all over the world travel for miles just to be here"I stopped as I got to a cobweb.
"I cant imagne why"He turned around to face me.His hot breath blowing in my face.He brushed the cobweb out of my way.
"Are you kidding?It's one of the most beautiful spots in the world"What was he going on about?How could this place be beautifule?We were now in a large enoughf spot to walk beside each other.In the middle of the spot was a pile of colored broken glass bottles.Balto walked up to the bottles and nudged them."The Polar Ice Caps"Was he crazy?How could they be The Polor Ice Caps?He pointed his chin to the light coming from a vent above us."The sun"
"Balto?"I said thinking he was mad.He tilted one of the bits of broken glass to the left and he said:
"And to the North"Suddenly the wall across from use was lit up with beautiful colors.It looked just like The Northern Lights.
"Balto,It's beautiful"
"Yeah...beautiful"He looked me in the eyes and I looked at him back.I could feel him getting closer and so was I.We lent our faces closer together.Suddenly we heared voices and we pulled away from each other.The voices were coming from above.We looked up and could see the Docter's foot over the vent.
"How is she docter?"asked my master.
"Not very well.She's suffering and I'm out of anti-toxen"replied the Docter.Rosie was going to die.The Docter had no medicine left.I felt hot tears run down my cheeks.I ran out from under the floor and I was now standing in the room me and Balto had enterd at first.Balto had followed me up.
"Im sorry Jenna,I shouldnt of taken you down there"
"No,Im glad you did"We heard a noise outside and suddenly the door slamed open.Steele lay on the floor with a row of sausages in his mouth.He stood up trying to get his dignity back.
"Hey Jenna"he said as he came over to stand beside and he pushed Balto out of the way."Why dont we share"he said nudging the sausages to me"I'll start at one end,you start at the other,and when we get to the middle..."he sniggerd.Balto nudged him.
"Leave her alone Steel"I saw the blazinf firnace behind Steele and had an idea.
"No,Balto it's ok."I moved closet to Steel.Balto got confused.I moved my eyes to look at the firnace and he understood.Balto sniggered."Wow Steel thats a very tempting offer"I kept moving closer to Steel and he began to move backwards getting closer to the fire in the firnace."But these days I prefer my meat cooked"Steel was right next to the firnace.His tail cot fire and he yelped.
"C'mon Jenna!"yelled Balto as we headed for the door.We were running out the door and suddenly I felt something heavy on top of me,I slammed to the ground.I looked around Steel was ontop of me and Balto.Balto pushed Steel of us and we went to run.We heard people behind us.Steel threw the sausages in his mouth at Balto and Balto was tangled in them,he couldn't move.A light shone on Balto.My master and the local butcher stood over him holding a lamp.
"Looks like Balto here got his way into your meat locker"said my master to the butcher."Good thing Steel was here to catch him"
"Might aswell give 'em to him seeing as I cant do anything with 'em because that mongrall touched 'em"and the butcher picked up the sausages and handed them to Steel.Steel took the sausages in his mouth and started chewing happily."Good boy Steel"and the butcher patted Steel's head.
"Get out!"yelled my master as he kicked some snow at Balto.Balto got up and ran away.I went to go after Balto but something was holding me back.My master was holding me by my red bandana."Lets get you home"As I walked passed Steel I gave him a steern look.He laughed.
3:The fastest Dog Wins
I woke up early the next morning to the sound of pawprints in snow.I looked up and Sylve was standing over me,Dixie beside her.Of course when I opened my eyes Dixie starts talking:
"Oh,Jenna,hurry,get up!"
"Why whats going on?"I asked confussed.
"Did you not here last night?Theres gonna be a race held to find the fastest dogs to be on the sleigh team to get the medicine!"What was she on about?
"No Dixie Im afraid I didnt"
"The kids in the Docter's need medicine and all the planes and trains are jammed.The dog sleghed team is the last hope"Oh!Rosie!Yes there going to get medicine to help her.Im sure Dixie's not intressded in the kids at all.She only whant Steel to win"And I think we all know Steel's gonna win"and she drewled.
"What are we waiting for?"asked Sylve.
"Come on lets go!"yelled Dixie.I got up and followed them to the starting line for the race.The start of the race was the same place where the end of the race that was on a couple of days ago.The dogs were to start here and to finish here.People and dogs crowded around,I also noticed Balto's goose friend.Balto!Where was he.I looked at the row of dogs at the starting line but no Balto.Steel was walking up and down the line inspecting the dogs.One of the dogs Star was getting tangled in his own legs.
"Looking for Balto?"asked Dixie.Of course Sylve butted in:
"I heard Jenna and Balto were cought in The Boiler Room together."
"No!"gasped Dixie
"Yes.And apperently they went in together and they came out together.And dont try to deniy it"she looked at me.
