cried. "Why? Do your siblings hate you?" He asked. "No. Thier... I...." She stoped, took a deep breath, and calmed herself. "My mother bave birth in a blizzerd. And sadly, I was the only one that lived." She said.

Echo looked at his feet."My brother can be....kinda-"
"no...He diddn't know..."
"So your not mad?"
".......no....."
They fanilly found themselves at the beach.

They both were quiet. They sat down, and wached the sun set. "Its beautifull." Carmen said. Echo looked at her. "Just like you." He smiled, but he didn't mean to say it. Carmen looked at him out of the corner of her eye and blushed. "Thanks." She said, nuzzling her head under his chin. It got dark quick,and Carmen had to leave."I'm sorry But I gotta go."She ran off."But.."Echo started,but she was gone.He went into her yard,but It started to snow,so he hid under the porch. Carmen was inside. She felt realy bad abut leaving him like that. Her owner saw her dog was upset. But didn't know what to do. Carme looked out the window and saw it snowing hard. Oh no! she thought. The next morning she woke from her owner petting her. "Someone's at the door to see you." She walked out the door, but stublec over a black object. She opend her eye's to see Echo ontop of her. He flipped back."Whoa...uh....sorry..."He blushed.Her owner watched them."I was just...."He said,but carmen was to embaressed to say anything."C'mon guys,it's cold outhere."She said aand they walked inside. Echo was scared, he had never been in a home before. Carmen lied down on her blanket, and he followd. "Its alot warmer in here than outside." Echo said. "No!" Carmen laughed. "Oh, queit you!" Echo teased. They laughed for a while then Carmen's owner came to give them water.She reached to pet Echo but he batched away."It's okay,she wont hurt you..."Carmen smiled. Echo walkedback up to her and let her pet him. "Aaaww, your so cute, you don't have a home do you?" She asked. Echo looked up at her. Is she takeing me in? he thought. "Well, you kinf of skinny, so if you do your owner's not taking good care of you. So you can live here!" Her owner smiled. Carmen smiled happely at Echo. He did the same to her. "I'll go bye you a coller." The girl said and grabed her keys, and walked out the door. "collar?"Echo said."It's what dogs that have on thier necks to keep them from getting dognapped."She smiled."[i]dogs...[i]"Echo groaned.

 

"Oh... sorry." Carmen whined. He looked up at her. "No, sorry hon." He said, but the word hon sliped out. She looked up at him. "YOur full of your self arn't you... hon." She giggled. "Oh shush." He teased. And they played until her owner came home about three hours later.

She slipped a blue collor around his neck.He scratched it for a while then got used to it."You look nice."Carmen blushed

He smiled at her. "Oh, wait... my. Family. We. Have to. Tell them." He studderd. "Oh, your right, please, lead the way." Carmen said. He nodded. They dashed out the doggie-door. They ran to thier cave. Bruno was outside and saw the color around his brother's neck. His eye's whidend. "Mom. Dad!" Bruno called.

t wasn't goinng to be easy...but Echo knew he could pull through.They sat in a circle".................Echo I ........................Your a wolf."Zasha cried."I know mom.........but......."Echo diddn't want to admit his feelings for Carmen when she was sittng right there."I.......can't just....live her forever.....I gotta branch out....."Echo said."Echo...I knew someday somthing like this would happen........Listen boy.......If you want to go......It will be very fine with us."Shade said."One thing you get to know before anyone else is......Your mother and I are expecting a thried litter......we will have enought to look after if that is your choise..."Shade smiled."Thank you......"Echo smiled and walked off with Carmen.Zasha burried her face deep into Shade's neck as her son walked of into the street."Don't worry.......we can see him anytime...."shade said."It's not that....I'm proud."Zasha smiled.

"Oh, I hope she's not mad at me!" Carmen said as she looked back at Zasha crying. "Nah, she just... gets... emotional." Echo chuckled. As they walked home, they walked on the beach and saw this beautifull sun-set. "Wow.." Carmen sighed. "Lets go." She said. He nadded and the kept walking. The walked in the doggie-door and were reated by thier human. "Okay lets put you too to sleep." She said. WHAT Echo thought, his parents told him when a human said "put to sleep" it ment somthing bad. Seeing the scared look on Echo's face, Carmen busted out lauhing. "No... She means we... need to go to sleep." She said, trying to controle her laughter. "Oh..." Echo said, rather emberest. "Its fine." She replyd. They walked to the back of the room and she pointed at a rug. She lied down on it and he did the same. "Wow, this is much better than the cave floor." Echo said.

"wow......whats it like beeing a wolf?"Carmen asked."Well..pretty much the same as a dog's life...ya know...without the human enteraction...."he laughed.

