LOVE'S CRIME, ALL PARTS, ARE IN THE MIDDLE OF BEING RE-EDITED. I AM FIXING ALL THE SPELLING ERRORS, MIS-INORMATION, AND BAD EXPLINATIONS!!!! PLEASE BARE WITH ME! THIS IS JUST PREPARING FOR PART 4 AND THE REST OF THE SERIES!!!! IT WILL BE DONE WHEN THIS MESSAGE GOES AWAY!!!!

 

January 24, 1929, Liuetenant and his partners, or their old Enforcer name, Bravo 22 Delta, have already made a second attept to kill Kodi and Dusty, but failed thanks to Aniu. Aniu had givin a warning to Kodi and Dusty to go tell Medic Britoni and Sarge Petty, the new Police dogs of Nome. The warning was an army of a deadly goup of canines called, The Deathlock Family is on the way to Nome. What will happen, here is what the town will do.

Nome, Alaska

10: 56 AM or 10: 56

14 days until the Deathlock's arrival...

Chapter 10: Emergency Dog Alert System

"OK Kodi told me to look for a guy named Mel, most likely he will be freaking out" Sarge said as him and his best friend Medic were wlking the streets looking for Mel.

"Yo, is that 'em?" Medic asked seeing a terrior freaking out at Dipsy in front of the Genral Store.

"Must be"

"OK... YO MEL!!!" Medic yelled

Mel looked to see who just called him, then figured out it was the cops.

"I didn't do it Officers, blame Dipsy nit me" he yelled.

"We're not..... *Mel saying random things*.... we're not here to arrest anyone, we just need to ask a question" Sarge said.

"We need to know where to sound the C.D.O.G" Medic said getting E.D.A.S wrong again.

"He means E.D.A.S" Sarge corrected.

"Yeah that"

"What's wrong.... We're all going to DIE, Hide me Dipsy" Mel yelled, he then slid under Dipsy, and Dipsy rolled her eyes.

Medic and Sarge looked at each other, then Medic finally said "Dipsy can you help us out here"

"Yeah follow me" she said leading Medic and Sarge to a top-sided trash can.

"Is this it, I was expecting like a crank or something" Sarge said looking at the trash can.

"Well this isn't New York" Dipsy said

"YA THINK" Medic yelled

"Wait, before the town goes into a panic, were is the meeting held so Mel and I know where to go?" Dipsy asked.

"The Boiler room, we want anything that has fur to be their, this is probally the biggest energency since the diptheria epidmic" Sarge as him and his partner were about to leave to go tell everyone to the Boiler room.

Medic and Sarge left the ally and waited for Dipsy to sound the alarm before they start telling people to go to te bolier room.

The alarm was sounded, the barking of dogs begen to spread all around the town, in windows, on the streets, on the outskirts.

Medic and Sarge were probally the only dogs who wern't barking, but they were telling every dog the see to go to the bolier room.

"Boiler room.... Jackie bolier room....  Suesan boiler room NOW" Medic yelled on one side of the street while Sarge on the other telling everything with fur, dogs, cats, all those guys.

(())

30 minuests later...

After 30 minuets of Medic and Sarge and a few volenteers to help the Police dogs get all dogs and cats to the boiler room an emergency meeting. Everyone is pretty muchly there.

The exremely large crowd of dogs and a few cats tried to fit in the room, but some people had to sit outside.

The talk in the crowd was about diffrent things, but all about what's going on.

Finally Balto, Boris, Muk and Luk made it to know what is so important. Following them was Jenna.

"Balto" she said "What's going on? There hasn't been a meeting this big since the disese"

"I don't know, Sarge came to the trawler yelling to come to the Boiler room and ran off"

Balto looked behind his mate and saw his son, Kodi, and Dusty being esorted by Medic and Sarge.

"Are these two the last of 'em" Medic asked on Dusty's side looking around.

"I think so, how you holding up, Dusty?" Sarge asked on Kodi's side.

"I'm doing fine" she said a little tired.

"Stay close guys, big crowd" Medic said becouse they want Kodi and Dusty to be up fron of the crowd becouse they al read

"Hey Kodi" Balto tryed to say but Kodi interupted.

"Not now guys, I'll talk to you after the meeting K" Kodi said just before they entered the crowd.

"Are those the new Police dogs, I heard thier is so many girls who want to ask them out" Jenna said after from hearing at least 10 females who want to.

"Yeah, I talked to both of them, thier pretty nice" Balto said.

"Move it, witnessess coming through" Medic yelled as they were trying to get to the front which is the back of the old building.

They placed Kodi and Dusty up at the front and went onto a platform in the way back of the room where no one was, it was kind like a theader in the boiler room.

(())

"Can I have everyone's attention please" Sarge said "Settle down guys"

"YO PEOPLE SHUT THE HELL UP" Medic yelled, and it worked, Medic's voice is at least 5X more projective.

"Now I bet your all wondering why we gathered you here?" Sarge asked.

"You bet" said someone in the audience "What is the big deal" said another.

"I know Medic and I have only been here for 2 days, but that is long enough for us to know quite a few of you pretty well. The real reason we had you spend your valubal time here is for some troubleing news, and it might be as dangerous as the dipthera epidemic." Sarge anounced to every dog and cat of Nome.

