Interesting.

I liked this first version best, but THIS is ridiculous! And I have no clue what gender is which.

Lmao I loved it!

I like it! It's funny how you spelled Kodi backwards into Idok, LOL. I like the dirty one better, I'm a dirty girl, LMAO!

great story! haha, sounds familiar XD, must've been a pain to re-re-re edit, but it turned out great all the same... looking forward to more! (very creative name by the way, especially idok )

good job. this is one of your better stories of the 19 you have.

you left "he" in there twice. I read the original at fanfictionnow.com and I see why you edited it. If you want to check it out, its in the movie section, balto, page 2,title: buried secrets. Warning: graphic content. (unrated version).