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| April 13, 2009 | ||
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| No weapon can sever the soul from me |
I didn't like it. It's such a rip-off of the opening scene in the
first Balto with artistic lisence taken. Seriously, that's plagurism
(sp?). |
![]() | March 10, 2009 | |
oh sorry about that I didnt exactley know what the story was going to
be like so I just made it PG |
| March 10, 2009 | ||
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I really enjoyed this story. It had some spelling errors, and one or
two of the lines don't quite seem to be said the way Jenna would say
them, but the plot and perspective balance that out. All in all, you
did a nice job on this. Very nice. But why the PG rating? I saw nothing wrong with it. |