bushes and leapt down and grabbed me. The other wolf stomped its paws into the ground and growled. Faux dropped me and I got into a defense stance. "Don't mess with this puppy." I growled. "Or you'll pay." Obviously they thought it was funny. They laughed at me. "Grrr." I growled. "Stay away." I threatened. I said as they took a step forward. I turned to run but the smaller wolf stood in my way.

"Vixie, move." Faux stormed over to me and said, I told you before, you shouldn't be here. Now we'll make it so you CAN'T BE HERE." He bared his fangs and reached to get me. I snapped at his nose, leaving three red scars across it. Faux backed up, clutching his nose. Vixie tried to get me next but I bit her throat and she fell to the ground bleeding lightly. This was my chance.

I bolted out of the space and ran as fast as I could to the meadow. I took a deep breath and sped to my cave. Then I realized they could catch me by my scent. I ran to a puddle and tracked through it, covering my scent. I ran fast through the bushes and suddenly heard a voice, "Hey! Hey you!" I ran till I didn't know where I was.

I looked around the dark forest, breahting heavily. I heard the pounding of paws running after me. I took a deep breath and ran as quickly as I could, rushing for safety. I stopped for a breath and was tackled to the ground by an unsuspecting body.

Making A Friend

"What were you doing here?" Asked the white pup. I could tell it was just a little younger than me. "I was trying to get away from two wolves...." "Faux and Vixie." The pup interrupted. "Yeah. How'd you know?" I asked. "They chased me the first day I was here too. But I didn't come from a house. This is where I was born." I nodded. "And what type of dog are you?" I asked. "Dog?" She laughed. "I'm no dog. I'm a wolf." She said, proudly.

I could tell she was she, by the way she talked. I studied her. "You don't look full wolf." I pointed out. The pup sighed. "Alright. I'm half. Half wolf half mutt. Like you." I gasped. "I'm insulted." I cried. "I happen to be a german shepherd. I said. The pup laughed. "I was kidding. You don't have to take things so seriously." I laughed. "My name is Myki." I told her. "Tala." The white hybrid replied. At that moment I knew I had made a new friend.

And If not friend, then accomplice. Tala smiled at me and I smiled back. "I want you to meet my best friend. His name is Hakue." Tala brought me over to a black wolf pup. "Myki." I said. "Hakue." The wolf pup replied. Tala whispered to him and she and I walked away.

1 year later, I was a fully grown german shepherd. Tala was a full grown hybrid. Ever since that day we met, we'd been together. We'd traveled many days and stayed in many caves, but we always had eachothers backs. Tala and I were the best of the best of friends. As she and I were walking around the forest, I hear a growl. It was a growl all to familiar. "Tala, hide me!" I screamed. To late. The gray german shepherd with a goldish star on his chest pounced on me. "Myki!?" He asked me.

"Myki? Whose that? That's a funny name. Never heard of her." I tried to fake it. "Nice try sis." Alexander said. "I'd know your eyes when I see them."I sighed, caught. "I'm not going home." I growled and pushed him off of me and bit him. "Mom told me to find you and bring you HOME! She misses you a lot." Alexander screamed. I growled. "You're just a lowly shepherd!" Alexander shook his head. "I see. You made a new friend and you don't want to leave. I'll tell mom you love her." He turned to leave. "Oh yea." He looked over his shoulder. "I'm a wolf."

He walked away. Tala laughed. "What was that about?"

Meeting The Enemy

"My stupid brother." I appologized to her. Tala just smiled. "No problem." I laughed and reached out with my black paw. "You're it!" I ran through the field, Tala laughed and ran after me. She stumbled and fell. Her back feet his my back feet and I tumbled to the ground beside Tala, giggling like crazy.

"Wimps." I got up and glared at Tala. Tala asked, "Did you hear that?" "Yes. I did." I replied. We both looked around. Nobody was there. "Yellow mutt." I looked around. "Someone just called me a yellow mutt." I said, hurt. My feelings were crushed. Was I really just a dumb yellow mutt? Tala glared. "No one calls my best friend a yellow mutt except for me."

We looked at eachother and laughed for a second then everything turned serious again. Tala threw her nose to the ground and her paws took her everywhere. "Here he is." She pulled out a black wolf. I stepped forward. "Why are you insulting me?" I asked him. "Because. Look at yourself." I looked down at my furry, yellow chest. "What's wrong with me?" I asked. "You're hideous!" I gasped. "That is the last time you insult me!" I lunged at at him with bared fangs. The black wolf growled.

I felt the fur on my back stand on end. I lunged for the wolf but he backed up. Tala jumped in between us. "Stop!" She cried. I stared at her then lowered my eyes at the wolf. I shook my head, slowly. Tala pushed me away. "Don't get into a fight yet." I walked away with her but stared back over my shoulder at the wolf. I knew I had just made an enemy.

Revenge

I walked with Tala, thinking bad thoughts about the black wolf. Tala nudged me, and said, "I'm gunna go find some food." I nodded. Okay. I walked to a cave and tried to get some sleep in. "Ahh!" My eyes snapped open. I got up and ran outside. I sniffed around. I knew that scream anywhere. I ran through the forest and saw Tala laying on the ground in some blood.

