someone."

"Who?" Sinad whispered.

"See him *points to the roof of a building*, there going to snipe me, shoot him" whispered Carlos.

Sinad stood up and rotated his rifle that was straped to his back and quickly aimed at the sniper that was to flank Carlos. Sinad fired and made a perfect shot.

The sniper fell off the building, dead and his body crashed through the pourch of the building.

"Now... 1 more time, now that your Assassination attept has failed.... surrender you allegence to me... or see this beautiful town in ashes by sundown... you choice." Carlos said with much more anger.

The canine leader was stunned, these guys actully killed someone with no mercy.

"Ok... you win.... the town of Nenana is now under your control" he said as he bowed his head to honor Carlos.

"See that wasn't so hard... tell Xang that we are staying here for the night, and we walk to Wales in the morning." Carlos ordered to his troops behind him.

 (())

about 2 hours later...

The main Deathlock army is now settled for the night in Nenana, and Carlos Deathlock is walking the streets of Nenana...

"Carlos!" a vioce called from behind.

Carlos turned around recognizing the vioce, without turning around he said "Hey Vadu."

Carlos turned around and there stood a solid black wolf with blood red eyes. "I have news about the Enforcers." Vadu said.

"How far are they ahead?" Carlos said knowing that they have a 4 day head start to the town of Wales.

"Quite far, but they are not heading to Wales... but to the city of Nome, Bravo 22 Delta are already there and have learned that Medic Britoni and Sarge Petty are the new temperay Police dogs there."

"What about our prisoners?" Carlos asked.

"How many you got?" Vadu asked.

"Let's see... 23 Enforcers, 2 Mi-Has, 8 Romans, 5 Celtics, 112 local Anchorage gang members who call them selves, The Timber Gang, 4 Edmonton citizens, 1 Junoeu citiezen, 4 Anchorage citizens, 2 Nenana citizens........... and Miss Petty...."

"Miss Petty is the only one I want you to worry about... she is the perfect trap for Britoni... 2 lovers... 2 useful deaths." Vadu said

"So what do you expect us to do?" Carlos asked.

"Well the Enforcers most likely have a few good tricks up there sleves... so we have to destroy them once and for all, and Nome as well." Vadu said.

"So what are you saying, Vadu?" Carlos asked agian.

"For our plans to succeed... Nome must be destroyed."

To Be Continued...

Well there you go... part III is FINALLY done. I know I lacked the love story to Kodi and Dusty, and lines for Bravo 22 Delta, but I needed to introduce both the Enforcers and the Deathlocks. Part IV: A Ruthless Enemy is next, that will be mainly about the Deathlock's march to the town of Elim, and the beggining of the romance of Kodi and Dusty, so stay tuned. Part IV will start off at Chapter 17: Sweet Emotion.

The Characters:

Balto/ Kodi/ Dusty/ Ralph/ Kirby/ unknown dogs (Marine and Totin)/ Jenna/ Boris/ Muk and Luk/ Dipsy/ Mel/ Doc: @ Universal

Medic Michelaglio Britoni/ Sarge Conleth Petty/ Paulie Cassair Petty/ Liuetenant Damhnaic Petty/ Jazz Celtic Petty/ Jeremiah Gobnet Malinn/ Carlos Hecter Deathlock/ Sinad Yale Empire/ Achillies Paris Apollo/ Xang Ling Ti Wong/ Altair David Melech/ Anastas Aztec Santiago/ Bodichelli Antonio Addoloratta/ Saladin/ random names: @ Medic

Hidalgo/ Sisqo/ Timber Gang members: @ Balto_fan23

This song remeinded me Nome's struggle to be prepared for the Deathlock's arrival in the limited amount of 2 weeks in the begginng

'The Final Countdown' by: Europe

Were leaving together,
But still its farewell
And maybe well come back,
To earth, who can tell?
I guess there is no one to blame
Were leaving ground
Will things ever be the same again?

Its the final countdown.

The final countdown.

Were heading for venus and still we stand tall
Cause maybe theyve seen us and welcome us all
With so many light years to go and things to be found
Im sure that well all miss her so.

It's the final countdown.

The final countdown.

The final countdown, Final countdown

The final countdown.

It's the final countdown.

The final countdown.

The final countdown.

Its the final countdown, final countdown.

We're leaving together.

The final countdown.

We'll all miss her so.

It's the final countdown, final countdown.

It's the final countdown.

Here is the real version of the song with clips from the movie "Armageddon", I bet you heard it somewhere, I was suprised when I found it in the related videos on Youtube.:  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6MPTbSJH0lE

Love's Crime, Part IV: A Ruthless Enemy is next strating a Chapter 17: Sweet Emotion.



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December 03, 2009
Usa Male
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How could I resist man XD

But actually, the Italian Mafia in New York were just as famous as Al Capone in Chicago during the 1920s. Infact the Mob golden ages was from 1890-1941 (When America went ito the war). Infact Vito Corleone (The Godfather XP) was a real person and a real Don. Just the story exagerated (sp.) the story to make it more exiting.

The mafias that come into the story, are actually made up. Jeremah of the Enforcers was made up completely cuz their Irish, not Italian. Most of the Irish mobs went north into Boston, and if they were any Irish mobs in New York, they probally wern't that big. You'll learn more about all the canine mafia in part IV.:cool:

November 14, 2009
Usa
I KNEW you were going to have mentioned The Godfather in this!

May 24, 2009
Usa Male
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KT-- Hey thanks ^^

May 21, 2009
i d k who u r but i like ur story!!!!!!!! :)

April 11, 2009
Usa Male
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OMG, top 10, that'll be even better if it goes up, thanks you guys, it would've never made it to the top ten without you...

March 29, 2009
Usa Male
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Don't worry, I didn't have time. Part 4 WILL have 10X more, I promise

March 29, 2009
Usa
Great story but I thought there'd be more of Kodi and Dusty

March 13, 2009
Newzealand
nice fic,but there's just one small problem




SPELLING

March 13, 2009
Usa Male
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Well there is no spell check. I just remembered MS Word XDlol

March 03, 2009
Uk Female
Silvermoon family
Hurry!!! I need more Medi:P So Ill eat you if you dont hurrylol

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