Lilly II: Distant Memories

Author : jett

Date sent : June 09, 2009

Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Category : Epic

Description : Surviving after a shocking departure from the pack, Lilly recalls the tragic events that happened over the last month. Thoughts including Torrid, Sage, and Holly cause her to walk into a trap that could take her life and the ones she loves as well. Rated PG-13 for mild violence...(but not too much)

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Lilly II: Distant Memories
By jett

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February 01, 2012
Usa
I hope part 3 comes out very soon. The others were very good, but this is my favorite series.

January 03, 2011
Usa Female
I <3 Riley Biers (Eclipse)
Ummm... exactly how many series is the Lilly story? And don't stop writing the Dawn 'til Dusk series!!!! I really want to see Onyx and Mave's puppies. ;) :)

June 09, 2010
I can't wait till part three

October 25, 2009
Usa Female
Dune Trekker
mild violence... just to be safe

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Guest
October 25, 2009
Why must it be PG-13? >:[

August 07, 2009
Usa Female
Impending...I can't wait to see what happens in pt. 3!

June 28, 2009
Usa Female
I <3 Riley Biers (Eclipse)
And THIS part:
“Well, we'll just have to get ready for it. We are all in fit shape. It just seems rather untimely to be launching an attack at this time of season. Most wolves are bearing litters by now. It seems strange that they would force them to fight.”

“The pack could possibly be only composed of males. That would give an explanation for an attack so late in the spring,” suggested Sage.

“No, this doesn't seem right,” Lilly disputed. “Everything seems to be happening all at once. Why would it all occur now, of all times?”

“Maybe the opponent detects a weakness pertaining to this pack,” Torrid joined in.

Lilly gave him a sharp glare, although he stood almost a full head taller than her.

“Really? How so?” she snapped.

“Usually after the transition to a new alpha male or female, the pack goes through a period of weakness as the new leader has to learn everything about guiding the pack. The pack already knows everything, but normally, young inexperienced leaders will take the pack a step backwards, especially if they are not trained.”

“Are you suggesting that I am not fit to be leader?” Lilly implied.

“No, I'm just stating that I don't think that you are aware of the dangers that could be involved with another pack trying to take over. It is obvious to me that you have had no proper training.”

Lilly raged with fury.

“Oh, ho, ho, does it now? Well, just to let you know, I have had no training whatsoever, thanks to my pitiful father who was killed. Whether it is obvious to you or not has nothing to do with me, and as far as I'm concerned it's none of your business in the first place!”

“I take it that the pressure involved with being a new leader is the excuse for your ignorant outburst. However, Lilly, I have been appalled a great many times by a great many creatures, and your futile insult hardly amounts to any of them.”

“If all you come here to do is anger me, I suggest you'd better depart.”

“Then I will. Good bye, Lilly. By the way, you're welcome!” he said with an arrogant grin as he walked away to join his own pack.

Lilly shook her head with irritation. She had never in her whole life met someone as domineering and boorish as him. Although she had to admit, at first, she had almost allowed herself to feel attracted to him. His bulging muscles that rippled from underneath his fur made poor Amak look like a shrimp. Sage, on the other hand, seemed awe-struck.

“Earth to Sage!” Lilly shouted.

“Oh, Lilly, isn't he wonderful?” Sage sighed yearningly.

Lilly's head turned sharply to glare at her friend.

“What did you say?” she growled.

“Lilly, how could you be so nasty to him? After all, he did save your life.”

“Ha! I'd rather let Holly kill me than allow him to sass me like that. What does he think he his? The leader of a pack?”

“He is, Lilly. He is the leader of Current Pack. I'm sorry, I thought I told you.”

“To think that I got all aggrieved over that,” Lilly deplored. “What's the use. I guess I'll never earn any respect from males.”

“Speaking of males, Lilly, I won't be around tonight.”

“Who is it, Sage?”

“Torrid...” she muttered.

“Torrid?! Why of all the nit-witted, brainless, pushy guys would you choose him?”

“Lilly, there's no reason to explode. He asked me, and I said yes. It's just a little date. It's not like I'm totally hooked on him or anything.”

Lilly frowned and walked away, leaving Sage to ponder. Evening came, the sky once again blushing into colors of orange, pink, and yellow. Sage wandered to the feet of the White Cliffs, where she met Torrid. Lilly sat alone in her corner of the cave, pouting herself to sleep...


June 27, 2009
Usa Female
I <3 Riley Biers (Eclipse)
You're very welcome, Jett. I love your art too.