"Tala!" I cried. I ran over to her. "Myki." She whispered. "I helped her onto my back and ran to the cave. "Who did this to you?" I asked as I gently put her on the floor.

"Mac." Tala whispered. "Who?" I narrowed my eyes and cocked my head. "Black wolf." Tala replied. "Oh!" I exclaimed. I searched Tala for her injury and found it just placed on her chest. I cleared it up easily. "I'm going to get my revenge on Mac. You know that Tala." Tala nodded. I knew just how I was going to do it too.

Proof

I wondered if I was really going to do it. I needed proof. Proof I was actually going to fight him. And win. I was so determined to win. I thought of nothing else. When Tala was better, she tried talking me out of it. "No Tala." I said. "My mind is made up. I can't keep letting these stupid wolves think they are better than me." I said.

Tala said, "Fine. I seee I can't change your mind. But I want you to know, you're my best friend I've ever had." She smiled.

I walked over to Tala and hugged her. "You to." Tala and I walked together for a bit. "So your friend's all better ugly?" I glared at Mac as he walked out of the bushes. "Don't f*cking call me ugly!" I screamed.

Tala backed up. I knew she was kind weirded out. "Word in the forest is that you're going to fight me." I stared at him. "Who told you that?" I asked. "Okay well I eavesdropped but whatever." I growled.

Mac laughed. "You know. I hope you enjoy disappointment. Because i'm going to beat you." Mac left and I turend to Tala. "I have my proof." I said.

Preparation

Tala looked at me. "You should be getting ready." I stared at her. "Yah. I guess." Tala said, "I'm really ssorry. If I hadn't..." I interrupted. "No Tala. It's not your fault." I said sternly. Tala shut her mouth and nodded. Tala took out a dummy. I pounced on it immediatly. I tore at its throat and bit its front paws.

1 hour later, Tala had to take out a whole new dummy and she placed in on me like it was attacking me. I growled and snarled and kicked it off. Then tackled it to the ground. Man I felt like a puppy again.

I glanced at Tala and she nodded. "Myki?" I looked at her. "Yah?" I asked. "What if Mac, is more prepared then you?" Tala asked me, concerned. "Well..." I didn't know how to answer. I guess I'd have to let fate choose.

"Let's go spy?" Tala asked. I gulped. I didn't tell her this, but Mac kind of scared. I sniffed around for Mac's scent. I found it leading out somewhere I hadn't been. I stopped short. I saw Mac talking to two different animals. They looked familar. Faux and Vixie. We watched as Faux lay on the ground, falling to sleep.

The Battle

I stepped out into the bright sunshine the next morning. Tala was already up. I sighed. Tala looked at me with a big grin on her face. "Are you okay?" I asked her. "Yes! I'm so stoked!" I narrowed an eyebrow. "You should stay here." I said.

Tala looked at me and laughed. "You're joking right? No way am I staying here. It's gunna be Mac, Faux, and Vixie against you. Im going! I wanna help!" I shrugged my shoulder. "Okay! Glad to have you along!" I smiled. I practiced my snarl for a minute then finally turned to her. "Let's go."

We walked through the forest for a little while, until we got to the open field which is where the fight will take place. "He's coming." Tala exclaimed. I jumped up. I watched as Mac walked out of the bushes. He had a devilish grin on his face. It made me squirm uncomfortably. He was up to something, I just wasn't quite sure what.

I shivered. I looked up into the sky and seen the beautiful sun that was there seconds ago, had disappeared behind thick, heavy, grey clouds. I felt a drop of rain hit my nose. The rain was coming down slowly then picked up.

I shook the wet fur out of my eyes. Mac stood infront of me. Our faces were so close, our noses almost touched. I growled and so did Mac. I bared my fangs. "Let's do this girlie-boy." I said, meanly. Mac laughed and turned serious again. We walked in circles, never taking our eyes off of eachothers.

I couldn't take the stall any longer. I lunged for him, just missing his neck. He jumped back. I crouched down, in attack mode. I growled and so did Mac. "Stay back." I warned. Mac narrowed his eyes. I could feel my muscles tense up and flex. Mac panted. I pounced on him.

I took him to the ground. My paws pushed his chest into the muddy ground. The rain poured down, dripping off my



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August 22, 2009
Usa Female
ahh. I see. Well thanks theen.

August 19, 2009
Canada Female
It's sooo good. Tala is freakin' aweosme, rips out Mac's eyes! It tooka while to attack him though.

August 20, 2009
Usa Male
Pretty rough. As you might have guessed, I'm no fan of the violence or the language. But the story is pretty well-managed except for one thing: your main character's desire for the wild needs considerably more development. She just meets one wild animal and all of the sudden she's acting like one, enough to hurt her own brother? Way too rushed.
Also, it might be a good idea to break up the paragraphs a bit more; start a new one each time the speaker changes.

August 19, 2009
Canada Female
Aweee your welcome

August 19, 2009
Usa Female
it makes the whole story one hundreed times better

August 19, 2009
Usa Female
haha yea i know i was like, lol ihahahaha
omg thjanks for the coveeer




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