Pretty interesting.
You are a really well written writer.
I envy you ._.

You can still edit out mistakes you know. Go to 'send fanfic', and on the options list you can manage the text. It's highly recommended you do this, since there are several things that the site screwed up and well as some things I missed.

I did didn't I. DT if you read this please forgive me. I forgot to edit in Rex in the credits. It just slipped with the rest of the writing.

Wonderful! I loved how it turned out, even if there were some things (rather obvious things-- dang it!) I missed, now I reread it here. :D Some of the fonts got screwed up by the site as well I see... oh well, it is still an awesome story!

(Oh, by the way, don't forget to edit the credits as well as the mistakes I missed-- Dragon Tamer's character Rex appears too!)

Thanks so much for keeping Orde, Ewan, Comet, and Mirage alive on the site like this, you don't know what it means to me.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I'd like to see more!