You ought to sing it or get some one to sing it. I can imagine the tune!

All I can say: Sad but touching.

Wow that was so touching, i absoultely loved it, great job!

Stunning. Thats all i can say. That was the greatest poem i've read on here and it left me speachless. I can't rhyme words at all. Once again, good job on this poem!

really good

Part story, part poem. Interesting mix.

I get it. Or at least close enough.

That poem was great. It was sad how it ended. Your poem was like a story olny it wasn't but....uh I hope you understand what I'm trying to say!

Very sad. You're an exceptional poet. The verses were well written, and you managed to rhyme everything and make it sound amazing! (I have trouble rhyming anything, so hats off to you) Another brilliant description of Balto's early life.

its great really but it sooooooo sad I almost cried ;( but good job still.