"What is going on?" Ralph asked in the audience.

"That is hard thing to explain, but we are all in danger, lifethreating. OK, we all know Dusty was attacked by something, well yesterday we found who....."

"WHERE, I'LL KILL THEM NOW!!!!!" one dog in the audience yelled.

"2 problems there, we don't know where they are hideing, and the other is what I'm about to explain... you all know Kodi, well Medic and I gave him the job the night Dusty was attacked to take care of her as she heals, and well yesterday they went for a walk on the beach...." Sarge said but a teenage dog in the audence interupted him.

"WHOOOOOO" yelled the teen and everyone, even Kodi and Dusty made a chuckle from that.

"Kid, you are awesome!!!!" Medic yelled to the teen who just yelled.

"No, I don't think it's that kind of walk, but anyways, Dusty's attackers had striked again...." Sarge said but the teenage dog yelled again.

"DATE GONE BAD!!!!" he yelled again and everyone made a chuckle again.

"Yes yes OK, Dusty's attackers striked agian, but a wolf had saved them aparently and told them an army is heading here to Nome"

Is that the bad news?" someone asked.

"Yes becouse the army is who Dusty's attackers work for, the are called the Deathlock Family, and they will be here in 2 weeks."

"So?!" someone said

Medic stepped in "Look you don't know these guys as much as we do, we have been fighting these guys for our whole lives, they are the most evil group of dogs you will EVER meet"

Medic saw a mother with a litter of 4 pups around her.

"Hang on those guys Miss, these Deathlocks kill, no SLOUGHTER anyone, even pups and kittens... I've witnessed it, it's not pretty. The only reason they are only coming here is for land, territory, money... greed. I know their leader, probally the most evil being in this world. If you guys want to keep your town unburned and you guys still alive, then we need to prepare" Medic said as if he was mad at something.

"Medic's right, these guys show no mercy at all, mercy is the F-word to them, we need to at least show these guys who Nome really is, who's with us?" Sarge askd every dog and cat in town.

After a minuete balto stepped forward from te far back row. "I'll help! I've saved this town to many times to back off now" he called trying to reach the platform where Medic and Sarge were standing with Jenna trying to stop him... at least for now.

"If Balto's going for it, I am to" Kaltag somewhere in the middle rows.

"I am to!" yelled Star in the 3rd row.

Fianlly Kodi yelled "I am to, these guys attacked my best friend, and I'm not going to sit back sit on my ass all day!" he yelled jumping up to the platform and put himself next to his dad.

After Kodi said that, at once everyone wanted in, even all the females, Boris, Muk and Luk tried to get to the front to help.

The boiler room became a mad house of volenteers.

"SHUT... UP!!!!!!!!!!" Medic yelled.

Every one stopped dead in their tracks.

"OK, to volenteer you need to at least a year old, not pregnant, and under 15 years old, if your one of those 3, get'ya butts out of here. If you stay in this room, your in, if your out then get out... This is life threatning, you could die if you volenteer" Medic yelled so everyone heard.

All the pups left, some pregnant females, the mothers of the pups, and a lot of cowards left.

Kodi had noticed that Dusty had stayed "Dusty, why are you here, you should leave, you heard Medic, we could die doing this" he said conserned for her condition she's in.

"Kodi, I appreciate your consern, but your right, I can't sit on my butt while some gang tries to kill us all" she said

"Well, I can't control you, make your own desitions" he said

"Thanks Kodi... but what I don't get... why would you risk you life for me?" Dusty asked as



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December 03, 2009
Usa Male
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How could I resist man XD

But actually, the Italian Mafia in New York were just as famous as Al Capone in Chicago during the 1920s. Infact the Mob golden ages was from 1890-1941 (When America went ito the war). Infact Vito Corleone (The Godfather XP) was a real person and a real Don. Just the story exagerated (sp.) the story to make it more exiting.

The mafias that come into the story, are actually made up. Jeremah of the Enforcers was made up completely cuz their Irish, not Italian. Most of the Irish mobs went north into Boston, and if they were any Irish mobs in New York, they probally wern't that big. You'll learn more about all the canine mafia in part IV.:cool:

November 14, 2009
Usa
I KNEW you were going to have mentioned The Godfather in this!

May 24, 2009
Usa Male
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KT-- Hey thanks ^^

May 21, 2009
i d k who u r but i like ur story!!!!!!!! :)

April 11, 2009
Usa Male
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OMG, top 10, that'll be even better if it goes up, thanks you guys, it would've never made it to the top ten without you...

March 29, 2009
Usa Male
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Don't worry, I didn't have time. Part 4 WILL have 10X more, I promise

March 29, 2009
Usa
Great story but I thought there'd be more of Kodi and Dusty

March 13, 2009
Newzealand
nice fic,but there's just one small problem




SPELLING

March 13, 2009
Usa Male
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Well there is no spell check. I just remembered MS Word XDlol

March 03, 2009
Uk Female
Silvermoon family
Hurry!!! I need more Medi:P So Ill eat you if you dont hurrylol

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