"Then I wont"I replied.She gasped:
"Im speachless".I suddenly heard commotion around me.I looked at the starting line and there was a new dog there-Balto.
"Balto!"I gasped.Suddenly the gun was fired and the dogs were off.Snow flung out behind the dogs as they ran.They ran past the cornor and I couldnt see anymore.
"When Steel catches him he's gonna give him such a beating!"said Dixie.
"Oh please"I said"Steel couldnt catch a cold in the coldest place in the world-Nome"and I laughed.Dixie and Sylve just looked at me in suprise.I never made jokes,I always took live way to seriously.But now with Balto....life seemed different.Steel heard that Balto was in the race and he came straight over to us.
"I suppose you had something to do with this?"he said at me
"I dont even know about it!"His face sneered.
"Hey Steel?"said Dixie"Guess what Jenna said about you?"she wouldnt"She said you couldnt get a cold in Nome"she did!Anything to get Steel's attention I guess,after all the joke was about him.He smilled:
"Jenna,if you were a cold I catch one every day"he laughed and went away.Dixie was mad.She was supposed to get the attention not me.Ha that will show her.
I could her the dogs coming now.There heavy phants filling the town.They were coming closer to the finish line and Balto was ahead!
"Go Balto!"I screamed.Balto finished first-no screams from any one.Steel walked over to Balto:
"What do you think your doing?"
"Look Steel I won fare and square.The fasted dog won"
"The fastest what?"and he laughed.Balto's eyes dropped.I walked over to them.
"Steel it dosnt matter what Balto is.All that matters is that the medicine gets through.Stop being such a glory hound!"as much as Steel hated it,he had to admitt I was right.
"Your right Jenna,I wasnt thinking about those kids.The important thing is that the medicine gets through,Your right."I walked away,as I did Balto smilled at me and I automatically smilled back.
As I was walking home I heard two local dogs speaking to each other,they had came the way I'd came.
"Did you see what Steel did to Blato back there?"said the black dog with white face to the ginger one.
"No Homer what happend?"asked the ginger dog curiously.
"Did you not even here it then,Burt?As soon as the humans came to look at Balto,Steel stood on his foot.Balto yelped and the humans were thought he was trying to bite them.They dont trust him to run on the team."Burt looked shocked and then relived.
"Good thing though.Imagne having that wolf-dog on a dog team."How could they be saying this?How could Steel do that to Balto?Poor Balto,he was the fastest he should be on the team.I was about to go back towards Balto's home but I was called by my master.
4:On Your Marks Get Set GO!
The dog team was leaving soon.The pathway out of Nome was lined with with banners and ropes to keep the dogs on the right path.The dogs were to run from Nome to Nanana.Who knows how long that will take them?I sat on the side lines with Dixie and Sylve.Dixie was drewling over Steel again.
"I just know the team will come back with the medicine.Jenna dont be worrying,they have Steel"said Dixie.Hmm...They have Steel.He's gonna stop at every lake so he can look at himself.The dogs were getting set up now.Steel was at the frount of the line of dogs getting his reigns on.Balto should be there.Balto!I looked around but he was no where to be seen.
A man shot a gun and the dogs were off.They down the bathway with people screaming after them.Rosie would of liked this.I hope they get the medicine,I crossed my paws.
That night I went to look in the Docter's window.Rosie was asleep in her bed.Her face was red and I could almost feel the warmth of her face even though I was outside.I had to keep my mind of Balto and Rosie was good at doing that,I was worried about her.
Days passed and no sign of Balto or the dog team and Rossie was getting worse.As I was walking to the Docter's I noticed the red lamp that should be lighting outside the post office off.It was supposed to be lighting if there was still hope for the dog team.Oh No!They were lost I knew it!Rossie was getting sicker and there was nothing I could do.I ran to the Docter's and looked in the window.Rossie was still in her bed,her face was red.She looked so hot considering she lived in Nome Alaska.I lay my head down on the window-sill and I noticed something strang.A familliar scent filled my nose.I looked at where my head lay,there were paw prints there.They lead down of the window-sill and down the path out of Nome.
"Balto"I whisperd.
5:The Bear,Lake And My Paw.
Emm...I'd rather not right this part because I dont like the fact of Balto getting hurt but I guess I kinda have to.
I was deep into the
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I didn't like it. It's such a rip-off of the opening scene in the
first Balto with artistic lisence taken. Seriously, that's plagurism
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oh sorry about that I didnt exactley know what the story was going to
be like so I just made it PG |
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I really enjoyed this story. It had some spelling errors, and one or
two of the lines don't quite seem to be said the way Jenna would say
them, but the plot and perspective balance that out. All in all, you
did a nice job on this. Very nice. But why the PG rating? I saw nothing wrong with it. |