June 27, 2009
Usa Female
Dune Trekker
awww, thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

June 27, 2009
Usa Female
I <3 Riley Biers (Eclipse)
Also this part:
Holly crept up to Lilly until they were only a foot's length away from each other, forcing Lilly to look up at her opponent. Lilly, at first, wanted to avoid eye contact with the one who killed her family, but she found herself penetrating the hesitant villain with a vigilant glare.

“You are Luna. You are her daughter, therefore, you are a part of her!”

“What is that against you?!”
“Luna stole your father away from me!”

“You stole him away from her! Yeah, I saw you in here with him while Luna was still alive! You've got no where to run, Holly. We have you surrounded, and this time, you won't get loose!”

“Never!” Holly growled the moment before she crashed into Lilly, pinning her down.

Sage didn't waste a single moment and knocked Holly off her feet, send her tumbling across the forest floor. Dust kicked up all around, but Lilly made her way to Holly and chased her away from the battling packs. Even while she was running at full speed, Lilly could determine that Holly was heading toward the White Cliffs, a dead end. Picking up pace, she corned her at the cliff.

“See what if feels like, Holly?” Lilly asked, panting.

Holly's fear appeared in her devious face, an expression never shown before. Lilly saw her glance down. The river vividly meandered around jagged rocks and debris from further upstream. The waterfall roared from a short distance. Tiny rock particles shattered from beneath one foot and landed in the wild river below, the currant too wild to make a single ripple. The stones were eaten up by the river and never to be seen again.

“Holly, tell me. Did you really kill my mother?”

Holly glanced down one last time at the river.

“Tell me!”

“No!” Holly screamed. “I didn't, but I wanted to! Mark my words, I wanted to!”

“Who did?”

“I don't know! I don't know! I couldn't kill Luna, but I'll get you, and that's one thing you can guarantee! I will not rest until I kill you and all your descendants!”

“Let it go, and I will not kill you, Holly.”

“Never!” Holly growled once more, grabbing Lilly by surprise and knocking her into a rock.

Lilly stood up, her shoulder throbbing, and attacked Holly by the back. Holly was nearly twice her size in weight, and a whole head taller in height. She had years of experience when it came to killing other wolves, something Lilly had never done before.

Holly yanking her off with her gleaming fangs, bared. Lilly hit the ground hard, knocking her unconscious. Holly circled around her like a vulture, waiting for the precise second to move in for the kill. Just as she was about to grab her at the throat, a new figure leaped out of the foliage. There was only a flash of reddish brown, and Holly slipped over the cliff into the river, her holler echoing from the moment she slipped from existence.

“Lilly!” Sage called from behind the trees.

The stranger looked hesitant and wary. Sage halted with shock at the sight of her friend lying dead at the feet of a stranger, a very handsome stranger.

“You killed her!”

Lilly awoke to a pounding pain her head. Sitting up, a dizziness overcame her and she was forced to sit back down. Slumping up against the cave wall, she was able to make out her dark surroundings. Sage stood by her side.

“Lilly, you okay?”

“What happened?”

Sage laughed her deep bellow and turned to a stranger.

“Is Holly dead?” Lilly asked softly.

“Torrid took care of that,” replied Sage with a grin.

“Torrid? I don't know any Torrid.”

“He belongs Current Pack, just on the other side of the White Cliffs. He heard the commotion and saved you. I guess Holly had you beat.”

“Uhhhhhhh,” Lilly groaned and tightly shut her eyes, trying to evade the pain.

“Come outside, Lilly. A little fresh air will do you good.”

Lilly followed her friend, as the stranger lurked behind her. Once outside in the afternoon light of the sun, Lilly noted his distinct features. He was indeed a rust brown color, possessing black ears, stockings, and a tip of the tail. His eyes were a misty gray color, unusual, yet appealing to Lilly.

“Thank you for saving me,” she whispered to him shyly.

“Well, I couldn't just stand and watch another member of our species die now, could I?” he snapped, as if it all was a burden. “Why were you fighting Holly anyway?”

“I was getting revenge, and how do you know Holly?” Lilly inquired, now bothered by this young wolf who seemed to think he knew everything.

“I got caught up with her over a few matters that resolved in the death of a wolf. I vowed to never again let another die for no reason.”

Lilly rolled her eyes, apparently annoyed with him. Seeing the forest whirl around her in an instant, she caught sight of Lupine approaching her. He seemed to have something important on his mind.

“Lilly, I bring a message from a neighboring pack,” he stated.

“Lupine, don't act so decorous. Just tell me what you need to say,” Lilly groaned.

“It seems that a nearby pack has been making some threats around the area, intimidating others to join them, trying to obtain total dominance of the region. Word has been going around that they are scheming to attack us next.”


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