II Illiivat II

Author : lunawings383

Date sent : May 29, 2009

Rating : PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned)

Category : Epic

Description : After his trick on Hiatus, Everest has stepped into the life of an outlaw. But now Hiatus wants nothing more then to strip Everest of every once of dignity he has... *author's note- once again couldn't wait! and also, rated pg-13 only because i didn't want to take any chances*

Length : Long -

Characters :
Tempest
Tempest
Arrow (larkspur
Arrow (larks...
Quick
Quick
Odin
Odin
Everest
Everest
Hiatus
Hiatus
Will
Will
Fly
Fly
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II Illiivat II
By lunawings383

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June 03, 2009
Usa Female
The GAME!!!!
dt> thanks! and thanks for the input, i need all the advice i can get!
kodi> thank you!

June 03, 2009
Uk
Alpha male of the Unalaq Pack
I cant wait for the next one! I looked at your illivat signature and Tempest is really beautiful:P

June 03, 2009
Usa Male
Very nice! My only advice is to be a little more descriptive of the scenery. Do that and you'll have a real masterpiece on your hands (not that you don't already, if you see what I mean).

June 02, 2009
Usa Female
The GAME!!!!
wow, thank you!

June 02, 2009
Usa Female
Wow. This is just as good as the first one, which I loved too. You are an amazing writer and I think you do very well with your fan fics. You describe the charcters very well too. Tempest and Quirk are good aditions to the growing pack. :]

June 02, 2009
Usa Female
The GAME!!!!
haha, you just wait! it'll get even better! i got something big planned for everest, but hiatus just might be able to match it.... or beat it!

June 01, 2009
Usa Female
Dune Trekker
yay!!! Can't wait!

June 01, 2009
Usa Female
The GAME!!!!
comet!!

May 31, 2009
Usa Female
Dune Trekker
who?

May 31, 2009
Usa Female
The GAME!!!!
wow, thanks! glad you liked it! and geuss who's starring in the next one!!!

May 31, 2009
Usa Female
Dune Trekker
OH MY GOSH!!! Luna, that was astounding! I'm on the edge of my seat! Cannot wait for another! "Great" hardly wraps up all the hard work in one word. Magnificent job!

June 02, 2009
Nicaragua
"I'm not a god, you know. I don't have all the answers."
It was great! Everest is really starting to understand what to do now. Hiatus is just getting angrier. Which makes me lol.

June 02, 2009
Usa Female
The GAME!!!!
thanks, hopefully, i'll start it soon!

May 30, 2009
Usa Female
The GAME!!!!
thanks^^!

May 30, 2009
Usa Female
WOW... That is a great one Luna!! Almost better than the first!!! Great job!;) :P :cool: :)

May 29, 2009
Usa Female
The GAME!!!!
please comment!:cry: was this one as good as the first?

June 02, 2009
Australia Female
Good work, be egerly awaiting the next one.

June 01, 2009
Usa Female
The GAME!!!!
XD neither can i!

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