Tears Of Blood

Author : steele_rox

Date sent : August 07, 2009

Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Category : Flashback/Character Developement

Description : A small puppy named Myki meets badger who changes her mind about living in a house. She wants to live in the wild. She meets a young hybrid who she befriends and the duo have plenty of adventures together. WARNING: Contains slight swearing and violence Cover pic (c) Tala

Length : Short -

Characters : 1559 visits



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                  PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)
Tears Of Blood
By steele_rox

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This fanfic was rated PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned).


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August 22, 2009
Usa Female
ahh. I see. Well thanks theen.

August 19, 2009
Canada Female
It's sooo good. Tala is freakin' aweosme, rips out Mac's eyes! It tooka while to attack him though.

August 20, 2009
Usa Male
Pretty rough. As you might have guessed, I'm no fan of the violence or the language. But the story is pretty well-managed except for one thing: your main character's desire for the wild needs considerably more development. She just meets one wild animal and all of the sudden she's acting like one, enough to hurt her own brother? Way too rushed.
Also, it might be a good idea to break up the paragraphs a bit more; start a new one each time the speaker changes.

August 19, 2009
Canada Female
Aweee your welcome

August 19, 2009
Usa Female
it makes the whole story one hundreed times better

August 19, 2009
Usa Female
haha yea i know i was like, lol ihahahaha
omg thjanks for the coveeer


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