and things in a cleared out space. He hid inside one. It was wooden, not carboard and didn't leak in. He looked over his coat. Blood and claw marks. Though most of the blood was his father's the clawmarks did sting a bit. The rain tore on. He fell asleep. A large figure hovered over him, but he fell asleep anyways. He couldn't keep his eyes opend.

TO BE CONTINUED.........