"Oh, thats nice." She smiled. Soon both were asleep, but during the night Carmen woke and was very cold. She walked to the other side of him and slide under one of his arms. But she didn't know that he was awake. He smiled and felt her nuzzle closer. "It, would be nice to have him for, a mate." She whisperd. YES!!! Echo thought.

He diddn't say anything the next few days.He diddn't want her to know he had heard her.He thought she'd be too imbarressed."Carmen...."Echo started."yeah?"she asked.

"Uhh.. I um, need to talk to you.." He said. She walked closer. His heart pounded in his chest, what would or could he tell her? "I. I..." He couldn't get te words out. Say it! Come on spit it out. He thought. Please! Oh I hope he says it! Carmen thought. He took a deep breath. "C-C-C-C Carmen.." He started.

"ILIKEYOUALOTNSTUFF!" Echo coughed.

She somwhat new what he said. Or was trying to say. "Well... I like you and lot of stuff." She giggled.He let out his breath."ooohhhhh okay....kinda didn't like you liked me."he sighed.

"Well, I don't." She said. "Uuuuuhhh?" Echo was very puzzled, she just said she liked him. "What do you mean? You just said you li-" He was cut off. "I love you.." She said, nuzzling him.

Carmen's owner walked in.She almost flipped backwards.Carmen was sooo embaressed,Echo was just staring into outer space and her owner looked at the dogs puzzled."carmen.....?"

What would her owner think? Carmen had never done that to any other dog that her owner let in the house. Crap! She thought.

Her owner looked surprised but then went over to Carmen.She stroked her neck."See there girl,your making friends."She smiled.

"I have friends." Carmen growled. Her owner heard her growl. "Oh, okay, your making boyfriends." Her owner giggled.

Echo just looked at them,his head cocked over.She patted him.Carmen blushed as she walked off."Kinda akward."She sighed.

"Ah who cares!" Echo laughed. "Yeah, come on, lets go out before it gets dark." Carmen said, he nodded. They walked out tward the boiler room.

They walked and walked,but when they got their a large dark colored dog was there."Oh hey baby."He smilled at Carmen."Back off!"She growled."Oh but Carmen girl."He laughed and stood up."Youre MY girl."She smilled and got closer.Echo crouched down as if to pounce.He got realy close to CarmenThen outta nowhere he jumped on her,nocking her over.Echo jumped and The two tummbled down aa hill.Carmen's paw was seroisly injured after the blow,so ll she could do where watch he two boys rip at eachother.Echo was half his size but surprisingly,was winning."LEAVE MY MATE ALONE!"Carmen growled,but then,before she could relize what she haad said,she slid down the hill,with them."OOOWWWW!"She cried.Then,she dicided to help,by bitting the maale on the leg.He jumped away."Do you know him?"Echo panted."sadly."She sighed.

She tried to walk closer, but once she put down her paw, she fell with a loud whimper. "I-I think its broken!" She cried. Echo was outraged. "How do you know him?" He asked. "He-He is the son of one of the males that killed my mother." She cried. Echo bared his teeth. "Wait I gotta an idea." He said. He took a deep breath, and howled.

No reply."AAAWWWWWHHHOOOOOOO."No reply."one more time,AAAwwwwhhhoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!"He howled." it's not working... "she said pitifully.He slid her ontop of his back and carried her home.her owner quickly came to her."OH NO WE HAVE TO GET A VET!"She cried.

Echo did his best to put her down softly. He lied next to her. The vet walked in, and when he saw the two lieing there, he smiled. He walked over. "Can you move for a sec, boy?" The vet asked. Echo slowly moved away. After the vet was done, he moved away and Echo could see a red cast around her leg.

He nuzzled her."You'd better be glad you found him,he's a mirical on 4 legs,theirs a snow storm tonight,and she would hve died without him carring her,would you like me to check up on him?For free of course!"He smiled."sure."She agreed.He opend his bag and looked in Echo's ear and down his through,and checked his heart rate."Good as gold,but I'm goinng to run a blood test,he is a stray,just so you can see how much to sell the pups for."He said.Carmen and Echo blushed,but diddn't look at eachother."Of course they probably will have some,now,here we go."he said.Echo felt a sharp pain in is arm.he turned to see a type of object with a needle,and that had a tube with blood inside."eeehhhhrrrr...."He gasped."It's okay,It's just a shot."Carmen consulted.After awhile the docter came back."Mam.....he is



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May 03, 2009
Usa Female
Midnightwolf--> Thanks.

May 02, 2009
Usa Female
I loved it !!! Echo and Carmen are a cute couple!!!!!:)




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